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[_] [H] Beta Jay Girlbot Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655009 This was back when I was modelling her. NO hair, white skin, and Eyes are not so scary? maybe? Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 1655012 The eyes are much better on this. She looks like she has much much more emotion. I can tell she's enjoying all those dicks. Also nice work on the jizz and inflation. I think these pictures really highlight what you have done. Great job!
>> [_] Anon 1655014 >># Lots fo work can be done with the anatomy and how the vagina looks. As well as the nipples and the hands. One thing I don't think I have pointed out is the size of her eyes. I really like them. Some people have problems with eye size on some of their characters, but her eye size works well with the rest of her face and definitely gives of a stylistic look. Also, this skin tone is much better I must admit.
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655016 Thanks.. I think the low lighting with the glow makes her eyes appear eerie. The eyes are the same, just minus the modeled lashes.
>> [_] Anon 1655019 can you lose the weird dots on the face?
>> [_] Anon 1655020 >># I think I know why you think that. Her pupils are completely dilated. Perhaps if you showered more Iris and less pupil that would normalize the look in her eyes?
>> [_] Anon 1655022 >># I'd leave the freckles for now. As he refines and tweaks things on her body, they will either naturally evolve with her, or stay the same.
>> [_] Anon 1655029 Dude, her bald head kind of freaks me out.
>> [_] Anon 1655031 >># It's so much of a fuck making hair that actually fits the character. And rendering the hair.... Fuck don't even get me started on that shit. You'd leave it out too if you knew.
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655032 Yeah anatomy. I didn't want to look real, I wanted a toon like vijayjay but that's not what I truly want.. Besides I don't think I could make it look real at my skill level. Pre-Renders compliment her better overall, so far :( no freckles I don't think I can tweek this model to actually make a major positive changes, sadly ( beside colors and such. When I do major, more noticible changes it will most likely be the next From-Scratch Model.
>> [_] Anon 1655033 >># Don't need to give her hair, I never said she needed hair. She could have a helmet or something. Just to cover that fucking egg head.
>> [_] Anon 1655035 >># Ah, well nvm then. Guess you don't spend much time looking at her head anyway.
>> [_] Anon 1655038 >># Ya I figured you wouldn't be doing major changes. Well, unless this was like a major character that meant something to you. his character would be nice to appear in something later though. Good to have a set of Boned characters to draw from. Have any ideas on your next project?
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655040 She has hair, just not here because it was a very old Work-In-Progress. So I didn't make hair for her yet. Also, Yes, Hair is a pain in the butt >># Her eyes are not fully dialated but I know what you mean. I can see that could be a factor. I'll look into it, no pun intended
>> [_] Anon 1655049 Eyes are A LOT better this way. I'm not expecting a screamer anymore. :P
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655052 >># I plan to do alot with this character, Handys, BJ, DP 4ways... blah blah blah. Unfortuantely the current character is not very fixable, but she is all I have, so I'm gonig to use her, in animations. The next one is going take more time to work on, I have drawn a design of her. but she is along way from anything.
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655053 Just wondering if anybody who saw this before now >># notice she was bald?
>> [_] Anon 1655054 >># Cool, I hope to see the character in due time! As far as this little lady is concerned, I do have a couple things you might be able to add. On the nipple, there are no indents in it, where you'd usually see . I think you should add some indentations into them. I'll post more if I can think of them. >># I noticed in the robot sex animation she was bald. Although it was hard to see, so I can imagine how people missed it. Just goes to show that you're diverting people's eyes to all the right locations. Hehe
>> [_] Anon 1655055 >>#
>> [_] Anon 1655060 I'm sorry, OP, but this character model is a hot mess of ugly. She looks like Megaman after a post-op sex change. For the body, I would lengthen the legs and shrink her head. Go for more realistic proportions. Right now, she looks like a midget or dwarf. Give her a cool color to her skin like purple or light blue. That will give her a more robotic feel over a girl with cyber implants and/or armor. The face is the real problem with her. I'd drop the nigger lips. Go for something thinner. Get rid of the dots. They look like unpopped zits. Shrink the nose to a point or bump. Flatten the sellion of the nose. It's unnecessary and distracting. Get rid of the nostrils. Robots don't need nostrils anyway. Think more cute & girly over something whorish.
>> [_] Anon 1655062 >># Continued... The eyes. Jesus, those eyes! The look like muppet eyes, which is far from sexy as you can get. Eyes are windows to the (silicon) soul, so go for something more expressive and human. I saw the hair on the previous posts: Instead of individual strands, I wold go for something solid & helmet-ity in style like a pageboy cut, beehive hairdo, or Leia style buns. It will enforce the robot-ness of her look and be a hellva lot easier to animate. Not being a troll, just being brutally honest in my critique.
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655064 that's funny, I actually thought about it, while I was building her. I've seen Inverted nipples, but I haven't seen an indented nipple, other than animated. Frankly I wasn't looking hard, just google "nipples" and look at pics. I've seen what appears more like a crease. The nipple isn't isn't flat, but it's very faint, However I can't ignore something that has been mentioned twice, so I'll note it, and dip it in more.
>> [_] Anon 1655068 >># >># I hope you realize he isn't going for realistic. This is a stylized character. With that in mind, everything that you said is basically invalid because style isn't something defined by anyone except the author. Your stuff is great, and your first attempt was very, very good. I can't wait to see how you do in the future.
>> [_] ofuckwy !/IPyUlClgk 1655069 >># I saw her lack of hair before, Also want to say really good job here :) I really hope you do well with this >># I can understand you are not a troll but he has said he wants her to be cartoony and unrealistic so most of your suggestions would ruin that
>> [_] Anon 1655073 >># Damn, I ninja'd you so hard just now. I gotta apologize.
>> [_] ofuckwy !/IPyUlClgk 1655075 >># XD wow we said pretty much the exact same thing, besides some wording the only difference is I touched on noticing her lack of hair.
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655076 >># I know you're not trolling, You Critism is very constructive, and I appreciate it. All I can say, the next model, will be more pleasing. But, that's a long ways away.
>> [_] Anon 1655077 >># >># Oh I got that he wants cartoony, but there are plenty of stylized gals out there that are very "womanly" without being realistic. As it is, Girlbot looks more like a frumpy dwarf rather than a Nickelodeon cartoon MILF-cake with Hartman hips a' swinging.
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655079 Hey ofuckwy,it's nice to show you my fancy new tripcode. :P
>> [_] Anon 1655081 >># Well, you also have to remember he said he doesn't want to change this too much, so barring the fact that you might even be right, he wouldn't be doing most of those things. hehe
>> [_] ofuckwy !/IPyUlClgk 1655083 >># Ya it looks super fancy to, so long and random XD just a good way to make sure people dont try and pass off as you
>> [_] Tambur !7ANbLW5sL6 1655084 >># >># >># >># >># >># >># >># >># >># previous posts. Alright, I think I'll start using a tripcode too, because this crap is getting confusing for me too.
>> [_] ofuckwy !/IPyUlClgk 1655086 >># Swag, tripfags are just being born here all the time, its so beautiful.
>> [_] Auri8 !!mIxwlLy+2Rh 1655088 >># I'll definitely say Her face will be more inviting (Smoother, less rounded face,with almond shape eyes, etc) but if your looking for anime cute style, you'll most likely be disappointed. The overly disproportion ratios will be maintained. I'm not a fan of super long legs, but longer legs are on the table. Solid hair was conceived but I sucked at it, So i'll give it another go. However, like it stated before, a LONG ways away. Again your Insights are always welcomed by me.
>> [_] Tambur !7ANbLW5sL6 1655090 >># Uh oh wrong password tripcode. ARE YOU THE REAL ONE!?
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655092 I'm my own enemy :( yeah that's me. OP Here :P
>> [_] Anon 1655093 >># For a second there I already thought you had a reputation assassin, before you've even gotten a reputation. :P So let's see, what do you think your next post on /f/ will consist of? And how far off do you think it'll be?
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655097 not H (boo! none of it really is). If it bothers you I have mentioned before that i don't have alot I showed her as white,so now you get to she her as Delta (Black skin tone).
>> [_] Auri8 !!4zZeIsp9mDX 1655108 >># sorry for wait :(
>> [_] Anon 1655110 I'd also suggest either reducing the size of all of her facial features, or increasing the size of her head. With her eyes and mouth being that huge, while cartoony, looks very busy. Like they don't have quite enough space.
>> [_] Anon 1655112 ITT: samefags >This is really horrible to be so popular...or isn't?
>> [_] Anon 1655113 THE EYES ARE HORRENDOUS
>> [_] Anon 1655221 My dick actually retreated back inside me in fright. What the fuck was that thing?