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>> Octopussy 16830 [G] Our first hentai project :3 A few examples of animations in the demo for you ;3 [IMG] Awaken_v_167_demo_cut.swf (19.51 MiB) 800x600, Uncompressed. 2 frames, 22 fps (00:00). Ver17, AS3. Network access: Text: Bitmaps: Audio: Video: <METADATA> [find in archive]
>> Anon 16835 You expect to get paid for this shit? This early 2000s newgrounds tier shit? Good luck. Try working on your skills for a few years before using the "hipster welfare" site.
>> Anon 16837 Pretty bad, work on your art before you try charging money.
>> Anon 16840 >"Our first hentai project :3" >"...FIRST..." And you put it on that leech site? You are being ridiculously arrogant on purpose right? Also, you know that you're pissing in the face of talented artists who work for free with this bullshit right? Fuck you... Go practice for 5 years...
>> Anon 16845 It's a silly idea that you would put this on patreon. Please learn to draw and animate before you start soliciting on patreon and even when do learn to do draw better don't use that fucking site, it just seems like a dirty service to use. Use kickstarter or offbeatr for adult content. The whole pay me that every month thing or getting paid in advance to do anything seems like it can do nothing but take away from the quality of a project in the long term by pretty much giving the content creator no incentive to finish because they already have money for what they've done and they get more the next month which gain lead to content creators only putting in the minimum amount of effort to make it look like they're doing what people have trusted them with money for. At the very least polish your skills to the point that asking people for 10$ a month for an early release of a build will promise decent progress and quality for what you're asking.
>> Anon 16846 Art's okay you need to work on the interface (how to properly align the buttons so you don't have to manually place it every frame) and work on your animation. You clearly ripped off another artist with that first rape scene. The troll rape scene looks out of place and it's a different style than the previously mentioned scene. Please work on these things before you charge people money.
>> Anon 16851 You honestly have the balls to ask us to pay for this crap? Go practice your animating skills and while your at it learn how to draw vaginas that don't look like their going through prolapse.
>> Anon 16853 Your better bet is to go to the old model of using ad revenue that most artists who made their breakout from Newgrounds did, because that honestly looks exactly what most of this is ripping off of from anyway. The demo honestly doesn't showcase anything worth investing more than fifty cents period for. You should honestly build up your craft through commissions before you try starting projects on the scale that mount up on something like Patreon, because honestly, this won't cut it.
>> Anon 16854 not bad op, i can suggest one thing though make it so that when you hover the options on which way to go the mouse cursor changes into a hand (like when you hover a link). it just feels better
>> Anon 16856 I hope you actually came back to read the thread, and take what we are saying seriously.
>> Anon 16930 Game isn't as bad as what 99% of your morons claim. Think your better go make a game yourself see how easy it is. If not grow up and stop trolling new developers your the reason people don't ever continue. Instead of insulting a developer give constructive criticism god dam bunch of 10 year olds trying to stroke their dicks lmfao.
>> Anon 16932 >># A 10:1 ratio is horrible mate (myself included). I'm pretty sure that most of these claims are justified. This is horrendous, and whoever made "this" should stop and practice for a while. (Also should have some type of standards, too.)
>> Anon 16933 >># Stop calling people 10 year olds when you can't distinguish between "Your" and "You're" Re-read entire thread. Constructive criticism ≠ sucking the developers cock. Still offended? Step 1: Look up the definition of "Opinion" on your preferred search engine. Step 2: Cancel your internet service. Step 3: Cry some more.
>> Anon 16934 >># OP or friend of OP detected Stop begging for money to make shitty porn, you are not entitled to payment so you can learn, real devs get skills and then use them to make a worthwhile product and make money because of the quality of the product, not hipster welfare
>> Anon 16943 this really actually isn't that bad, still wouldn't pay for it, have to upgrade the artstyle and animation, i cant tell the difference between speed 2 and 3
>> Anon 16946 Jesus christ you guys are assholes
>> Anon 16952 >># Sir, Welcome to the internet, oh you come here often? well don't be surprised, it constructive criticism. asshole it maybe but the OP gonna learn today
>> Anon 16953 It's decent for a first timer actually. to OP: I suggest a continue button so you don't have to restart , a map you slowly fill, and that you have all "next text" arrows in the same location so you don't have to keep moving your mouse everywhere. also a unlockable gallery eventually. as for paying, don't expect anyone to pay for this at ANY quality. few people actually pay for porn nowadays. I will likely wait for someone to pirate your shit before I actually pay for porn. If nobody does pirate it, I will still not pay. too many free things out there of better quality. To the rest of you guys, you are being kind of dickish, even by internet standards to a guy who deserves only a minor telling off. new developers are always welcome. you can tell him that no one will pay for his stuff without foaming at the mouth. Also, there are shittier things than this out there and you all KNOW IT *cough meetandfuckgames cough*.
>> Anon 16955 >># >># >"waah, waah. I put out unfappable GARBAGE (even current MNF is better than this) and had the goddamn AUDACITY to ask for money for it, and people told me to fuck off" Nobody is going to give you money for this shit, fuck off. You know some fucking dudes got together and made a ridiculous high quality 30 minute long animation in SFM out of sheer love of porn and released it for fucking free? And you ask for money when your art is so low quality, and you get MAD when people tell you to fuck yourself? REFLECT ON IT, IDIOT. "Waah, waah, they're being MEAN to me on the INTERNET because I'm a STUPID CUNT with an entitlement complex trying to hop on that hipster welfare bandwagon with no skills" Kill yourself
>> Anon 16956 >>#" >"you are being kind of dickish" And I think you're being kind of a pussy - opinion >"a guy who deserves only a minor telling off" I think people who are arrogant enough to post their FIRST project on Patreon deserves a kick in the teeth so their narcissism and/or arrogance doesn't grow worse - opinion >"new developers are always welcome" Not when their skill to greed ratio is this fucked up - opinion >"tell him...without foaming at the mouth" I didn't sit down and plot evil comments I just call it being honest - opinion >"also there are shittier things than this out there (MnF)" Even MnF with their hackjob artists who draws extreme proportions is better than this shit - opinion You have the right to your own opinions, but stop trying to act like they are fact.
>> Anon 16958 Okay, seriously, a good 80% of the people here are the same exact anon trying to be clever. If you could not tell simply by looking at their phrases you're retarded. (no one fucking says "hipster wellcare", let alone this many people. Not to mention they all have the exact same views on the project. While I do agree with a lot of it, it's incredibly unlikely that EVERYONE would have the EXACT SAME opinions on it) This is a shitty first project. Congratulations, you've made something that isn't very impressive with your equally unimpressive skills. Anyone who expects better is, again, a retard, but if you actually expect people to pay for this? YOU'RE a retard. You've got a concept that could turn out great if you work on it some more, but as this stands, it is not worth money. I will say, besides the constantly moving buttons, the flash set up looks pretty smooth. By no means professional, but decent for your first time. Improve your skills, polish up your demo (maybe with a few more scenes?) and try to find a better forum for this, because I promise you no constructive criticism will come from 4chan.
>> Anon 16960 >># The only guy who used "Hipster welfare" (not wellcare) was the Anon with the big A you didn't notice SWFchan is totally just 1 guy and a monkey typing really fast You're paranoid if you think people care enough about this shit to change their IP back and forth to agree with themselves Sign me up with the negative crowd. Go practice a lot OP for now only the absolutely dumbest people on the net would pay for this
>> Anon 16961 it's not that bad, if you're able to fap to it (which you are) let em put it on patreon, who cares. If there are people willing to pay for it, fine. If not, they will sink anyway. It's not like every (or even many) people are worth funding on patreon.