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[_] [L] Feedback please Coolguys !eNwncubcDk 1477547 Here's a flash I'm working on. I'd appreciate some constructive criticism. The monkey gets attacked by a bulding-robot. Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 1477568 it's shit
>> [_] Anon 1477572 It's shit.
>> [_] Anon 1477574 Well, it's pretty raw. Needs a lot of work. It would be nicer with more interaction between the monkey and the robot. I can't tell they are fighting. Also, I wouldn't know the blocky face was a robot if you didn't tell me (I wasn't even sure it was a face). You should make it clearer that the building transforms into a robot, and make it clearer that the robot is attacking the monkey. The perspective shifting before the robot was revealed was a little off, but it was interesting. The monkey was interesting too, it would be nice to see it move or show more emotion. (reacting to the robot, or maybe the banana.) Oh, I liked the paralax shift in the cityscape opening shot. You have a long way to go, but that's a start. Hope that helped! (and um... isn't NASA from America, not UK?)
>> [_] Coolguys !eNwncubcDk 1477577 >># Thank you! Your comment is appreciated. I plan to make the monkey look scared and be chased. I'm first completing the building turning into a robot. The NASA uk was an inside joke.
>> [_] Anon 1477578 Was a bit a waste of my time but you could work on the transitioning. to be honest though i had no clue what was going on so apply yourself on the art a bit more.
>> [_] Anon 1477579 >># >inside jokes being used outside of social circle they were formed in >nope.jpg
>> [_] Anon 1477582 YEEEAAAAHH IM DRIVING DOWN THE ROAD...
>> [_] Coolguys !eNwncubcDk 1477586 I'll be sure to make a fight scene. I'll aim to make it clear whats going on.
>> [_] Anon 1477595 learn to art
>> [_] Anon 1477732 try not to make it shit
>> [_] Messed up :@ 1477734 like my name say's it