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[_] [H] LoZ Hentai Quest Alpha Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)09:53 No.1545191
Princess Ruto Pre-Sex Scene segment. Not much, just wanted some opinions on animation and art
style.
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)09:54 No.1545192
Not bad.
Not bad...
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)09:58 No.1545194
You spelled Legend wrong. The animations seem okay from what's been done though.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:00 No.1545196
VERY nice animations, extremely subtle and cute.
Art style is pleasant, although her eyes seem to be mismatched in size.
Also
>THAT NOISE
>72 HOURS REMAIN
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:00 No.1545197
>>1545194
> I noticed it
I feel retarded now
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:03 No.1545200
>>1545196
OP here, what do you mean? At the beginning or the head turn? Beginning is a - ^ look with her
eyes, well at least I tried to make it look like that anyways.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:09 No.1545202
Looks pretty good so far.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:11 No.1545204
>>1545200
Both.
The beginning seems to have the right eye wider than the left, and the head turn has them change
in size a bit too much.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:12 No.1545206
>>1545204
Oh okay, I'll try to fix that. Thanks for the comment. It really does mean a lot to make this
game perfect
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:13 No.1545207
Very good premise. But I would say for the dialogue towards the end, make it so she's REALLY
nervous about the idea, or make it so she's a little "excited" by the answer. "I guess it can't
be helped" just seems reluctant.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:13 No.1545208
>>1545206
Other than that, the hands seem a bit tube-like, but that's excusable. Hands are tricky to draw.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:16 No.1545211
Very cute and all, just don't go full retard once you start making the sex scene, don't make an
ugly pussy. Japs have it easy with that, they just need to put a big black rectangle where the
genitals are located. Otherwise, looking good, although the colors sorta clash with the
background.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:16 No.1545212
nothing really...
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:17 No.1545213
>>1545207
Additional dialogue needed? I wouldn't mind adding stuff. I'm just not good doing the dialogue,
would like some help getting it through. Any tips or such?
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:21 No.1545217
>>1545213
A large part of that is going to depend on how the next scene is going to play out.
An easy way to ask - is it going to be a more zone-like YAY SEX or a more Rock Candy TIME FOR
ANAL RAPE.
Really the only line that bothers me is the "can't be helped" line. It just seems out of
character. You could even change it to something that sounds similar like
"I guess...if that's really what you want..."
And then at that point just end the dialogue and go to sex, or maybe add a new frame with an
embarrassed little smirk depending on the tone of the sex scene.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:26 No.1545218
>>1545217
Okay, time I'll change that part to the line you gave me. I'll be sure to make it more of a
willing thing than LOL RAPE. I'll try to post the end results of the Ruto segment next week or so
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:28 No.1545219
/r/ing that it stays Ledgend
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:30 No.1545220
>>1545218
>I'll be sure to change that part to the line you gave me
>loli-Ruto hentai flash
>not sure if proud of this
Cool beans. Other than that you've done some awesome work here. I'll let the artist folk advise
you on the art, as it all looks fine to me.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:30 No.1545221
>>1545219
Fix'd already thanks to
>>1545194
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:37 No.1545223
/r/ making "nothing really" an option. If only for the lulz.
lulz...
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:42 No.1545225
Definitely increase text speed, or make clicking autocomplete it.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:47 No.1545227
Oh god, just make sure when you do the sex scene you don't have noises that sound like you're
plunging a fucking toilet.
Other than that, this looks FUCKING FANTASTIC.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:48 No.1545228
get a trip so i can follow your shit, mang
>> [_] !o1X/S/ZyoU 08/03/11(Wed)10:52 No.1545230
>>1545228
Sure thing
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude 08/03/11(Wed)10:54 No.1545231
kay
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude 08/03/11(Wed)10:55 No.1545232
>>1545228
Sorry I messed up
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:56 No.1545233
>I guess it can't be helped
I'm so fucking hard right now
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)10:56 No.1545234
i am 100% in support of this, the animations are looking very good so far, good luck finishing
the rest mate
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)11:06 No.1545237
>>1545191
Looking great, are you planning on doing Imp Midna later on by any chance?
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)11:07 No.1545238
delicious OC? on my /f/?
>> [_] !o1X/S/ZyoU 08/03/11(Wed)11:14 No.1545239
>>1545237
OoT for now
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)11:17 No.1545242
I'd fap to it.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)11:39 No.1545251
I bet her pussy smells like fish
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude 08/03/11(Wed)11:42 No.1545252
After this, what do?
>> [_] Criminal Justice 08/03/11(Wed)11:53 No.1545255
>It can't be helped
OK, Next you put "My hips are moving on their own!" and we have a deal.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)12:00 No.1545258
Holding faps until full version comes out.
NOT!!!
This is another thing that's never going to be finished.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)12:02 No.1545259
oh boy, another nintendo hentai flash that will never be completed.
If you do push on though, you definitely need an anal scene.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)12:02 No.1545260
itll be like fucking a mermaid
as in, you cant do it. She doesnt have a vagoo.
I checked in OoT
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude 08/03/11(Wed)12:09 No.1545263
>>1545258
Oh boy I can't wait until I prove you wrong, get ready to fap soon anon.
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude 08/03/11(Wed)12:10 No.1545264
Damn, I just thought about it. This segments is gonna have one hell of a bitter sweet ending
>> [_] Criminal Justice 08/03/11(Wed)12:13 No.1545266
>>1545263
I don't wanna shit on your parade but I hope you at least take it easy first, forcing yourself to
finish it isn't really a good idea.
Of course you might already know this, but I'm just sayian.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)12:17 No.1545267
>>1545266
I want this thing near perfection, I'm just saying it's WILL be done and will be done right
>> [_] noko Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)12:30 No.1545271
>Of course you might already know this, but I'm just sayian
> but I'm just sayian
>sayian
oh god it gunna be super
>> [_] anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)12:35 No.1545273
r/ that it says cumming soon XD
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)12:46 No.1545276
There are a lot of flashes like this floating around.
Half-finished ones I mean.
I really, really hope this doesn't get forgotten by the creator. This is looking fantastic so
far. The animation is great, and actually setting up a little scenario is something more need to
do. Hats off to you, OP. <3
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)12:53 No.1545279
Cant wait till its finished. Looking great so far.
Dialogue is a bit iffy, but meh, who watches this shit for the dialogue anyway.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)13:01 No.1545284
Well, it's true taht the count of forgotten flashes is so high, it's becoming hard to believe any
posted tests will ever be finished.
Test looks good though.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)13:26 No.1545291
HER REAL EYES ARE THE THINGS AT THE SIDES OF HER HEAD.
THE 'NORMAL' EYES ARE FAKE AND USED TO ATTRACT A MATE.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)13:31 No.1545293
>>1545291
I'd work on me, NO REGRETS
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)13:32 No.1545294
>What do you wish? Just tell me...
Chapter 2 of Monster Girl Quest. Please...?
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)13:41 No.1545298
Looks delolicious
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude 08/03/11(Wed)13:50 No.1545300
Op here, this is going to be loosely based on the Bad Zelda comic
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)13:51 No.1545301
Mweep
Mweep
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)14:16 No.1545307
Tomorrow I'm going to pose the standard loops (no actions put in) for the 3 positions
(vag,anal,oral). How's that sound?
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)14:16 No.1545308
>>1545212
you lie
>> [_] Criminal Justice 08/03/11(Wed)14:24 No.1545309
Jesus Christ 50+ replies, cool beans.
>>1545301
Holy shit how about you use that sound effect for an Ass rubbing/hotdogging scene.
Could be optional and it'll be definitely fucking hilarious.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)14:26 No.1545310
>>1545309
Dude, you just gave me a huge raging boner.
The hotdogging part that is.
>> [_] Criminal Justice 08/03/11(Wed)14:30 No.1545313
>>1545310
Everything related to a round, shiny ass is good MAXIMUM BONER material.
That would have to wait though, I'd rather OP finish his stuff, make it how he wants THEN some
other ideas, wouldn't want him to leave this unfinished because of too much ideas scrambling up
his priorities or something like that.
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude 08/03/11(Wed)14:33 No.1545314
>>1545313
Oh god, that's too good to pass up.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)14:52 No.1545319
Op, I think this is awesome, but remember that ruto and link are to be married, its part of how
he obtains the last spiritual stone. Also, Imo, add the ability to use links items sexually. Also
since shes a fish, make he a bit strechy. Also Potions could have cool effects, Like bigger
breasts or some thing. I think that you have some thing here with insane potential. Keep it up,
consider our ideas here, and when its done, Post it every day at least once so I don't miss it
XD. Also, if you have a website or a donate thing, link it up. If this turns out awesome, I'm
donating, You don't know how hard it is to find a decent Ruto smut piece. My omplements OP!
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)14:52 No.1545320
72 HOURS REMAIN
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)15:03 No.1545324
>>1545319
>bigger breasts
YOU UNCLEAN HEATHEN DFC RUTO IS A GIFT FROM THE VIDEO GAME GODS.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)15:08 No.1545327
>>1545324
What he said
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)15:10 No.1545328
ITT people asking for too much too quick. I just want the thing finished first with maybe an oral
and an anal option. Later on we can get more options.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)15:27 No.1545333
Sweet Jesus 63 Replies?
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)15:27 No.1545334
>>1545328
>anal option
this
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)15:35 No.1545341
It's 3 boxes of text and mostly static images.. how is this worth 60+ replies of how good it will
be?
There's nothing to judge this on right now. Come back with H scenes or not at all. I don't give a
solid fuck about any of the dialogue.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)15:36 No.1545342
Dialogue is too slow. Let spacebar skip it or something.
>> [_] DoubleU !MYdoubleV. 08/03/11(Wed)15:54 No.1545349
I'll be waiting for the full version, OP. So far it's cute and I think the dialogue needs a
'mouseclick to skip dialogue loading'. I'm not complaining, it's that most people just want to
have a speedfap and don't give much shits about the dialogue.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)15:55 No.1545350
>>1545334
>>1545309
These
Also seven hearts. He just busted out of Jabujabu, not into the Deku Tree.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)16:24 No.1545355
I'd say don't bother with that mist in the background. It's just distracting.
Usable items would be cool, but wait to implement that (if you choose to) until after you finish
the normal sex scene(s).
Maybe a funny sort of 'Game Over' scene if you click "Nothing really..."
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)16:27 No.1545356
Looks good OP. Good luck with the production. Will be looking forward to it.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)16:41 No.1545357
Vaginal > Anal
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)16:55 No.1545361
>>1545350
It's a three heart run, you casual.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)17:04 No.1545363
so like, how long til its done?
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)17:19 No.1545366
>>1545357
Nah.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)17:45 No.1545377
>>1545366
Yeah, your right, cant get shit on your dick unless its anal.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)17:50 No.1545382
If the one fucking is anyone other than Young Link I'm going to kill you in your sleep.
You better keep the fucking timelines straight, fellow animator!
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)18:03 No.1545388
>>1545377
Fictional characters' asses contain no shit. You silly.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)18:06 No.1545389
i would very much like to follow the progress on this, oh if only you had some sort of site that
could show us your progress on your work at any time we needed to do so, instead of being lucky
enough to be on for a certain day
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude 08/03/11(Wed)18:12 No.1545391
Op here. I will make daily updates on the game here on /f/. Tomorrow expect what I said on
>>1545307
Gonna be working on it to be near perfection. thanks for the support! I do take note on the
ideas, and hopefully, I can put it in the game.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)18:50 No.1545408
>boner stirring up when she blurted out it can't be helped
>COMING SOON!
Fucking hell...
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)18:52 No.1545409
so, did I hear that right, did you take sound effects from the party techn flashes?
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)18:52 No.1545410
>>1545391
I'm with the crowd on changing the "it can't be helped" line. It doesn't really fit, plus it's
cliche in japan stuff.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)19:33 No.1545419
here I thought the [H] content actually helps me and now it leaves me back with a boner.
I mean, yeah, okay, maybe Malon would be better but no, there's none at all.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)19:36 No.1545422
Holy shit, why isn't this conversation taking this taking place in Zora's fountain where Jabu
Jabu hangs out
>> [_] spacey @_@ 08/03/11(Wed)19:40 No.1545423
you could add more dialog options, as opposed to a straight dialog line, and throw one or two bad
ends in there that ay people will run down every single text path to get to sexy times to see how
many pretenses you can fuck her under like
1 - saved your life you owe me (like a baus end)
2 - you sat on my head for an hour in that dungeon you know you want it (get in their head end)
>> [_] part 2 spacey @_@ 08/03/11(Wed)19:41 No.1545424
3 - fuck reasoning, rape (bad end) navi or jabujabu or the elite zora gaurd stops you
4 - rape (good end) pull out the ocarina of time drop it on the ground and put a chip in it and
when you play the sun song it stops the zora guards instead of redeads and you escape with the
princess, who is a petrified statue for awhilemor play the song of super time and freeze time and
get away with her, something like that
5 - I'm marrying you and we were meant to be since you gave me the zora stone (cheesy romantic
end)
6 - im 10, your 10 we are morally upright youths and will obstain from sexy times (bad end) BUT
leads off to the end of the water temple fully developed ruto scene :p (secret end)
well those are some ideas, you said you're bad with dialog would you like me to write up some
word play routes?
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude 08/03/11(Wed)19:48 No.1545426
>>1545423
>>1545424
I like those ideas, I'll work on some endings. First I have to do the sex scenes. I'll do the
rest after that's done
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)19:52 No.1545427
Needs a way to skip her talking.
It takes too damn long to press "forward" so I can skip that shit.
>> [_] Falcon Woot 08/03/11(Wed)19:57 No.1545429
Five questions.
1. How long do you think it will take to complete this? Because it's really good.
2. Will it incorporate the young and future versions of everyone? (I see that you put in the
young version of Princess Ruto, so I was curious (Unless that's supposed to be adult Ruto in
which the proportions are pretty... off)).
3. Will it incorporate actual game play and decisions, like a puzzle game (hammer + stone =
pathway) to keep the Zelda-ish feel, or will it be a pick-your-path game where you are faced with
an obstacle and have to make a decision (like the Meet-and-Fuck games).
4. Will you do a Wind Waker version?
5. What'd you use to make this?
>> [_] Falcon Woot 08/03/11(Wed)19:57 No.1545430
Also, if you do it like the real game (with progression and a plot), maybe you can make the other
answers, like "Nothing really..." just lead to them giving you the crystal like in the real game
(to progress the game faster just in case you'd rather do it with the adult Ruto and you want to
hurry the gameplay to reach it sooner (idk why anyone would skip a sex scene, but you never
know)).
And Ruto could keep her eye like that as though she's checking him out like, "err... Well, you
ARE cooler than I thought you'd be... Just a little bit" It actually does fit, because when you
say "Your virginity" her eyes widen and become proportional.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)19:59 No.1545432
>>1545424
#6 is a perfect candidate for "nothing really"
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)19:59 No.1545433
WHY DOES THIS HAVE SO MANY REPLIES?!
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)20:01 No.1545434
>>1545430
Zelda room script is pretty basic. You can find it in google.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)20:01 No.1545435
I really, really, REALLY hope you don't put pointless stuf in like >>1545429 mentioned. Please no
jumping through hoops for the porn or Meet-n-Fuck dialogue trees (ones that do stuff are fine but
please no click-until-you-get-the-right-one bullshit).
You can go ahead and do those anyway, I'm just an anon. But I really hope you don't, it's just so
pointless and this looks like it'll be so good~
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)20:03 No.1545439
open /f/
95 comments
Oh shit son
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)20:06 No.1545442
I liked the animations. They were way better than what I was expecting.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)20:08 No.1545443
my opinion is it this is going to be epic and when this is done you are going to hero
>> [_] 4chan/f/dude 08/03/11(Wed)20:14 No.1545445
>90+ comments
Thank you guys for supporting me, I'll be sure to include all of you in the credits. Remember
it's in its Alpha state, I'll be sure to make changes and improve everyday. I won't pull a Capcom
on you guys
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)20:14 No.1545446
100 comment get
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)20:30 No.1545455
for those of you still debating the vaginal /anal option i have some scientific news. fish only
have one hole down there, for all three orifice needs. Its called a cloaca. same for birds.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)20:51 No.1545463
>>1545455
>Fish Person
>logic
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)21:16 No.1545467
102 COMMENTS WTF?!
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)21:29 No.1545471
WHY ISNT IT FINISH GOD DAMMIT
FUUUUUUUUUUUUU
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)21:30 No.1545472
I GUESS IT CAN'T BE HELPED.
I'LL HAVE TO USE "THAT"
>> [_] TheDoctor 08/03/11(Wed)21:42 No.1545476
hm good, but how about making the text scroll faster? like, have it how it is, but click and it
finishes instantly?
and maybe hit spacebar to the next dialog
>> [_] Criminal Justice 08/03/11(Wed)21:48 No.1545479
>100+
What the ACTUAL fuck? Holy shit bro this is some support.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)21:53 No.1545480
>>1545435
THIS. THIS.
9001 TIMES THIS.
No Meet and Fuck loops. If there is a dialog choice, it had better damn well do something, or you
are wasting my time.
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)22:24 No.1545486
Malon better be in this
>> [_] Anonymous 08/03/11(Wed)22:32 No.1545489
>>1545260
>implying they'd put in vagoos in a kids game
