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[_] [G] Anonymous 11/10/11(Thu)20:12 No.1576842
WIP
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 11/10/11(Thu)20:17 No.1576845
Keep up the good work, looking forward to the finished product, brother.
>> [_] Anonymous 11/11/11(Fri)06:52 No.1576947
You may or may not take criticism, but I admire you making a flash.
I draw quite a bit myself and am eventually considering animating in flash.
May I suggest a few things for your flash.....
Get ahold of the 'animators survival guide', if you have not already. This will help you tons in
your animation efforts.
Try to make some of the animations seem less 'rigid' and a bit more lifelike. Overall, its not
bad as its WIP, but there's something I see with the legs/knees area that feels 'clunky'.
In fast anal sex, there seems to be a funny thing happening with the penis/anus where the anus
becomes visible during the thrust.
Overall, if I recall, this is your first flash. This is definitely pretty good for a first. I
think you just need to smooth out things in terms of it feeling 'natural', and you are on your
way!
>> [_] Anonymous 11/11/11(Fri)08:53 No.1576960
>>1576947
Thank you for taking the time to write all of that out, I appriciate constructive criticism.
The only real animation I would remotely concider done at this point are the first 3 or so, I
still want to ease them out, but at this point in time I'm mostly trying to focus on just making
everything sync up propperly. I'll focus on the small touches when im closer to having a finished
product.
Either way, thank you for your advice, and I'll be sure to look up the guide you mentioned
>> [_] Anonymous 11/11/11(Fri)09:16 No.1576964
>>1576960
You should be able to get ahold of the animator's survival guide through torrents. I have just
barely seen the first few lessons of it, and its truly mindblowing.
Once you watch just the very beginning, you will no longer look at animation the same, ever
again. It is truly the bible of animation.
>> [_] Anonymous 11/11/11(Fri)12:48 No.1576984
Fix that old lady vagina while your at it
>> [_] NameFag 11/11/11(Fri)13:55 No.1576992
>wiggle anal
I like it just for that, let alone everything else.
Keep working, make a satisfying climax animation and polish it up and you've got something
fappable.
