File: summerv0.1.swf-(1.51 MB, 1280x720, Hentai)
[_] Summer's Birthday V0.1 EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/15/17(Sat)21:28:14 No.3234787
Re-posting the first version of this flash to get more people interested and to make sure I fix
any issues.
Things I've fixed so far (but haven't released the new version - I want to add some more visual
differences before I release it): Fixed audio sync (Summer's voice, sex sounds), fixed zoom issue
with low quality background, fixed audio levels, added toggle effect button (for lower-end
computers, this removes the shading and shadow from the characters), added preloader.
I plan on adding more secondary characters (the ones doing the sexing to Summer) next.
I'm also working on a scene involving titfucking. Please let me know how well this runs on your
computer, and point out any bugs.
Suggestions are always welcome!
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 04/15/17(Sat)21:42:05 No.3234791
Are you Justin Roiland?
>> [_] Anonymous 04/15/17(Sat)21:46:52 No.3234793
YOU BEST INCLUDE SERENITY NIGGA
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/15/17(Sat)22:18:20 No.3234805
>>3234793
Serenity? Do you mean Unity?
>>3234791
No.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/15/17(Sat)22:45:58 No.3234811
>>3234787
Neat flash. The only two suggestions I have are anatomical/'mechanics of motion' shit, so don't
think I'm trying to bash. It really does look like it's going to be good.
Might want to make sure the insertion is correct, many artists overestimate how high up pussies
are on average, but in this case you're dealing with a character that has legs shorter than the
modest height necessary. If anything, he should be thrusting up very slightly, based on the
posture/heights you chose. This matters for perspective and being convincing, people like their
sex to have 'impact' and to me it just feels like he's missing.
The second things was Summer's chest and stomach. You did the slope in from her ass great, but
the angle towards her chest is just straight. Depictions dead on from a side perspective are rare
in the show, but generally speaking, you the shape should bow out slightly at the pelvis-
obstructed, but your angle coming in is right- slope in towards a 'thin' around the stomach, and
then slope more forcefully back out to form the chest and ribcage identity. As it is now, the
boob placement feels unnatural. There's a few images of the sex doll while it was partially
broken and lying supine that demonstrates this idea. They're pretty hard to google, though.
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/15/17(Sat)22:58:17 No.3234815
>>3234811
I see exactly what you're saying about the stomach area, I'll make sure to fix that! As for the
pussy angle, the original animation I did had him fucking her ass while fisting her pussy (he has
very small hands, you see). I plan on doing either a cross-section/x-ray thing or a top view with
pussy/anal options, so I never fixed that angle.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/15/17(Sat)23:01:02 No.3234818
Add a button to make it so you can turn her nipples into cones or targets.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/15/17(Sat)23:02:27 No.3234819
>>3234815
Thank you for taking my sleep-deprived suggestions seriously, I'm surprised you could read them.
I was just about to translate it into actual English, really.
The main thing throwing me off about the insertion angle is that the dick is going down, but his
height is just tall enough for it to look like he'd be fucking her perineum that way. Like, just
too tall for that to be anal, but not tall enough for it to be 'convincing' vaginal sex.
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/15/17(Sat)23:03:11 No.3234820
>>3234811
Oh, also, does the breast placement look wrong because of the lack of ribcage, or should I move
them down a little bit? I was on the fence about their placement. I was going for a look that the
shirt was pushing them down a bit (obviously the physics of the breasts don't make complete
sense, they really shouldn't be that perky when she's lying down but I think perky tits on
cartoons looks better, plus the "huge" option has them spill over more)
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/15/17(Sat)23:05:08 No.3234821
>>3234819
I'll have this fixed as well. I originally did this animation for myself, but decided to share so
I'm fixing stuff I didn't really care about for it to be the best it can be. Recently lost my job
so I'm hoping people with similar interests might be able to throw me a bone every now and then.
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/15/17(Sat)23:10:58 No.3234824
>>3234819
http://imgur.com/a/aLsx7
Does this look better?
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/15/17(Sat)23:12:01 No.3234825
>>3234824
(The ribcage/stomach area I mean, I didn't fix the penis position yet.)
>> [_] Anonymous 04/15/17(Sat)23:39:29 No.3234828
>>3234824
The slope up is exactly what I was talking about, but when I mentioned the pelvic bulge, I meant
the area around the hips, which you already had correctly proportioned. Think almost like a "("
on its side, it's somewhat similar to back curvature on low-fat bodies.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/15/17(Sat)23:46:23 No.3234830
where's summer x morty?
>> [_] Anonymous 04/15/17(Sat)23:46:25 No.3234831
>>3234787
No one actually finds this hot, right?
>> [_] Anonymous 04/15/17(Sat)23:49:18 No.3234832
Why are her breasts triangular? Even the huge ones look like weird pyramids. Round them and
flatten them out a bit.
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/16/17(Sun)00:06:57 No.3234845
>>3234832
Going for a perkier look. I can make them more "real" if this is a problem for anybody else as
well.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)00:08:52 No.3234848
Triangle tits are a thing, also underrepresented.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)00:13:48 No.3234851
>>3234832
There are breasts shaped like this, although at huge level the more triangular shape doesn't
scale well
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)00:15:05 No.3234852
Just curious, what program did you use to make this?
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/16/17(Sun)00:19:10 No.3234855
>>3234851
I can certainly round out the huge boobs more.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)00:49:24 No.3234869
>>3234787
ick
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)00:58:04 No.3234874
I feel like you could benefit from an option to stray away from noodles. not a lot of people like
it. Just saying, if you're putting this much effort into it, you might want to consider your
crowd.
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/16/17(Sun)01:02:56 No.3234875
>>3234874
Stray away from noodles? I'm not sure what you mean exactly.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)01:20:09 No.3234879
>>3234875
Well for starters mpb was a strange choice at best for a male actor. If this were simply for
novelty sake I'd look the other way, but you seem to be putting in a bit much effort to be making
a joke. (if you want my suggestion, you could just make him an Easter egg or something. What a
coincidence)
The other part might just be what I'm getting out if reactions in general, and I share the
feeling, that character art from r&m is almost never attractive. To be fair, the only time I've
seen them drawn in a way that was attractive was when shadman did it.
It's probably just too late to change the latter part, but I do think you could and should
consider the former.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)01:26:01 No.3234880
>>3234879
>you cant have porn of a joke character, porn is serious business
fuck off m8 I can go anywhere and find someone trying to make porn of rick and bird person and
vanilla shit like that.
You better not listen to this guy Ero, this is fantastic
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)01:26:31 No.3234881
>>3234879
>circumcised and uncircumcised penis options
I'm triggered
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/16/17(Sun)01:27:02 No.3234882
>>3234879
I'm working on alternate characters at the moment: Anonymous character, Older Morty (from another
dimension, of course), TINY RIIIICK, maybe Mr. Meeseeks, maybe Beth with a strap-on.
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/16/17(Sun)01:30:01 No.3234883
>>3234880
Thanks, I'm personally interested in this style, so I'm going to keep going. As far as the guy's
other suggestion, I am working on alternate characters than MPB.
>>3234881
Bang!
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)01:31:37 No.3234884
>>3234882
ah okay. that sounds fine then. It' s just a tad jarring to immediately open up to the stick with
stick limbs sticking his stick into... summer.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)01:32:41 No.3234886
to the triangle tit issue, yeah there are titties shaped like that and yeah some folks dont care
for em in their cartoon porn. im not complaining but if it keeps coming up maybe just add more
options to the tit type cycle.
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/16/17(Sun)01:38:34 No.3234890
>>3234884
Ooooo-WEE!
>>3234886
I can always add more tit shape options. That's easy.
>> [_] Hans 04/16/17(Sun)02:43:07 No.3234901
Internal view when?
kinda curious how you will deal with his yellow dick, no homo.
>> [_] Hans 04/16/17(Sun)02:45:37 No.3234903
Oooh, sound options, those are more basic. For voice and music.
[ I didn't miss them did I- ]
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/16/17(Sun)02:53:46 No.3234905
>>3234901
Cumming soon! It will be just like a normal dick, but yellow.
>>3234903
I'm working on this one, the way I incorporated the audio to sync with the animation makes this
kind of difficult. I'm much better in actionscript 2, but actionscript 3 is the new thing so I'm
trying to learn it now...I know there's gotta be a way to "mute" a sound instead of "stopping" it
(if the audio stops and starts over, it will fall out of sync with the animation..)
I know another way around this, so I'll work on this.
>> [_] Hans 04/16/17(Sun)02:56:43 No.3234907
>>3234905
keep it up, my dude.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/16/17(Sun)03:15:07 No.3234916
I know I'm never going to get it but I will always hold out hope for a mod of Beth in Mr
Poopypants' place.
Very good work so far, matches the show feel well.
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/16/17(Sun)03:15:39 No.3234918
>>3234907
Thanks!
MY MAN!
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/16/17(Sun)03:18:36 No.3234921
>>3234916
Lotta people asking for Beth. I think she's hot, and planned on doing something with her. Maybe I
can do a "Beth Alternate" in the future. Keep up with me on my Tumblr ( https://eropharaoh.tu
mblr.com/ ) for updates on progress. I'm trying to post updates all over, but my
Hentai-foundry.com account (also eropharaoh) and Patreon have a list of all the sites I post to.
>> [_] EroPharaoh !!6x7DPRMSm8S 04/16/17(Sun)03:41:48 No.3234925
Going to sleep now, I've saved this thread for reference. I'll make changes and release a new
version ASAP. Thank you everyone for helping! If you like my stuff consider donating on my
Patreon!
