File: Valentine the Vampire.swf-(4.42 MB, 640x450, Loop)
[_] OC Anon 2087520 this is my first flash animation, this will be the loop for the menu of a game i will be making for a future school project. i know they will think it's creepy but it looks good in my eyes
>> [_] Anon 2087540 Some thoughts: The music is nice, but if this is for a school project you're going to need rights to use it. I like the contrast between the character and the inked background, but depending on how you got the background it could be hard to get access to more. If you made it though, that's awesome. The fangs should never go down to different lengths. The animation of the hair could do some work.
>> [_] Anon 2087569 That looks like my dead ex-girlfriend. Holy Shit OP. Died in a car accident.
>> [_] Anon 2087587 >># thanks for the feed back, the background is from jamie hewllet the animator from gorillaz, and there's a cupple more drawings of pine trees he did,will probably use them in the game, and your right this could use some more frames, about the rights for the song and background i'm not looking to sell it or anything so i think it wouldnt make that mutch deal.
>> [_] Anon 2087591 >># Schools tend to make big deals out of that kind of thing. I would tread lightly around copyright.
>> [_] Anon 2087601 >># in this case this is a cover of the XX song by the gorillaz, they don't own the rights to it, it's not actually their song.
>> [_] Anon 2087609 looks like you stole it from a marceline fantumblr or something i.e. it looks like shit.
>> [_] Anon 2087625 >># They don't own the recording rights but they do own the composition rights.
>> [_] Anon 2087629 >># Or rather, the other way around.
>> [_] Anon 2087674 >># Additionally, using their music for flash videos tends to be a big no, usually because of plagiarism.
>> [_] Anon 2087687 Totally not a Marcilene recolour