File: AP.swf-(125 KB, 650x490, Loop)
[_] Critique Please Anon 2241748 It's a simple loop animation. There's plenty of spots to work on, but I'd like to know how it's coming along as it is now. Hopefully I can get a cleaner version posted tomorrow.
>> [_] Anon 2241762 >OC of any kind, ever Godspeed you pervert.
>> [_] Anon 2241776 Dude it's great. Honestly the art is great if not simple, not to say that simple is bad. Anyways, keep this quality of art and animation and expand it into a full fuckfest and you could have something magical here.
>> [_] Anon 2241778 I like it
>> [_] Anon 2241779 Holy shit. Since when did /f/ have captcha?!?! Don't mean to be off topic but it just took me by surprise.
>> [_] Anon 2241782 That there’s some good in this world, Mr. Frodo. And it’s worth fighting for.
>> [_] Anon 2241798 Dead eyes. You might want to angle them down a bit. If you're feeling really ballsy, you can try making them move to keep focus on the dude's pelvic bone.
>> [_] Anon 2241804 Better than alot I've seen and better than anything I could do. But I will say the tweening is noticeable on the head in the form of slight smooshing and the angle of the breast is too sharp for my liking. But don't let my criticism get you down, it is not my type of porn but I will say many will fap to this if it is as you say incomplete. Jolly good show OP, Jolly good.
>> [_] Anon 2241807 Her nipples seem kinda high up
>> [_] Anon 2241813 Her boobs are coming out of her shoulders.
>> [_] Anon 2241817 The boobs are a little weird, and the face looks stiff and unfocused, but other than that, it looks great. inb4 Zone 2.0.
>> [_] Anon 2241825 I can tell that her face is all one object that you're warping. Break it up into parts and vary your line widths so it doesn't feel so dead.
>> [_] Anon 2241827 >># Oh, and I understand that you want to get a good shot of her tits, but they're too high up. On an adult the base of the breasts is about one head length below the chin. On a child it will be slightly higher, relative to the head, but that's still a good starting place. Maybe re-frame the animation to get this right.
>> [_] Anon 2241836 Boobs too high Too large next movements, she looks like potato knish at one point. otherwise it looks alright i think
>> [_] Anon 2241839 I second the boobs issue. The eyes are drawn nice, but moving/focusing eyes is a very nice detail if you can add it. If she would look up at his face or down or blink it would add to the realism.
>> [_] ℛℯℳ¤ !PHANTOM2V2 2241841 >https://www.dropbox.com/s/8ohrbg6f27fax t9/LoliCritique.jpg I just picked out a few things i noticed. I really like your art style, and overall this thing looks amazing.
>> [_] Anon 2241895 Holy shit dude. Are you the guy who did that Ruto animation? If so mad props.
>> [_] Anon 2241947 Thank you guys for the info, I'll be sure to work on the adjustments!
>> [_] Anon 2241954 Movements are a bit jerky, try to make the motion more fluid.
>> [_] Anon 2241967 >># sounds? hwere?
>> [_] Anon 2241985 sauce
>> [_] John Moses Browning 2241992 I could watch this for a long time but she doesn't blink and this would scare the fuck out of me. Maybe you can put a speed regulator in your loop so we can change speed. Everything else like perfect in my eyes