File: smokebreak.swf-(6.83 MB, 500x720, Loop)
[_] gravelord 10/30/17(Mon)02:45:57 No.3290977
>> [_] Anonymous 10/30/17(Mon)04:59:52 No.3290991
i like it
>> [_] Anonymous 10/30/17(Mon)06:42:05 No.3291000
its alright
but I wonder if it would be better if each of their movements *ashing the cig for him* & *smoking
the cig for her* were slowed down dramatically so they each make their "movements" only once
every I dunno somewhere between 3-6 seconds or something with the flash only displaying ambient
movements in the between periods such as the smoke from the cig moving upwards and dissolving
into the air.
In this moment I find the continuous rapid movements distracting and act as an impediment on the
chillness of the atmosphere of the flash and the ability to chill with it.
>> [_] Anonymous 10/30/17(Mon)06:50:22 No.3291001
the song is too uptempto for the otherwise calm visuals