File: Teen Titans Hentai - Dovadude.swf-(306 KB, Hentai)
[_] Raven bangs beastboy so he stops playin skyrim Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)03:06 No.1772884
Just practicing some flash - Trying to get back in the loop of things. This is a joke I've wanted
to toy with for a while now. The only reason im making it is because I'm in hypersomnia mode
sleeping 15 hours a day and I need to fix that. Drank a big cup of coffee a few hours ago (1 PM)
and I'm forcing myself to be productive.
I'm not trying too hard with this flash. I just wanna make a shitty "took a dick to my knee joke"
... yep. all dat for execution amirite?
I'll share what I have. Maybe somebody would like to give me some tips for speeding the process
up. Or making little tweaks to make it look better. If theres anything i actually would - like to
put effort in this flash is maybe the colors.
I might get some voice actors / actresses eventually. I dont want to spend more than 10 - 15
hours on this though. Its been about three (3) already.
fritz the cat 3t4ggvzfdvxdcxvc4w4
yea
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)03:09 No.1772885
lol raven looks creepy
- OP
>u r creepy op
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)03:11 No.1772886
>OFFICIAL SCORING SO FAR:
original content +1
teen titans +1
potential fap-material +3
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skyrim shit -2
crudely drawn/animated (even if it is a sketch/concept) -1
arrow in the knee joke -28
overall score: -26 out of a possible 100
Good luck and god-speed, anon.
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)03:16 No.1772889
>>1772886
I aint zone brah. Its FBF niggs
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)03:17 No.1772890
>>1772886
>arrow in the knee joke -28
this
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)03:18 No.1772892
>>1772890
ITS ARROW TO THE DICK!
SAAAAARCASMMM!!!
DUUUUUUHHHHHH
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)03:19 No.1772894
my best piece of advice is to do the porn section first and make sure it looks good. REAL good.
when you're doing a mix between comedy and porn, if you can't properly balance the two -- you're
better off just doing one or the other. and since comedy is way easier to do, make sure the porn
looks good.
I cannot stress this enough, OP. there's potential here -- don't throw it away!
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)03:20 No.1772895
I really don't understand why you have the skyrim thing in the beginning. just show beastboy
playing the game from afar or something. don't waste time animating something like that
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)03:21 No.1772896
OP can you please use a tripcode?
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)03:22 No.1772897
nice work so far. any chance we can see starfire too?
>> [_] turtle1992 !spuWOFESGc 09/27/12(Thu)03:38 No.1772904
Great. Some positive feedback never hurts.
I just want to state this is really just for warm up & practicing in flash. I'm probably not even
going to claim this flash when its done. I don't have an alias or anything.
>>1772894
It wouldn't hurt for sure. Maybe I'll start working on that now.
>>1772895
I'm going to throw in sounds when I'm done. You'll hear Beast Boy in the background giving
comments towards the game. It's kind of like on the show. Whenever they were playing a game it
would start off with a close up of it then go out to third person.
>>1772896
My first trip code ever in the years I've been on this site. Surprisingly easy.
>>1772897
Thanks. I'm not sure where I could fit her. Any ideas?
The main plot was
>BB playing skyrim
>glitches
>gets angry and throws tantrum
>Disturbs Raven
>Raven annoyed decides to have sex w/ BB in return for him to stop playing
>> [_] i wanted my trip code to be lava lamp turtle1992 !spuWOFESGc 09/27/12(Thu)03:39 No.1772905
(I thought I'd have a more subtle transition originally but ehh. I just wanted to make an awkward
flash)
>Confronts him
>No way
>Some segway into beast boy making her wear that stupid iron helmet
>idk he bangs her in the knee
>legs break and fall off
>shouting
>he turns into a dinosaur / dragon
>gets on the floor
>does the
you know...
I'm up for ideas though 100%. I'll probably be working on this for another 5 hours until i gotta
go to school
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)04:44 No.1772927
Please color it in before you post again. It takes like 5 seconds to use the fill tool and makes
it look 100x better.
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)05:05 No.1772933
you can't really expect us to give you much feedback with these scribbles.
if you want real critique and ideas, prove to us you're actually capable of doing something great
-- don't just show us a shoddy concept.
show us your talents.
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)08:58 No.1772979
You can have it start with BB and the TV, the screen being blocked by his back, the Dragonborn
does the Force Shout, which disturbs Starfire. That way you know what he's playing and don't have
to animate the peasant and dragon.
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)09:32 No.1772981
>>1772892
no dumbass, its dick to the knee. get it right
>> [_] turtle1992 !spuWOFESGc 09/27/12(Thu)12:42 No.1773024
>>1772927
Good point. But coloring takes up some time. I might end up doing some tiny amounts of shading. I
need lineart to do that.
>>1772933
I gotcha. Well tonight I should have a good portion of it done. I'm defiantly not spending my
weekend working on this. This is just a warm up for something else. Non H* though.
>>1772979
Good idea. I may do that. I still would like to show the gameplay though. I understand how choppy
it looks. I'll clean it up a bit soon enough.
I noticed you said starfire. I only have one way to include her. In the end I'll throw in "On the
next episode" - I'll have cyborg or robin w/ her and make a transformers joke. STARSCREAM.
aoawhaowhaoh. I'll word it better. Or maybe someone else can...
>> [_] turtle1992 !spuWOFESGc 09/27/12(Thu)12:48 No.1773025
thanks for the feedback. I watch the animation i posted myself and i'm like what the fuck is this
shit.
If ANYONE wants to throw in dialogue or any ideas I'm down. This project isn't too personal. Same
w/ voices. I could make them myself or use microsoft sam for both of em. Eventually I may post on
/b/ or /co/ (prolly not /b/ lol) if there are any voice actors/tresses who wanna just spit a
bunch of lines and put it on soundcloud for me. I'd give em credits in the end and link to there
site or w/e. I still don't know what I'm going to do about authoring this though. I dunno if I'd
want this on my resume you kno?
imgur.com/L2PRe
imgur.com/L2PRe
imgur.com/L2PRe
>> [_] Anonymous 09/27/12(Thu)14:31 No.1773060
I see no sex scene, just raven and then a loop.