File: womp.swf-(161 KB, 1280x720, Loop)
[_] Flash thing Anonymous 11/13/13(Wed)07:06 No.2178487
Since this is Flash, here's a shitty flash thing I'm doing for school. Maybe you fine gentlemen
could critique the fuck out of this mess?
I'll add audio later.
>> [_] Anonymous 11/13/13(Wed)08:30 No.2178521
Seems pretty solid. This definitely isn't the right board but I'll reply juscus.
Only issue I have, is, I have no idea what's going on. But it looks fine.
>> [_] Anonymous 11/13/13(Wed)08:53 No.2178527
it's way too early to even give it critique. finish it and then talk to us.
>> [_] Anonymous 11/13/13(Wed)10:32 No.2178561
more frames for animation, less animation in large scene shots (even just a still frame with
camera movement will do), more closeups on characters animated rather than from a distance.
>> [_] Anonymous 11/13/13(Wed)11:49 No.2178596
Will do. Solid feedback. Nice.