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[_] I'm making this game, critique welcome layDecloth 1841404 last one kinda screwed up, 4chan doesn't like preloader. it's not finished at all, I plan to make her able suck your dick, turn her around bend her over and fuck her from behind and pushing her to the ground and fuck her from front. the cloth and person will also be better animated. tell me what you think. continue or scrap? Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 1841406 So you can unbutton, open blouse, and pull down her pants and panties only? Or is there more.
>> [_] Anon 1841417 animation is smooth and nice. looks like you got a bit of work to do but looks promising. also add some anal play.
>> [_] Anon 1841419 to easy, make it frustrating and complicated as others do. Looks promising tho.
>> [_] Anon 1841427 >># Don't listen to this fuckhead. Did superdeepthroat need a hard mode to get it's attention? OP, keep going.
>> [_] Anon 1841434 Go for it OP. It looks promising
>> [_] Anonymouse 1841435 >># she reacts if you rub her
>> [_] Anon 1841448 >># Ah, either way, it's turning out great. Keep it up. The art is a bit rough, but I can past beyond this as it's still early in it's work as you say. Smooth out the work, add as you planned on doing and I think it'll turn out alright. I'll be looking out for updates. Good job, OP.
>> [_] Anon 1841451 Throw various fetishes in it, but make them optional. I don't like futa, but have it as a side menu option. Likewise, i like footjobs, so add a scene for that, but make it optional, so people that are grossed out by it don't have to see it. Fetishes can make a game very well rounded.
>> [_] Anon 1841479 Would you like someone to help you with the art? Or at least provide the art for you? I don't want to insult you, but dear god is that awful looking.
>> [_] OP 1841481 >># show me what you got! In my defense this is basically just sketching to see if people would like this kind of thing, I think I spend 10-15 minutes drawing the body. you still might be much better than me so I would be interested in seeing what level of art you have to offer.
>> [_] Anon 1841484 it may be personal preference, but i'm not liking the "OMG I'm uncomfortable" look she gives you while you undress her. As to not spoil anyone else's taste, multiple mood selection maybe? you know, weather or not she's into it. A lot of H Games are to linear with that kind of thing, maybe you can break the mold. Also, what would be cool is an option to slide off the clothes/ or tear them off (actually tearing) and some toys maybe? tweak the interaction ability indications to be more obvious. a subtle tweak of a finger is kinda hard to spot while moving the cursor. overall, good stuff so far OP. I look forward to seeing the progression.
>> [_] Anon 1841486 >># If you are really serious about input, you should go on Newgrounds. Yes Newgrounds sucks, but you are more likely to get more than 25 replies from there. /f/ is quite unpredictable in that aspect you may get 90 replies or zero. All kinds of people post(ed) here; from Zone to Xenon, RockCandy to AnonymousD.
>> [_] yes to multiple mood selection. OP 1841489 >># actually I was thinking of ways to select her mood or, what she (you in reality) was into. I was thinking of starting the game in an elevator, and depending on which floor you choose you get a different mood on the girl.
>> [_] Anon 1841490 Girl looks a little too plain. Make her a redhead with a different hairstyle, maybe?
>> [_] OP 1841492 >># maybe I'll use both, because of newgrounds comment rating system, they are not always entirely honest about what could be fixed, here on 4chan I'm sure I'll get every opinion that anyone would have about the game.
>> [_] Anon 1841497 >># Well, that makes perfect sense. Good luck with this project. You might want to reconsider the other Anon's proposal on the Art department.
>> [_] Anon 1841501 smooth out the person >remove that fat shit on her legs
>> [_] Anon 1841502 >># You could always drop some cash and find an artist who will do some commission pieces. I'm sure some cash-strapped porn doodler will be all too happy to cut a deal if you give them a bit of credit. It helps you with your animation and it helps give them a place to show off their artwork.
>> [_] OP 1841503 >># well I already asked him to show me his abilities, because this would be much easier with someone to do the graphical part. believe me, animating and programming takes a lot of time already, having to do all the drawings too is just practically demotivating.
>> [_] Anon 1841524 Hello op maybe i can help you out with the art. its funny but im working on a similar project and i have the art but no programing, send me an email and ill show you my work. MadsWorkShop@hotmail.com have subject marked as /H/.
>> [_] Anon 1841525 >># http://i.imgur.com/2WoZj.png Here's a sketch I attempted to do. I've been nearly comatose for the past 3 days, so I'm trying to get back into the swing of drawing again. Then again I never really had any reason to draw in the first place. I'm far from skilled, I've got a lot to learn, anatomy being one thing for sure.
>> [_] Anon 1841530 Remove the ability to redress her, gets annoying when exploring your options of UNDRESSING her
>> [_] Anon 1841540 >># This guy looks like he has promise. shop around OP, and don't be afraid to vent frustrations. Some people are very appreciative of good artists who keep in touch with their fan-base.
>> [_] Anon 1841559 >># p3d0 mode ftw.
>> [_] Anon 1841565 So tell me. Is it supposed to be rape?
>> [_] Anon 1841589 well hear you go op this is a little chibi, but i can change my style if need. plus she all ready done in flash and is broken up accordingly into layers. let me know what you think. http://madmurdox.imgur.com/all
>> [_] Anon 1841590 am I the only one who cant even make it throught the loading screen? Mine just goes beserk each time.
>> [_] Anon 1841620 >># Superdeepthroat is also complete ass, so at least your comparison is relevant in that respect. I posted in the other one and I'm not repeating myself here. Go read that one.
>> [_] Anon 1841627 Shes to cute to undress. Fix plz
>> [_] Anon 1841643 >># >dislikes super deep throat Unless you're planning on making this a flash that appeals to homosexuals, I would recommend ignoring this "guy"'s advice.