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[_] Anon 3191519 I created that music. Any feedback is appreciated Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 3191520 >># what did you recorded it with?
>> [_] Anon 3191523 >># Fl studio with piano one plugin
>> [_] Anon 3191532 >># So you have a keyboard plugged into your PC and FL records what you play, right? So it could be easy to put some tones in the right timeline because it looks like your right hand is faster than your left also the audio quality is poor probably because you didn't compress it and the standart setting for flash is to put everything in 16kbps so first you need to go to library, right click the audio and hit properties. If it's a wav ther should be option compression, you select mp3 and then select the highest possible bitrate and set quality to best. Above that you uncheck convert stereo to mono which also helps a lot
>> [_] Anon 3191535 Your composition could do with some work too. The starting two tone oscillation feels barren without any changes through the song, though the build up is at least good. The length of pause in the mid point is a bit excessive too, and could use something, even just a slow fade of previous tones, to make it more effective. That or just shortening it. That's my input, do with it what you will.
>> [_] Anon 3191571 These anons aren't totally wrong in their analysis, but I have to say you look you've got all the pieces you need to make some really great flash work, anon. All you have to do is start making more refined assets, like nicer pillars and nicer music. I know that can be a lot harder than I say it is, but you've already figured out how to add music to a scene like the one you've made and make it interactive in such a way that it creates the illusion of depth. I look forward to seeing more of your stuff.
>> [_] Anon 3191575 >># I agree with this guy, the opening is garbo. Kinda hurt my ears a little.
>> [_] Anon 3191582 This is pretty cool. Are the pillars coded separately or do they all move over the same integer regardless of size/position?
>> [_] Anon 3191628 out of time, no feel/dynamic which is the difference between that intro being good and being shit which it currently is..just all together no personality whatsoever in it currently.
>> [_] Anon 3191651 >># that first few tunes reminded me of fran bow https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fcR3XiEy NHw
>> [_] Anon 3191660 The two-tone in the beginning is super repetitive and sounds like something made for amateurs to practice. It's fine once the song hits its stride, though it could use a little polish and clean up work.
>> [_] Anon 3191668 >># Not enough air horns