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>> EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 53033 EroPharaoh - The Tales of St. Clare's (18+ Commission) Commission release! [IMG] talesofstclarespub.swf (3.52 MiB) 1000x720, Compressed. 22 frames, 26 fps (00:01). Ver36, AS3. Network access: Text: Yes. Bitmaps: Yes. Audio: Yes. Video: [find in archive]
>> Anon 53034 I like it
>> Anon 53086 Pretty ok
>> Anon 53088 >X-Ray is still on by default. C'mon now. I remember talking to ya about this.
>> Anon 53089 I'm almost sure the music is religious.
>> Anon 53094 >># Can't you just turn it off?
>> Anon 53095 >squirting strapon >half overlay on top of penis lazy but i lol'd a little, at least you tried good work otherwise, never even heard of Tales of St. Clare's before
>> EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 53103 >># >># Thanks! >># Haha, I remember. I figured it'd be okay since it's not directly over them (like the last one with x-ray), so it doesn't look like they're cut open. >># It's a remix of Bach! >># He actually wanted it to be a strap-on with a realistic penis, the only way I could think of doing that without it being confusing is putting a little bit of the pink part in there - the futa option I threw in because it was easy enough. ;)
>> Anon 53123 The other one should sprout a cock with the futa option is turned on.
>> Anon 53126 >># I mean yeah animation and looks are solid, but the content is pretty lackluster although my biggest complain would be that you removed the necktie when you half undress them, I miss it a bit. First world problem tho
>> EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 53127 >># I was kind of mad I missed that, I meant to have the tie hang across their shoulders and didn't realize I forgot that until release. I was pretty late with this one. The guy who commissioned it didn't mention it, so I'm guessing he didn't want the ties in that part anyway. I'm sincerely sorry about the ties. I feel shame. Anyway, thanks, I'll keep working to improve! :D
>> Anon 53146 Its good, but not as good as your previous work I think its the lack of variety in facial expressions
>> Anon 53149 >># Weird that you say that, I personally thought that was a highly specific problem I saw, never would have thought you actually wanted to do that. Anyways, not Summers Birthday tier quality but enjoyable. I also miss more positions in your work, mostly it's 1 or 2 and the switching of characters. Also more titjobs or blowjobs would be appreciated, but then again, I don't pay you so I don't have a say.
>> EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 53154 >># The commission I'm working on now with Lois Griffin will have a POV cowgirl scene and a titfuck scene :D
>> EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 53157 I've fixed some errors twice in this flash, but I don't want to spam it here. The fixed version is up on Newgrounds: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/69 8925
>> Anon 53161 Hey, that's pretty good.
>> Anon 53167 >># I'm surprised you have the gall to post on a website with such a cancerous userbase. I respect that.
>> Anon 53168 >># I'm surprised you have the gall to post your stuff on a website with such a cancerous user base. I respect that.
>> Anon 53169 Fairly good. There's a lot of negative space, maybe you could add a zoom option.
>> Anon 53173 Wow, I can really only join what's been said before. Animation and sound design is seriously solid. Just the lack of that certain pezaz (probably due to lack of creative freedom that comes from commission) makes it short of a AAA flash. I love seeing a flash like that which isn't Family Guy, Rick&Morty or those mainstream unerotic cartoon shows. Makes it pretty good in my book. PS: Noticed a little bug during cumming scene with a certain configuration. See Image. Didn't check if it was fixed in the newgrounds version. [IMG]talesofstclarespub.jpg
>> Anon 53179 >># a good chunk of his fans probably come from here just so you know. im one of em.
>> EroPharaoh!b8rgIEveP6 53188 >># Thanks :) >># I think most of the userbase is good people, mostly lurkers. The loudest are usually not the ones to listen to. ;) Thanks for the respect! >># Zoom option is a good idea, though I probably won't be updating this (if I do, it won't be any time soon unfortunately - I have quite a bit of work backed up!) >># Thanks! >Just the lack of that certain pezaz (probably due to lack of creative freedom that comes from commission) makes it short of a AAA flash. You're right about the lack of options being due to it being a commission - there's always so much more I want to put into my projects. >I love seeing a flash like that which isn't Family Guy, Rick&Morty or those mainstream unerotic cartoon shows. lol my next one is Family Guy and my main personal project right now is Rick & Morty...but after that, I've got some less mainstream commissions. I did fix that bug on the Newgrounds version, but thanks for letting me know :D >># Ey-ooooo! Thanks :)
>> Anon 53194 >># >># >displace userbase >complain about new userbase being cancerous What's that? Tastes kind of irony.