File: Valentine the Vampire.swf-(4.42 MB, 640x450, Loop)
[_] OC Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)15:50 No.2087520
this is my first flash animation, this will be the loop for the menu of a game i will be making
for a future school project.
i know they will think it's creepy but it looks good in my eyes
>> [_] Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)16:18 No.2087540
Some thoughts:
The music is nice, but if this is for a school project you're going to need rights to use it.
I like the contrast between the character and the inked background, but depending on how you got
the background it could be hard to get access to more. If you made it though, that's awesome.
The fangs should never go down to different lengths.
The animation of the hair could do some work.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)16:41 No.2087569
That looks like my dead ex-girlfriend. Holy Shit OP. Died in a car accident.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)16:59 No.2087587
>>2087540
thanks for the feed back, the background is from jamie hewllet the animator from gorillaz, and
there's a cupple more drawings of pine trees he did,will probably use them in the game, and your
right this could use some more frames, about the rights for the song and background i'm not
looking to sell it or anything so i think it wouldnt make that mutch deal.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)17:01 No.2087591
>>2087587
Schools tend to make big deals out of that kind of thing.
I would tread lightly around copyright.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)17:09 No.2087601
>>2087591
in this case this is a cover of the XX song by the gorillaz, they don't own the rights to it,
it's not actually their song.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)17:18 No.2087609
looks like you stole it from a marceline fantumblr or something
i.e. it looks like shit.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)17:26 No.2087625
>>2087601
They don't own the recording rights but they do own the composition rights.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)17:27 No.2087629
>>2087625
Or rather, the other way around.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)18:07 No.2087674
>>2087629
Additionally, using their music for flash videos tends to be a big no, usually because of
plagiarism.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/23/13(Fri)18:13 No.2087687
Totally not a Marcilene recolour
