File: summerv0.1.swf-(1.51 MB, 1280x720, Hentai)
[_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)15:12:04 No.3233529
Work in progress. Let me know what you think!
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)15:51:32 No.3233541
It's autistic as fuck
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)15:55:03 No.3233542
This is the first time that I've opened a hentai parody flash of a cartoon I watch and genuinely
couldn't bring myself to go any further. I don't know. something about summer sexualized weirds
me out in the same way some people might be perturbed to see their own sister sexualized. I don't
know. I think she just annoys me enough in the show that it killed any desire I'd normally have.
That being said, the few frames I saw (just the idle animation or whatever) Looked really well
animated and the sound mixing seemed pretty good. All in the all the whole thingfelt well made
and polished.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)15:56:48 No.3233543
its too fast, for a start. as the previous gentleman said, its a little autistic, maybe because
they are fucking in front of the garage
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)16:00:43 No.3233544
>>3233529
>Mr. Poopybutthole
why
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)16:01:04 No.3233545
>>3233543
The framerate is too fast? I'm adding more backgrounds other than the garage, so there's a start!
Can you elaborate on how a flash can be autistic?
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)16:03:35 No.3233546
>>3233544
He was originally a non-animated placeholder but I thought it was funny so kept it. In the Rick &
Morty comics one of the other universe's Summer is close to Mr. Poopybutthole, so you could go
with that. (never read the comics though, somebody told me about it)
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)16:06:01 No.3233547
>>3233545
i guess everything looks show accurate. she is bouncing too much his size. her left eye is off
her face. poopy should look like he is enjoying it a little more.... i dont know i just wasn't
comfortable watching it for too long so i called it autistic. but with a little tweaking it could
be good, also find some music for it too
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)16:07:20 No.3233548
also the bouncing is out of sync
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)16:21:30 No.3233552
>>3233547
I could move the eye down a little more if it looks off, but in the show their eyes come off
their heads a little bit. I plan on tweaking this animation a lot - this is literally the first
version of it I'm putting out there. Is the music not playing? There should be a remix of the
theme song playing...maybe I need to optimize the sounds better too.
>>3233548
Shit, I was having syncing issues but I thought I fixed them. Is the animation lagging for you at
all or running smoothly?
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)16:25:05 No.3233553
Needsabetteranglethatshowsmoreofwhatthecharactersaredoing.Sinceyouseenopenetration,t
hiscouldtechnicallybeapg-13flash.Assaidbeforethesoundisoutofsync,andthelocationdoesn
'tfit(youcouldhavehadherleaningoveratableinsidethegarage,ratherthanonherbackoutside)
.Itdoesn'tmakesense,thelocationgiventhecharacters.Assomeonementionedbefore,musicshou
ldbeoptionalifadded.Ialsonoticedthatiffullscreenisused,thebackgrounddoesn'tmatchthef
oregroundintermsofquality(FGishigherresthanBG,looksbad).Perhapsaddintractableobjects
intheflashthatinteractwithwhatthecharsaredoing(fuckingaroundtheideaofminigametounloc
kmorescenes,likespit-roastingher).Idon'tliketheoptiontochangebodytypes,sincethepoint
ishentaiofexistingcharacters,whereasmoreshouldhavebeenputintoextracharacters,cloths,
scenes,positions,etc.Futashouldberemoved,asthattomethemostautistic
thing, and falls back to altering pure character design. Perhaps add speed control to the options.
A personal thing I would like to see is a countdown timer to cum. What the fuck is that, you ask?
You set a timer for how long you want the scene to run, perhaps adding different variation
options to positions and speed as certain times, allowing the user to build something akin to a
porn video where they have full control over how the animation runs. This allows for people that
want to edge, but not be required to interact with the flash, continue to do so with the
knowledge of when the scene is going to finish (cum). This also allows someone to setup multiple
cum scenes without having to click multiple times which ruins immersion. Haven't personally seen
this on a flash, not even sure if possible, but something like it would be rather innovative.
As always, variety is the best tool to implement.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)16:28:24 No.3233554
>>3233552
the music is there actually, just really quiet
the animation runs smoothly
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)16:29:46 No.3233555
>>3233529
i love it
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)16:36:25 No.3233559
>>3233553
I was planning on doing a "top view" window on the right side to show the penetration, along with
anal and vaginal toggle options. That countdown timer idea is genius. I'll implement that into
one of the future versions for sure.
As far as the syncing goes, is it her voice or the sex sounds (or both) that are off?
>>3233554
Glad to hear the animation runs smoothly. I'll make the music louder.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)16:47:19 No.3233560
>>3233542
fuck that, Summer sexualized is completely hot.
Mr. Poopybutthole, on the other hand....
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)16:48:30 No.3233561
>>3233560
Ooo-wee!
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)16:54:18 No.3233564
>>3233559
Her voice doesn't seem to desync that much, where as the sex sounds almost start to desync after
the 1st loop. I don't think it's a huge issue with her voice as the animation doesn't require
certain mouth shapes to match word usage. The only noticeable segment is when she is making the
"o" sound mouth shape when breathing quickly that it seems to trail behind initially.
Also yeah, wasn't super sure about the timer option possibility. I don't do flash, and it seemed
more like a program level requirement for control. I have seen ones that have options to randomly
select scenes, and auto-play, but nothing that you could directly control how the scenes are
controlled or when you want to finish without directly intervening with the flash. You figure,
hentai flashes of all, would want the user to be hands free, but in control.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)16:54:55 No.3233565
I like that there's a clothes switch and futa option
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)17:00:40 No.3233568
I think the animation and art are spot on. The eye being off the head matches the art style of
the show. The thrusting might be a little too fast to start off with though.
My only issue is that I don't really like Summer. Beth is super hot, or Jessica,Tammy, Unity, or
the cat girl from the Purge episode.
Summer is the one female I don't think is hot. oddly
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)17:13:44 No.3233574
>>3233564
I'll look into fixing the sync issues, hopefully by next release.
Timer option is fully possible to me. I'm not as well-versed in actionscript 3, but I know a lot
of actionscript 2 so I just need to figure out the "adjusted" code.
>>3233565
Thank you. More options coming soon.
>>3233568
I'll probably be doing one with Beth at some point...it's inevitable.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)17:14:52 No.3233575
>>3233574
Please have an option for Summer screwing Beth
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)17:19:10 No.3233577
>>3233543
>>3233553
But wait. Doesn't caring that much about where the fuck they're doing it makes you autistic and
not OP?
Also: if Futa is removed, base audience will probably drop by 50%.
Also also:
>Futa is autistic
I mean, I'm not really into futa, but autistic? Really? It's more of an age-old hentai technique
to have an excuse for girls boning girls.
Countdown timer is not recommended. Maybe building meter, but pure invisible time based countdown
sounds bad.
>Cut down variety
>Variety is the best tool
Oi vey. It's variety OR staying true to original source.
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)17:25:55 No.3233580
>>3233575
I could always make multiple options - either press a button to cum or have a user-controlled
countdown timer in the corner that makes them cum at 0.
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)17:28:01 No.3233581
>>3233553
>the background doesn't match the foreground in terms of quality
I just noticed this part, must've missed it. It was originally the same quality as the
foreground, but all the lines and fills REALLY lagged the animation, so I made it one image. I
can think of a couple ways of fixing this...
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)17:28:10 No.3233582
>>3233580
I just really want to see Summer on Beth (or better yet Beth on Summer), after that comic where
Beth seduced summer in Jerry's body.
I'll probably never get it
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)17:30:12 No.3233583
>>3233529
I can't see it. My version of Firefox Nightly blocks it.
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)17:34:45 No.3233585
>>3233582
Beth on Summer is more do-able. I'll definitely consider this. Stay posted on my Hentai-Foundry
or Patreon for updates (links in the flash)
>>3233583
Try here: http://swfchan.org/11073/
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)17:36:09 No.3233586
>>3233585
Yippee
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)17:45:13 No.3233588
>>3233542
Honestly, I think this flash has taught me I have a new fetish. Now, I have no idea a single
thing about Rick and Morty, but the narrative presented here is absolutely amazing.
For starters, look to the balloons. This is when the girl (Summer?) just turned 18 and would be
sexually ripe. She probably expected a normal party. But instead she found herself getting raped
by a phallic twinkie in a top hat.
Where are her friends? Her relatives? They don't care. She is getting raped by a twinkie and
nobody cares. Not only that, but she had the bad luck to choose a twinkie with the sexual stamina
of a God, meaning she will be permanently stuck in this position unless someone helps her. But
nobody cares about this girl, they don't mean anything to her, and so Twinkie the Kid gets to go
to town.
Look at Summer's face, she wants this to be over. Even the Twinkie starts to feel bad for her,
since he is after all born with feelings and is causing permanent mental harm to an 18 year old
girl. But does he stop? No way, he is pounding this poontang.
At this point Summer is just giving up, a mindless sex toy to be used by a twinkie. Imagine the
thoughts going through your head as a twinkie of all things comes up, pushes you onto the
sidewalk, and rapes you. Thank you, anon, for teaching me the value of Twinkie rape. I shall
never look a box of Hostess treats the same way again, for I know now they have a dark side they
may unleash. I hope they do, it would be the ultimate kink to see this brought to reality.
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)17:51:02 No.3233591
>>3233588
LOL. Thank you, I think. Or you're welcome?
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)18:23:19 No.3233596
>Circumcised as a futa option
Never have I seen something with such polish for preference.
Nice work.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)18:49:56 No.3233599
>>3233529
OP you need to make the intergenerational sandwich a reality. It's what you were destined to do.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)18:58:45 No.3233603
Looks promising.
Keep up the good job m8.
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)19:06:03 No.3233606
>>3233596
Thanks, going to add more to the futa category as well as adding more fetish options.
>>3233599
Maybe with a Morty from a timeline where he's older?
>>3233603
Thanks! Gotta work a part-time job to pay my bills, so that's where most of my time is going
right now...but I'm going to keep updating and making new shit of course. I'm hoping to get
enough money from Patreon to be able to live off of doing commissions and dedicating basically
all my time to animation and art. I appreciate everyone's input, and welcome more!
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)19:13:16 No.3233609
>>3233606
Yeah, Older Morty & Tiny Rick from Big Trouble in Little Sanchez episode. That would be hilarious.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)19:28:29 No.3233614
>>3233529
Add X-Ray / Cross Section, it's hot & that would solve the issue of not seeing the penetration.
Maybe pregnant option when Cumming inside. Summer suffer the same fate as her mother XD
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)19:37:04 No.3233617
>>3233609
TINY RIIIIIICK!
>>3233614
That's a good idea, thanks!
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)19:58:53 No.3233622
Shadow and sound sync issues are fixed, next version will show these changes. I also fixed the
quality of the background on zoom.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)20:11:43 No.3233623
>>3233529
Love the boob options, maybe a puffy+big areola option?
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)20:14:20 No.3233624
>>3233623
Caaaaan do!
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)20:14:49 No.3233625
Fucking why.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)20:16:30 No.3233627
>>3233577
Futaisautistic,andanichefetish.Iwasgladitwasoptional,butpersonallyitseemslazilyautis
ticforeveryartisttosay,"heyhowcanIimprovethequalityofthisporn?MOREDICKS!"Thefactyoua
redefendingsomethingyoupersonallydon'tenjoyisironicintermsofmockingsomeoneforbeingau
tistic.Youcanjustaseasilyletherhaveastraponasanalternativetofulldickandballsmove.The
artistwasaskingforinput,whichwasgiven,sohowistakingintoconsiderationthelocationofthe
act"autistic"?Thetimeroptionwasmoreasetofscenesyoucouldsetupasacountdowntoclimax,whe
reasmetersarealwaysusedandarebasedonthesamepremise,justtimegoesforwards,ratherthanba
ckwards(therewasalsoconsiderationforpassiveviewing,ratherthaninteractiveprogression)
.Sametomato,desu.Varietyinthesenseofmorepureoptions,likeclothing,characters,toys,loc
ations,music,filters,etcetc.Youcanstayvanillatocontentandstill
provide variety, you autist.
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)20:18:55 No.3233628
>>3233625
It's not your thing, I get it. Showing your disapproval with no explanation after all these
constructive comments seems odd, though.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)20:22:55 No.3233630
>>3233628
>>>/r/eddit
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)20:31:03 No.3233633
>>3233627
I appreciate the feedback. No need to argue with the other guy; futa isn't for everyone, which is
why it's optional (it's not my fetish, but a friend requested it so I added it as an
after-thought... so while it's not necessarily affecting the quality for you, my friend sure
appreciated it).
I see what you mean with the timer now, the future scenes are going to be in different locations
with more characters so I wouldn't be able to implement that until I have at least a few scenes
available.
Rick & Morty is one of the few cases where "non-vanilla" stuff can slide with an excuse due to
the multiple universes constantly mentioned in the show. There's a Morty with a hammer for a
head, so I think it's possible there's a futa Summer. Or you could pretend it's a flesh-colored
strap-on....
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)21:04:53 No.3233639
>>3233529
Yo since you have a futa option in there have an option for her to be on top. Lot of these
flashes toss in a futa option that always feels inconsequential because they don't actually use
the dick.
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)21:33:57 No.3233646
>>3233639
There definitely will be more futa options.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)21:35:39 No.3233647
>>3233633
Yeah it's beating a dead horse over things previously mentioned. To side step the previous idea
of a timer / meter for passive play, what about interactive options? Something like having the
dead hobo in the background somewhere, and if you clicked on the shrink ray, it unlocked the dead
hobo theme park as a location. This let you go inside him as a change of scene, unlocking those
characters, and adding more options for the sets you can choose from. Or the dream inception
earpiece sitting on a shelf somewhere, after clicking it lets you use it to enter other
characters, which unlocks scary terry, incest summer, etc. as well as new locations and toys.
Something to chew on, I guess. Ideasmen are abound here.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)21:42:41 No.3233649
>>3233588
This somehow made a flash I initially found unfappable somewhat more fappable
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)22:26:56 No.3233668
>>3233647
Great ideas. I'm saving this thread for further reference. I have ideas for separate projects so
I didn't want to stay on this Summer one for TOO long, but I can always do the base scenes and
add options in-between projects. Some of these ideas can be applied to any animation really, so
it's helpful all around.
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)22:28:04 No.3233669
>>3233649
Was the concept unfappable to you or the quality? Can you suggest any improvements or ideas I can
implement that might make it more appealing?
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)23:11:15 No.3233678
>>3233669
I think it's alright, I think I initially just didn't really find the characters or art style of
the show very appealing as porn. I'm kinda warming up to this though, so I'll look forward to any
updates.
By the way, you probably ought to have an option to at least toggle the music.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)23:12:10 No.3233679
You have skill as a flashmaker, but the actual flash is one I don't like. I don't like the show,
and its artstyle really doesn't tend to make good porn.
Good job making this, but I hope you use your skills for something a bit better, later on.
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)23:18:18 No.3233681
>>3233678
Thanks for the input! I was going to put an option for toggling music and voices separately
(specifically for muting Mr. PB) , but I ran into trouble doing this the way I have the audio
synced...it's really something I should have thought of from the beginning, but I should be able
to at least have a mute music button.
>>3233679
I plan on making "adult parodies" of many animations, including something with Diane and/or Sarah
Lynn from Bojack Horseman and Princess Bubblegum with Marceline from Adventure Time.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)23:23:31 No.3233682
>>3233681
You do whatever you want, I just don't really like "adult parodies" of most American cartoons.
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)23:29:58 No.3233685
>>3233682
Strokes, folks, etc
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)23:40:49 No.3233690
Will you do loli?
>> [_] EroPharaoh 04/11/17(Tue)23:44:07 No.3233693
>>3233690
I'll do "aged" loli. Basically like this flash.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/11/17(Tue)23:52:57 No.3233694
Are you the faggot who was trying to shill his patreon here on /f/ a week ago?
