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[_] I'm making this game, critique welcome layDecloth 12/27/12(Thu)13:04 No.1841404
last one kinda screwed up, 4chan doesn't like preloader.
it's not finished at all, I plan to make her able suck your dick, turn her around bend her over
and fuck her from behind and pushing her to the ground and fuck her from front. the cloth and
person will also be better animated.
tell me what you think. continue or scrap?
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)13:16 No.1841406
So you can unbutton, open blouse, and pull down her pants and panties only?
Or is there more.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)13:31 No.1841417
animation is smooth and nice.
looks like you got a bit of work to do but looks promising.
also add some anal play.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)13:35 No.1841419
to easy, make it frustrating and complicated as others do. Looks promising tho.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)13:43 No.1841427
>>1841419
Don't listen to this fuckhead. Did superdeepthroat need a hard mode to get it's attention? OP,
keep going.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)13:48 No.1841434
Go for it OP. It looks promising
>> [_] Anonymouse 12/27/12(Thu)13:50 No.1841435
>>1841406
she reacts if you rub her
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)14:15 No.1841448
>>1841435
Ah, either way, it's turning out great. Keep it up. The art is a bit rough, but I can past beyond
this as it's still early in it's work as you say.
Smooth out the work, add as you planned on doing and I think it'll turn out alright. I'll be
looking out for updates.
Good job, OP.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)14:18 No.1841451
Throw various fetishes in it, but make them optional. I don't like futa, but have it as a side
menu option. Likewise, i like footjobs, so add a scene for that, but make it optional, so people
that are grossed out by it don't have to see it. Fetishes can make a game very well rounded.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)15:21 No.1841479
Would you like someone to help you with the art?
Or at least provide the art for you?
I don't want to insult you, but dear god is that awful looking.
>> [_] OP 12/27/12(Thu)15:25 No.1841481
>>1841479
show me what you got!
In my defense this is basically just sketching to see if people would like this kind of thing, I
think I spend 10-15 minutes drawing the body.
you still might be much better than me so I would be interested in seeing what level of art you
have to offer.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)15:27 No.1841484
it may be personal preference, but i'm not liking the "OMG I'm uncomfortable" look she gives you
while you undress her. As to not spoil anyone else's taste, multiple mood selection maybe?
you know, weather or not she's into it. A lot of H Games are to linear with that kind of thing,
maybe you can break the mold.
Also, what would be cool is an option to slide off the clothes/ or tear them off (actually
tearing) and some toys maybe?
tweak the interaction ability indications to be more obvious. a subtle tweak of a finger is kinda
hard to spot while moving the cursor.
overall, good stuff so far OP. I look forward to seeing the progression.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)15:31 No.1841486
>>1841481
If you are really serious about input, you should go on Newgrounds. Yes Newgrounds sucks, but you
are more likely to get more than 25 replies from there. /f/ is quite unpredictable in that aspect
you may get 90 replies or zero. All kinds of people post(ed) here; from Zone to Xenon, RockCandy
to AnonymousD.
>> [_] yes to multiple mood selection. OP 12/27/12(Thu)15:32 No.1841489
>>1841484
actually I was thinking of ways to select her mood or, what she (you in reality) was into.
I was thinking of starting the game in an elevator, and depending on which floor you choose you
get a different mood on the girl.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)15:33 No.1841490
Girl looks a little too plain.
Make her a redhead with a different hairstyle, maybe?
>> [_] OP 12/27/12(Thu)15:34 No.1841492
>>1841489
maybe I'll use both, because of newgrounds comment rating system, they are not always entirely
honest about what could be fixed, here on 4chan I'm sure I'll get every opinion that anyone would
have about the game.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)15:38 No.1841497
>>1841492
Well, that makes perfect sense. Good luck with this project. You might want to reconsider the
other Anon's proposal on the Art department.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)15:50 No.1841501
smooth out the person
>remove that fat shit on her legs
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)15:51 No.1841502
>>1841492
You could always drop some cash and find an artist who will do some commission pieces. I'm sure
some cash-strapped porn doodler will be all too happy to cut a deal if you give them a bit of
credit. It helps you with your animation and it helps give them a place to show off their artwork.
>> [_] OP 12/27/12(Thu)15:52 No.1841503
>>1841497
well I already asked him to show me his abilities, because this would be much easier with someone
to do the graphical part.
believe me, animating and programming takes a lot of time already, having to do all the drawings
too is just practically demotivating.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)16:14 No.1841524
Hello op maybe i can help you out with the art. its funny but im working on a similar project and
i have the art but no programing, send me an email and ill show you my work. MadsWorkShop@hotmail.
com
have subject marked as /H/.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)16:16 No.1841525
>>1841481
http://i.imgur.com/2WoZj.png
Here's a sketch I attempted to do.
I've been nearly comatose for the past 3 days, so I'm trying to get back into the swing of
drawing again.
Then again I never really had any reason to draw in the first place.
I'm far from skilled, I've got a lot to learn, anatomy being one thing for sure.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)16:19 No.1841530
Remove the ability to redress her, gets annoying when exploring your options of UNDRESSING her
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)16:29 No.1841540
>>1841525
This guy looks like he has promise. shop around OP, and don't be afraid to vent frustrations.
Some people are very appreciative of good artists who keep in touch with their fan-base.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)16:56 No.1841559
>>1841451
p3d0 mode ftw.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)17:10 No.1841565
So tell me.
Is it supposed to be rape?
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)17:44 No.1841589
well hear you go op this is a little chibi, but i can change my style if need. plus she all ready
done in flash and is broken up accordingly into layers. let me know what you think.
http://madmurdox.imgur.com/all
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)17:47 No.1841590
am I the only one who cant even make it throught the loading screen? Mine just goes beserk each
time.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)18:46 No.1841620
>>1841427
Superdeepthroat is also complete ass, so at least your comparison is relevant in that respect.
I posted in the other one and I'm not repeating myself here. Go read that one.
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)18:56 No.1841627
Shes to cute to undress.
Fix plz
>> [_] Anonymous 12/27/12(Thu)19:11 No.1841643
>>1841620
>dislikes super deep throat
Unless you're planning on making this a flash that appeals to homosexuals, I would recommend
ignoring this "guy"'s advice.
