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[_] Anon 2612482
>> [_] Anon 2612491 Not bad, the art style is kind of a turn off. Is this a rough draft, or will the art look like that in the finished project, too?
>> [_] Anon 2612541 THANK YOU OP
>> [_] Anon 2612552 Please tell me there is lasaga in this swf

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[_] dont watch after the blowjob part Anon 2604732 it's finally out but it gets very bad after the first cum scene. you wouldn't want to see this again. Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 2604763 >># wat. you lied. that was amazing. I only have one point of criticism tho. In the final scene she looks a little...TOO realistic. Maybe give the tits some lift or give her a slimmer waist. I get that he might have a certain bias for that specific appeal, but it doesn't hurt to use storytelling to it's fullest. When you're in a porn fantasy, you want people to fap. Not to question their ethics on beauty standards. Add some extra sex appeal ya wuss. Otherwise, solid 8/10.
>> [_] Anon 2604771 >># >this guy I forget sometimes just how utterly delusional the virgins of 4chan are.
>> [_] Anon 2604777 >># but thats what makes the mom so hot. not everyone has the same sexual preferences as you do. I love the beauty mark, i love her tired looking face, her roundish hips, her tied up hair. honestly though i forgot this faggots name but he did a pretty spot on job on making the mom extra hot. The only one who looks kinda gay as fuck is the kid, but even then who really cares. my only complaint so far is that I cant really tell when a scene will be static or not, also how long it will go for or if it will loop. Some kindve indicator maybe?
>> [_] Anon 2604780 >># >m-muh perfect anime babes Virgin confirmed.
>> [_] Anon 2604796 >># >don't watch after the blowjob part you never heard about reverse psychology, do you? I've watched and, personally...it's good. It's making me remember about the time I fucked my mom. I'm really feeling dizzy and disgust. incest/10
>> [_] Anon 2604799 >># >># Yes; because this is a real woman who we are going to go chat up after we clean our dicks off. Muh realizm
>> [_] Anon 2604802 the intimal lips to cock part/cock going in mouth could be better, but the actual animation is amazing. and i will admit the art style gets much more detailed as the flash goes on, but that's just the artist improving as the flash goes on, which looks weird, but honestly after the first read through i just skip to the bj to see if he added any new shit.
>> [_] Anon 2604804 >># >it's finally out It's been out for a while. It's not done either. I don't even.
>> [_] Anon 2604818 >she spits in the sink and gargles mouthwash after Now that is a classy lady
>> [_] Anon 2604819 I always ignore this before because the first scene's art but holy shit, that mom is so cute.
>> [_] Anon 2604837 >># greentext nao
>> [_] Anon 2604847 >># 2classy4me
>> [_] Anon 2604886 >># >to be concluded that means the next update will finish it! Its happening!!
>> [_] Anon 2604891 >that fucking ejaculation dance

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[_] [H] Bringer 2598540 ITS OUT
>> [_] vipper !XIxc6BpKnU 2598547 HA HA YEAH
>> [_] [H] Bringer 2598554 >># yeah came out this morning, got the email and was insta thrilled
>> [_] Anon 2598557 today is a good day
>> [_] Anon 2598558 >># Aaw yus
>> [_] [H] Bringer 2598562 >># >># >># he said hes going on another trip though, so expect nothing for a bit.
>> [_] Anon 2598600 i love this flash, glad to see more of it even though it continues to cut me off when its getting to the good bit all the bits are good
>> [_] Anon 2598603 so I opened that s*** with my LMB and I was like DAMN THAT'S AWESOME.
>> [_] Anon 2598611 >fapping to this fucking disgusting
>> [_] Otsu/k/o !zn6obdUsOA 2598616 THE TEASE! FOR IT TO END THERE. I think it's actually better like this...
>> [_] Anon 2598643 this is awesome
>> [_] Anon 2598645 I can only read her dialogue in Sheila Broflovski's voice. What-what-WHAT
>> [_] Anon 2598647 moar
>> [_] vipper !XIxc6BpKnU 2598658 don't buy any fucking timeshares
>> [_] Anon 2598669 This is literally grotesque, the style is simplistic but the artist draws a realistically flawed body so it just carries as a hideous.
>> [_] Anon 2598674 >># says you. I'm dating a milf and she just reminds me of her, it's super effective.
>> [_] Anon 2598686 >># I feel the same, but being repulsed and attracted to it at the same time is kind of the charm.

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[_] Anon 2597207 Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 2597232 >Spines >How do they work?
>> [_] Anon 2597235 >># Just overlook his spine fetish and jerk off already. It's free. Appreciate it.
>> [_] Anon 2597253 >># Noooo, stop enjoying things!
>> [_] Anon 2597287 >># >sexy tanlines oh hell naaah
>> [_] Anon 2597320 YES
>> [_] Anon 2597322 >># >># >spines WTF?! Why can't you guys post these critiques on my blog where I actually might see them? I have anonymous posting now, have for a while. So what's wrong with my spines? And my tan lines? >># You don't like them?
>> [_] Anon 2597328 >># 9.99999999999999/10 You are the greatest one. Waiting for the end.
>> [_] Anon 2597330 >># its not my fetish, but i appreciate it bro
>> [_] Anon 2597342 >># I think the handjob animation could use a breathing animation for the two characters. The scene looks kinda stiff when the two are perfectly still. You might be able to fix this with a simple tween movement.
>> [_] Anon 2597345 >># I think the earlier scenes in the beginning of the flash are starting to look outdated compared to your new scenes. Although you still got quite a bit to go on content to add that I would prefer you to concentrate on that instead of fixing up those older pics.
>> [_] Anon 2597346 >># Been a while since I worked on that part, I'll take a look at it again and see what i can do. This is good stuff, keep it coming.
>> [_] Anon 2597350 >># That's probably something I'll tackle towards the end of the comic's production. I wanna keep moving forward with it so I have something new to show you guys. It's gonna be a headache to do all of it, I'm probably gonna only fix up the glaringly poor art and kinda just say fuck it with the rest. Move on to the next comic with the xp of this one under my belt.
>> [_] Anon 2597371 >># Will the new comic be more or less the same type of content like this one? Also keep up the good work.
>> [_] Anon 2597377 >># Pretty much. The only thing I plan on changing is the story/characters and hopefully the art is a little more refined. Same format, style, storytelling. Also, when I'm nearly finished with this one, I'll put a poll up on my blog so you guys can vote on what you wanna see next. I have like 3 drafts written up, 2 m/s and 1 younger cousin story.