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[_] [H] Straight Shota request filled! Brown on boy Iyae 1127360 So NotBanana reminded me of an important concept: Use reference! I was able to find something close for the woman, but unable to find something for the boy Eitherway, enjoy. I believe the request was a brown chick ontop, boy on bottom. C&C welcome as always. Can't improve if I don't know whats right/wrong.
>> [_] Suika !IbukiozMj2 1127437 It looks like his phallus is brown.
>> [_] Giant !uqReqKm5Zk 1127471 Perhaps a climax function? More facials expressions as well.
>> [_] Anon 1127491 yeah, a few more animations
>> [_] Anon 1127495 sucks, animation sucks
>> [_] Anon 1127500 Wow, that was a fast turnaround. I circled the things I changed: Her right arm: I couldn't change this since it looks fine in the still image, but it's just animated a little funny. Her left arm: The fore-arm is TINY compared to the part after the elbow. His foot: It could use a little rotation so it doesn't seem like it was stuck in a Japanese foot-binding shoe D: My MS paint skills can't fix it, oh well. His right arm: Just a little less of a crease. Otherwise, wow, great job. - ms paint guy
>> [_] Anon 1127503 >># http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/3276/ aaasdfsfffff.jpg forgot my link
>> [_] Anon 1127529 The Torso is very undefined. Needs curves.
>> [_] Iyae 1127530 >># Hm, that's a good plan, faces are a bit stiff. In my next one I shall add more facial animation. And god damn, that's a good idea... Maybe put in a money shot in my next one. Actually, yeah, I think I'll do that. Fuck yeah. >># Oops, my bad, thought I was just darkening it a bit to make it seem wet. Guess I overdid it eh? >># They see me trollan', they hatin' A huge list of flaws/defects will deter me more than this :3c >># The elbow did bother me aswell, its as if I made that area too thick (probably did) where the upper arm meets as too thin, giving it an odd proportion. When I did his food I did stuggle to find a view (had no ref. for him) so that was what I cam up with. It was close enough. And the fold in his arm was a bit much, I see it now. Now then, For the my animation... WHAT SHALL IT BE?
>> [_] Anon 1127532 >># Human/furry mix
>> [_] Anon 1127542 Few speculations from an Anon flash artist: Her torso looks too "square". The torso should have more of a pear and/or hourglass shape to extenuate her curves. The biggest issue is underneath her LEFT armpit. You can see her torso is virtually a straight line and it looks terribly awkward. ...
>> [_] Anon 1127543 >># lolusrs? >># I'll make a note to watch my torso detail for the next. Thanks for the reminder.
>> [_] Anon 1127546 ... There's also too much space between her head and her chest. If you look at yourself in the mirror and compare the distance between your nipple (assuming you're a male) and your chin while standing up straight, you'll see what I mean. Her left hand doesn't stay on her thigh when she slides. Her right eye is too small, and her mouth is too far on the left side of her face. I understand "animu" proportions are taking place her so you may feel that you can justify this but I personally feel they are awkward. This a decent start; not just in this particular flash but in future flashes as well. If you decide to ditch this project, just keep all these things in mind so you will not make the same mistakes as last time. Good luck.
>> [_] Anon 1127547 This woman has no fucking hips. She looks like a post-op tranny.
>> [_] Iyae 1127551 >># >># Nice list of things. I'm not continuing this project but I will very much keep these things in mind. I didn't even notice that I didn't keep her hand moving with her thigh as she moved. So things I've learned thus far: Watch the size of of limbs so they match Make sure everything has an animation, no matter how small Watch bodily curves, as I was making them too square >># Hm, you think that? I don't perticularly see it, but if someone can point it out for me I'd be appreciative. Thanks again for everyones help. One day I shall be able to provide grand porn for all, huzza! Also folks, still need an idea for next project So far what was pitched was only Human/furry mix.
>> [_] Anon 1127561 >># It's hard to point out the hips - they seemed fine to me, but I can see how they look a little lacking. As for suggestions, uhhhhhhhh uhhh uhhhhhh. I thought about a hot librarian after the library closes, but I think most people find librarians un-sexy.
>> [_] Anon 1127563 >># Not furry, please. What sort of projects are you doing now? I haven't been keeping up with /f/
>> [_] Anon 1127564 >1127360 Always happy to help, BTW do you 30sec drawing with posemaniacs every day? I do, and it helps me ALOT.
>> [_] Anon 1127567 >># I do actually! Its alot of fun, I only finish completly about 1 out of every 50 of so though... haha >># I do mostly anything, but I have a heavy preference to Shota, straight shota, loli, tentacle rape, etc. Those types of things >># Librarian / student sounds really fun actually, that's at the top of my list so far
>> [_] Anon 1127569 >># Combine all your preferences in one
>> [_] NotBanana 1127570 >># Fuck I forgot to put my name in >.<
>> [_] Anon 1127571 >># Please not furry. A boy with cat-ears, and possibly a tail would be acceptable, but paws or a nose or any other features is sort of crossing a line. There's already enough furry shit on here, don't take away our chance for quality SS.
>> [_] Anon 1127573 >># The funny thing is that if you show a random guy on the street a girl with fake cat ears, he goes "damn. sexy." If you show that to someone who's been on the internet, he goes "FURRY" (Disclaimer: Not a furry, I just think that's odd) >># Oh god. That would be hilarious, but impossible.
>> [_] Anon 1127575 >># A tentacle woman analy tentacle raping a boy who is raping a loli? That seems a bit too in depth haha. >># Ah so it was you, I was confused and thought you were the other guy >># Unless its requested that this boy has cat ears and a tail I probably wont add it in (More shit to animate = fffffuck that)
>> [_] Anon 1127576 >># I was thinking shota using tentacle monster to restrain loli while raping her.
>> [_] Anon 1127577 I'd like to personally request no loli :X
>> [_] Anon 1127579 In a library.
>> [_] Anon 1127580 >># Loli can be somewhat furry.
>> [_] Anon 1127584 >># I'd like to personally request you shut your goddamn mouth.
>> [_] Anon 1127587 >># And that you shut your goddamn whore mouth I'm leaving in a few minutes, please 1-up me before I have to go