File[Shawns got my culcultur.swf] - (197 KB)
[_] [L] critique please? calculator loop 01/10/10(Sun)18:23 No.1155685
hi /f/lash
how is this coming out so far?
also if youre a fan of mark m, what should the dance loop scene be like?
ty.
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)18:23 No.1155686
btw i cant draw cars
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)18:27 No.1155687
op here inb4 cant draw carsz!
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)18:30 No.1155691
i will fucking kill you for this
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)18:31 No.1155692
y=mx+b
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)18:32 No.1155693
I hope your dog gets covered in shit, and you have to cut it out of his fur.
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)18:33 No.1155695
>>1155691
OP HERE
my next flash ^_^
Yo yo yo we making jack vids for cash see
Yo yo we getting paid to get nasty
Yo yo I like to jack it really fast Tee
Whoa whoa whoa you better make that nutt last chief
This is the story of my very first job
15 years old when I met Mr. bob
A creepy mother fucker, fucking loved what he did
He’d tape my dick and then go sell the vid
Jacking off on tape and getting paid by the hour
When I jack off I like to lean like the tower
Of Pisa
I like to lean and pick my knees up
It’s very uncomfortable but it makes a dude come fast
Ease up on that bottle you better make that rum last
Cause I ain’t doing this shit if I get sober
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)18:33 No.1155697
lrn2apostrophe
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)18:48 No.1155706
epic toast
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)19:16 No.1155726
I think this is absolutely perfect the way it is.
Adding anything more would ruin it.
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)19:18 No.1155728
needs more
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)19:28 No.1155740
shitsux
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)19:31 No.1155742
faggity fagtank FAAYYYGGETT SHIETT!
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)22:00 No.1155856
sucks
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)23:14 No.1155900
it's good, don't add anything
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)23:19 No.1155904
god i hope this is a troll
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)23:28 No.1155908
it is conventional to zoom in on somebody's eyes at the end
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)23:37 No.1155914
This is okay.
>> [_] Anonymous 01/10/10(Sun)23:39 No.1155916
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>>1155695
Damn anon your rhymes leave a lot to desired
Before you sell a platinum track your kids will be retired
You ain't got the rhythm of mind that is required to be
Droppin' licks around the master to which you've aspired
>> [_] Anonymous 01/11/10(Mon)00:05 No.1155932
you need to make choice between using the pencil or brush and keep it consistent.
you're mixing line less background and foreground assets with line drawn characters and it's kind
of ugly. There isn't enough spacial separation to justify it as a distance thing.
Plot your backgrounds with perspective. Also, Detach the jaw for lip syncs.
Why was the dude sleeping on a bed, in his clothes, with no blanket or covers? or even a pillow?
>> [_] Anonymous 01/11/10(Mon)00:48 No.1155965
you disgrace sick animation
>> [_] Anonymous 01/11/10(Mon)00:56 No.1155974
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Summarizes it perfectly.
