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[_] [H] LoZ Hentai Quest Zelda Handjob 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)03:50 No.1560043
It's a very short preview, but it is really worth checking out! I hope you enjoy it! Remember to
give feedback, opinions, and especially criticism. I can't make a great game if people don't tell
me how to make it better.
Blog:
http://4chanfdude.blogspot.com/
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)04:05 No.1560048
Certainly a promising start, I'll give you that. I'm really looking forward to the finished
product.
I really like the way you prepared the layout for the flash. It's non-intrusive, and the focus is
properly placed on Zelda. The perspective is great, and the illustrations are spot on to the
game. The music was a fitting choice, and I like the idea for your cursor.
It's rather off putting hearing the UGH UGH UGH UGH sound every second when Link is ready to cum.
Slow down the amount of sound effects, perhaps? A variety in handjob motions would be nice, and
the grip should be a little tighter on the shaft. Zelda merely staring seems a bit off as well.
Perhaps adding different facial expressions would fix that up. The pointer could also use a black
outline since it's tough to see exactly where the white little triangle is. Buttons on the corner
to adjust the quality and sound volume would be nice as well.
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)04:14 No.1560049
>>1560047
Thanks you, I really appreciate the advise. I planed on different faces and motions on Zelda for
each speed option (1,2,3), but I wanted to showcase my work so far. I'll be sure to add the
addition faces and movements on the next build (Opening, File Select, BZ from begging to Kokiri
Forest with Saria loop).
Ah, yes, the sound loops. I'll make sure to add variety and not the same UGH UGH UGH sound. It's
difficult to spread the sound, making sure it's not too quick, but making sure there is not a
long session of silence.
I'll be sure to work on the mouse outline. I think I can work out a sounds option, but I'm a bit
rusty on that, the same for the Quality option.
Again, I thank you for this criticism, it really did help the project along!
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)04:15 No.1560050
>>1560049
It was meant for
>>1560048
somehow it got mixed up
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)04:48 No.1560056
That was amazing, but yeah what
>>1560048
said
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)04:54 No.1560057
Checked the blogspot link, is there a place to download all the parts done so far?
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)04:55 No.1560059
Granted that he's just a kid, but holy cow does Link have a tiny dong...
Music could be a bit less loud, but otherwise very nice. It might be funny to have Navi interject
with a "Hey!" and "Watch out!" once in a while.
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)04:55 No.1560060
>>1560057
It's only a blog for news, updates, etc.
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)05:00 No.1560061
>>1560059
Thanks for replying.
About link's dong, I think I know a- wait, no let me stop right there...I'll think about it
I'll make sure to lower the volume a bit.
I'm not sure how Navi saying "Hey!" and "Listen!" during this part would work out, even if it is
humorous, I doubt people would want that.
>> [_] Dragoon 09/13/11(Tue)05:01 No.1560062
>>1560049
its good to finally see your work in action. it irked me to see you cut your last project with
ruto, i was really looking forward to it. any chance you can release your work with ruto too?
anyways back to the main flash, it looks good for the most part. i would like to see you possibly
implement being able to strip or fondle the girls as they blow you, but thats just personal
preference. it kinda sucks only seeing zelda's tits after the animations over.
the art is real good, and its pretty smooth, but as another said, links voice can get irritation.
it would be nice though to hear zelda giggling or atleast making some noise. i know this is just
a quick release to gauge reaction, so no big deal. so far so good, i cant wait to see malon,
saria, and especially ruto, do you plan on doing both kid and adult versions of all the
characters?
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)05:12 No.1560065
>>1560060
Right, I see that, but the blog mentioned a ruto scene, and I remember seeing some earlier scenes
too at one point, and I was wondering if there was still a place where those could be downloaded?
Btw great work so far, the play again screen was a nice touch!
As far as critique goes, the earlier suggestions were good, and I realize this is unfinished so
you may have plans for that already, but a few more options besides faster/slower (lick, suck,
etc.) would really make it jump from a fun loop to an interactive game.
Another idea that came to mind (because of that specific scene in the courtyard) might be hidden
easter eggs for clicking on something...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MaUCTYb1VtI
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)05:14 No.1560066
>>1560062
Well, there's some good and bad news on the Ruto segment. Good News: The project will include
Ruto. Bad News: I am working on LoZ HQ chronologically to Passage's Bad Zelda, which means Ruto
would be one of the last ones to do. Sorry about that.
On fondling with the girls, I'll be sure to add that option, however, I cannot do the same with
this scene (referring to Passage's Bad Zelda, which is going to be LoZ HQ's Plot and Structure)
The adult timeline is screwed with Passage's Bad Zelda plot. However I plan to maker LoZ HQ:
Adult Timeline after LoZ HQ, not right after LoZ HQ because I want to get on another series
before going back. It should be my 3rd Project, so please wait till then.
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)05:22 No.1560068
>>1560065
Sadly no, I deleted everything once I decided to redo the whole thing. Ah yes the additional
options with this particular scene, the thing is that I am following Passage's Bad Zelda comic.
TL;DR: Zelda offers herself if Link can manage to impregnate all the women in Hyrule. So she
won't be doing much until the very end. The game will be very interactive, I plan to do homage to
OoT with some similar aspects, it's not going to be Meet and Fuck, and really hope to make it as
fun as it is to play as it is to fap. Finally, oh baby, will there be Easter Eggs! I will reveal
to you one I'm planning on! Before clicking on Zelda, there will be an object (not giving what it
is), but on clicking on it will make Link fuck Princess Peach from the Mario series! Huzzah!
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)05:29 No.1560069
>>1560068
Sounds good, nice to see another quality creative flash in the works, definitely something to
look forward too!
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)05:44 No.1560072
Fuck yes! I was soo worried this was a dead projekt!
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)05:45 No.1560073
>>1560048
this pretty much covers it
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)05:55 No.1560074
>>1560072
I apologize for the long waits for the updates. I don't really post stuff on the blog as much,
though there really isn't anything to talk about. This project is very much alive, I am really
working hard on it
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)06:02 No.1560077
>>1560068
>TL;DR: Zelda offers herself if Link can manage to impregnate all the women in Hyrule
This is the greatest plot ever.
Impregnation is my fetish.
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)06:03 No.1560079
Looks good, the animation is amazing, can't wait for the final product
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)06:09 No.1560081
Needs more motion, how does Link even cum with this slight motion of her hand? Link should also
cum more in total, he's a healthy young lad.
>reads thread
... Keep at it, then!
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)06:11 No.1560082
>>1560072
Me too, glad he's sticking with it. God knows how many projects were presented and get canned.
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)06:14 No.1560084
>>1560081
Thanks, I'll make sure that I fix that. Does 2-3 cum shots seem relative enough? Well to answer
your first question, by the technicality of this game, this is Link's first sexual experience,
I'll make sure that he can handle a lot more later on.
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)06:17 No.1560085
TITS OR GTFO
>Sees the replay button
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)07:04 No.1560087
Oh wow, this is way better than expected
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)07:23 No.1560091
>>1560084
>Does 2-3 cum shots seem relative enough?
3 is quite good, any more can get distracting.
Be sure to remember to make his cock throb as he climaxes.
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)10:07 No.1560111
>dick aimed at zelda the whole time
>cum banks right at the last second
>somehow hits her eye
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)11:02 No.1560118
You're missing an intro where Link approaches Zelda, whips out his dick, and says "It's dangerous
to go alone! Take this."
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)12:14 No.1560120
The animation IS good, but I'd like to see more movement. The difference between "slower" and
"faster" should be more than just her hand moving faster... it'd be cool to see her getting more
into it, moving her hand up and down the cock more, changing facial expressions....
And yes, I agree with some of the other people that it'd be nice to see Zelda's tits if you want
to see them. Maybe even an option to get her to put the cock in her mouth or in between her tits.
But none of this should detract from the fact that what animation is done is VERY good and
detailed. It's got overwhelming promise.
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)13:24 No.1560134
>>1560118
Man, I lol'd when I read that.
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)13:55 No.1560142
Is there a place or a way to download the other flash files? (other than on 4chan)
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)14:28 No.1560147
www.frenzyflash.com
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)14:29 No.1560149
>>1560120
I will add an oral option to this scene. I have already started on making additional faces and
movements to the hand job. Thanks for replying.
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)14:31 No.1560150
>>1560147
???
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude !!ULUaCD61ikb 09/13/11(Tue)14:32 No.1560151
>>1560142
Sadly, no.
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)14:40 No.1560154
>>1560151
SWFchan, why not?
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)14:41 No.1560155
>>1560142
>>1560151
Actually, they'll always be enshrined on swfchan.
http://swfchan.com/20/98893/?341.swf
http://swfchan.com/20/99066/?341before.swf
http://swfchan.com/21/101007/?Scene1Loop.swf
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)15:34 No.1560158
>>1560043
More please!
>> [_] aNONYMOUS 09/13/11(Tue)16:57 No.1560184
>Moderatly animated
>Cums once
>LIck isn't too bad
5/10
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)18:14 No.1560196
>implying I want to see a man give a hand-job to another man
>> [_] Anonymous 09/13/11(Tue)18:18 No.1560198
Horrible.
