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>> Anonymous 16jan2024(tu)18:11 No.100747 OP P1
[ZONE] HKG4 - Vivian
Title says it all
[IMG] [ZONE] HKG4 - Vivian.swf (3.27 MiB)
550x400, Compressed (Deflate). 1478 frames, 30 fps (00:49).
Ver6, AS1/AS2. Network access: No. Text: No.
Bitmaps: Yes. Audio: Yes. Video: No.
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>> Anonymous 19jan2024(fr)09:55 No.100769 A P2R1
um...
1. Would be much better if you shrinked the lower buttons or even did an option to hide all buttons.
2. I'm not sure about Vivian's anatomy (never played Nintendo games), but does she really have
ears? If so, I think you should've hidden them under the hat. Speaking of the artstyle, this mouth
looks especially bad to me (even though I probably draw as good as you).
3. Again, I haven't heard Vivian's voice, but are you sure these are the most fitting moans to her?
Sorry, bro, but you gotta train harder. Try editing Sakaki next time
>> Anonymous 19jan2024(fr)09:59 No.100770 B P3R2
she doesn't have ears or any example of a canon voice, I respect the desire to stick her into a
flash but this is a rough one to make work for the character
if nothing else removing the ear shape and making her mouth look as cartoony as you can manage
would probably help as much as you really could
