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[_] literally 1st face ever animated Anonymous 05/29/15(Fri)18:25 No.2795670
so this is the first animated face ive ever done, just wanted to see what peoples criticisms are,
I know one is for instance at the end his left eye (left to us) has too small a pupil
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>> [_] Anonymous 05/29/15(Fri)18:40 No.2795674
Not too shabby for a first try. Couple things I noticed:
It feels shaky, I'm sure practice solve this over time.
Second: it looks like the character is saying 'flab' to me. Very nice F and L, but I think the
mouth is a bit wide for the O and there's no exaggerated 'PUH' at the end.
Disclaimer: I took an animation course once and have done nothing since so I don't really know
what the hell I'm talking about.
>> [_] Anonymous 05/29/15(Fri)18:48 No.2795678
try not to rush it next time. Take your time to draw out every frame slowly and try to stick to a
single position, cause it moves upwards.
>> [_] Anonymous 05/29/15(Fri)18:52 No.2795681
make the lips purse more
looks more like flom than flop
>> [_] Anonymous 05/29/15(Fri)18:52 No.2795682
>>2795681
this.
also, keyframes bro, learn to use them
>> [_] furblscrop 05/29/15(Fri)20:07 No.2795741
>>2795670
pace it my man
play with holding certain frames and reusing certain frames, you'll get a lot more out of the
stuff you've already done
>> [_] Anonymous 05/29/15(Fri)20:42 No.2795779
song sauce please
>> [_] Anonymous 05/29/15(Fri)21:11 No.2795808
>>2795779
I KNEW IT
I ALWAYS KNEW IT
THE SAUCEFAG IS JUST A BOT
FINALLY IT REVEALED ITS TRUE COLOURS
>> [_] Anonymous 05/29/15(Fri)21:16 No.2795815
>>2795808
it might just be some bored assholes trying to coax a reaction out of people.
