File: Mabel_Driver.swf-(142 KB, 550x400, Hentai)
[_] Something new on /f/ for once. Anon 3191960 First flash I've ever done! I don't have voice actors, and I understand it's really short. If you have any pointers, please give your constructive criticism. I'm thinking about doing commissions, but for this one I can't have lolicon associated with me.
>> [_] Anon 3191961 You just made a lolicon so
>> [_] Anon 3191963 You should add some sort of delay or notification on pressing next or previous, i can't tell what the hell is going on half the time
>> [_] Anon 3191964 >># >I can't have lolicon associated with me but why?
>> [_] Anon 3191965 >># All characters represented are over 18 years or older even if otherwise specified.
>> [_] Anon 3191966 >># I'll add an animation on the button. I also just noticed if you use the original size the next button it's a little hard to read.
>> [_] Anon 3191967 Good to know people are still trying to get new stuff done. Pointers plain and simple, suggest you focus on art before programming first imo. Could also help earlier with getting associated with other things. Tentacle flashes are always welcome.
>> [_] Anon 3191978 she seems too calm about the initial penetration part like she's only uncomfortable when she'd actually be in at least a little pain, esp when there's a bulge
>> [_] Anon 3191984 >># I think I got lazy around the end. Even flash animation took me about 3 days to do because I didn't know the program. If I had done keyframe animation it may have taken oodles longer. The next flash I do will probably be keyframe just because I need to learn to animate. This will help with more natural movements because I'll have to think more about every frame. This was my first experience with any sort of animation and some of the movements are a little robotic because of that. Thank you.
>> [_] Anon 3192000 There's no sound! Bad/joke sounds are funnier than silence.
>> [_] Anon 3192014 >># >I can't have lolicon associated with me you must follow your dreams
>> [_] Anon 3192025 saving this for bad porn sundays. What a piece of shit.
>> [_] Anon 3192030 this is bad new content >># this is good new content
>> [_] Anon 3192043 delete this
>> [_] Anon 3192052 >># Flash takes a while to master. I think it's not bad, just incomplete. I don't blame you for getting lazy around the end, but people aren't going to appreciate half assed work. Still, keep it up and don't give up. This is actually pretty good for an experimental first animation, but not really worth releasing.
>> [_] Former Ryder Club Vice President !T/nuP8UdCs 3192057 >># STOP
>> [_] Anon 3192058 >># shits gay son. if some one was already suspected of being faggoty, this might be too much gay. Everyone would know taht faggots fucking gay.
>> [_] Anon 3192084 >># It sucks.