File[Patrick's First Flash.swf] - (18 KB)
[_] [L] My first flash Patrick 1461786 How does it look? Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 1461788 >:( It looks like a dick! Work on where the dick and the balls connect. Seems to be a little... separated. And I don't really watch flaccid penises to much so I don't know how they move but, I would work on it. It kind of looks like it is banging its head against the ground.
>> [_] Anon 1461797 it's mute
>> [_] Anon 1461805 >># lol don't know how to add music
>> [_] Anon 1461808 >># For context, it's utter rubbish. :D But you show promise with animation, sometimes fluidity is key, and you're showing that you're capable of making good animations. But you should stick more detail into your frames. Like sticking that extra colour in to create the impression of shadow. Do you use a graphics tablet?
>> [_] Anon 1461841 >># when you figure out how to, add chiptune music and maybe make the background flash colors
>> [_] Anon 1461894 >># Seconding this. I'll be on the lookout for it, OP.
>> [_] G. D. !!k1u7swmD0lH 1461942 >add chiptune music Agreed. I look at this Flash, and something just starts playing "Turkey in the Straw" in my head. That's just me, though - I don't know if that sounds weird to anyone else.
>> [_] Anon 1461954 I fucking love it! MORE FLOPPY DICKS!
>> [_] Anon 1461961 I like your style, kid.
>> [_] Anon 1461962 i love how people seem to somehow be taking this seriously
>> [_] Anon 1461968 OP here, really glad you all seem to like it. I actually was originally going to try and get some audio in there but I figured it was too much hassle for a simple test, but now I think I'll improve this a little and send it on back in a day or so and see how you like it. Thanks for your comments!
>> [_] Anon 1461972 Needs seizure colors and the Benny Hill theme blasting Also, put a tophat and monocle on the dick