File: layde2.swf-(99 KB, Hentai)
[_] I'm making this game, critique welcome layDEclothing 12/27/12(Thu)13:01 No.1841403
it's not finished at all, I plan to make her able suck your dick, turn her around bend her over
and fuck her from behind and pushing her to the ground and fuck her from front. the cloth and
person will also be better animated.
tell me what you think. continue or scrap?
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)13:37 No.1841423
>>1841403
correct that fucking artwork and go for kasumi.swf quality minimum.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)13:39 No.1841425
Ditch the anime eyes, or at least make them less anime.
If you're going to have think contour lines, make it consistent.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)13:41 No.1841426
Continue, just alter the art style like above.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)14:01 No.1841438
>>1841425
>Ditch the anime eyes
Get out.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)14:02 No.1841439
doit
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)14:04 No.1841444
DELIVAR OP!
When it's done, of course.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)16:01 No.1841513
how the fuck do I completely remove the shirt?
Also, fix the quality. It looks like it was drawn by a crayon. Otherwise, continue. This has
potential.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)16:54 No.1841556
A little interactivity maybe? Scratchy linework and a cartoon glove cursor do not a game make.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)18:44 No.1841618
So basically, you're making the same exact shit everyone else makes. Utter waste of time, and you
don't even have a hook like using a character people care about, not to mention it looks like
shit.
I do not have any hope for these promised "better animations" when this is what you're working
with on a baseline level. Amateurish at best.
Scrap it and start over with something more original.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)19:38 No.1841656
>can't poke her eye
This is bullshit OP
