File: Toki2f.swf-(25 KB, 640x480, Porn)
[_] second one Anonymous 07/20/20(Mon)22:22:52 No.3434433
should run smoothly
>> [_] Anonymous 07/20/20(Mon)22:56:22 No.3434435
bad discount -8
>> [_] Anonymous 07/20/20(Mon)23:07:05 No.3434437
>>3434435
it's second flash video i made, so it's crude and far from perfect.
>> [_] The_Kuns 07/21/20(Tue)00:59:11 No.3434441
>>3434433
You are doing good, I saw your 4 edits from yesterday. I wanted to say, that I think you are
making interesting choices.
I'd like to give CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM unlike >>3434435's shitty opinion with no value.
The animation in the foreground is solid, I'd like to see more.
The text in the background is disorienting, it is moving faster than what is in the foreground
and is changing too rapidly.
Please consider for short loop animations to:
1) Use only 1 text that moves slower than the foreground and moves more slowly... and maybe
consider making a no text version as well since it will honestly take less time to produce more
value.
2) if you go for the no text approach there are many other ways you can add the emphasis of words
without words, like mutating the body (such as the bulge effect you used)
tldr; keep on doing your thing and keep improving, no sense in validating some stranger's opinion
on the internet :^), and the high art shit can be learned along the way
>> [_] Anonymous 07/21/20(Tue)01:09:14 No.3434443
>>3434441
thank you!
>> [_] Anonymous 07/21/20(Tue)01:13:19 No.3434445
>>3434443
hey but you're not me
>> [_] Anonymous 07/21/20(Tue)01:31:25 No.3434447
>>3434437
This is pretty good for your second flash video even if it is a disgusting furry. Do you already
have a background in animation?
>> [_] Anonymous 07/21/20(Tue)01:55:06 No.3434448
>>3434447
not at all, my major is computer science
>> [_] Anonymous 07/21/20(Tue)06:23:14 No.3434457
>>3434441
and i (as not the same anon) will add up to this and say that the penis not having a complete
lineart (or however the fact that there isn't a line on the upper part of the penis is called)
does look weird.
But other than that, solid job anon ʕ^^ʔ
>> [_] Anonymous 07/21/20(Tue)08:52:39 No.3434474
>>3434433
please never give up anon <3
