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[_] [H] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)06:06 No.

  hope you enjoy shit

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>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)06:07 No.

     ha
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     ah
     ooh
     ugh

>> [_] Anonymous Delivers TM !e2NhBHl.sc 11/01/08(Sat)06:18 No.

     wtf

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)06:25 No.

     ... mmm I see what your doing there

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)06:25 No.

     Well..I'm disappointed..

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)06:27 No.

     when the first zone mini came out, I was like, "uhh.. this kind of sucks." When the second one
     came out - I was even more disappointed; not only because it also sucked just as much, but
     because now there were two in a row that sucked. Each one after the next up until this shit
     seems to just get worse.

     Apparently my beliefs have yet to end; all Zone Minis that are currently out and that will
     ever come out are and will be complete fucking shit.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)06:29 No.

     >>842969
     And all from just one girl too. Apparently the other one doesn't feel pleasure until the very
     last second.

     >>842976
     And we finally got lesbianism too.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)06:30 No.

     >>842978
     At least in comparison to full videos. I have to admit that I didn't mind the Dominion Tank
     Police one. Not saying I liked it, just didn't mind it. The mind set is though that the Rozen
     Maiden one is the best.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)06:50 No.

     This one kinda sucks... Liked all the other ones.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)06:54 No.

     No Cube? I am severely disappointed, but I still fap'd.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)06:57 No.

     Whilst I do not particularly like this one, I am happy to say that ZONE gave me a full refund
     for this free flash. No sage here, because despite my important opinion, this is quality we
     seldom get.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)07:42 No.

     I liked the other ZONE minis and really everything ZONE's ever done, but this is pretty bad :(

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)08:46 No.

     >>842979
     wrong. They both gasp and such, Faggot. Try actually watching the video.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)09:18 No.

     I fucking hate that he's burning up characters I like on these shitty minis.

     I'd be willing to wait longer if he's just make them full flashes. I don't even fucking know
     why I keep my hentaikey for this shit.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)09:45 No.

     >>843010
     Faggot who pays for his porn.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)11:13 No.

     fucking hot girls, pretty good clip. Good work!

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)13:12 No.

     >>843005
     >>843018
     Only faggots calls other people faggots.

     But really, watching the video you really only hear one girl moaning unless you click on them,
     and then finally the second one pipes up. What? Is she immune before that very point?

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)13:22 No.

     WHAT HAVE YOU DONE, ZONE?

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)13:27 No.

     I dunno what you guys are talking about, I like this

     I do agree with >>843010 though, STOP USING MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS FOR MINI'S, ZONE

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)13:31 No.

     MOER PLOX

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)13:44 No.

     For Zone's first girl-on-girl attempt, this is pretty shitty.

>> [_] i8246i 11/01/08(Sat)14:23 No.

     I've usually enjoyed Zone's flashes

     ...but I agree that some of these mini flashes A: burn up possible characters Zone could have
     used in a later, more developed flashes

     and B: some of these minis fucking suck

     Seriously, Zone, a fucktarded 14 year old on Newgrounds could have done this one better

     And why why oh WHY did you delegate suiseseki to a mini flash? I mean, did you remember how
     fucking crazy it once was around the image boards with Rozen Maiden? Did you forget "the desu
     flash"? Did you forget "perverted jun"? Did you forget "Desu-a-thon 2006"? Did you forget the
     100k flashes with some random shit happening and "desu!" put in the background?

     Your mini flash was only 5% of what we Rozen Maiden faggots desired. We wanted you to at least
     go as epic as the Midna flash (but without BCS...I still don't know if I like her art style
     for that flash or not)

     here, I'll become a namefag so you all can bitch at me properly

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)14:23 No.

     Well that's the last inch of my childhood before I became a teenager destroyed

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)14:28 No.

     >>843089

     I think Zone would care more if you were a paying customer. You're here pirating all her shit,
     she's not gonna give a fuck what you think.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)14:50 No.

     >>843091
     >her
     >she

     Hehe.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)15:05 No.

     >>843089
     agreed, i never did like the midna flash for various reasons but i remember the massive
     /f/storm it caused.

     >>843091
     tee hee.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)15:08 No.

     >>843089
     Heh, why don't you just buy flash and make it yourself? huh? cos at the end of the day he's
     getting paid it, so why'd he care what a troll like you'd think? If you're so bothered about
     it, accept it that things dont always go the way you want them do and make the basterd
     yourself!

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)15:10 No.

     >>843097
     why are you so bothered we dont like this flash? what zealous vendetta do you have against us?

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)15:15 No.

     >>843098
     not liking a flash is one thing, but simply bitching about it isnt gonna make the situation
     change. If I made a flash, then people simply bitched about it, that wouldnt be the kind of
     thing that'd influence me to make another that was what the people bitching wanted.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)15:17 No.

     I wish we could get together to make some sort of donation box. If all I had to do was give 5
     bux every month or so and that would add up to a new, full PAID flash from Zone... Well, I
     think everybody would win.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)15:24 No.

     >>843100
     We're on a board that has a comment system, its pretty obvious zone doesn't care what we say.
     i8246i did say that most of the loops suck and did not down zone entirely like your claimed
     'trolls' do.

     We're on /f/, things we say will rarely effect what happens with or in a flash. He's simply
     exclaiming his disappointment with zones late work, an opinion polar to yours.

     well that was too much text.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)15:27 No.

     wouldn't a spray can fucking hurt

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)15:31 No.

     >>843105
     wouldn't your left leg hurt if your thigh was longer then your abdomen?

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)15:35 No.

     >>843107
     sec checking...

     huuuuuh would you look at that

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)15:45 No.

     i liked it, i saved it. good job ZONE.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)16:17 No.

     I'm with little one one two above me, I dont mind it, saved and fapped.

>> [_] ZONE !vroT8j4/dM 11/01/08(Sat)17:12 No.

     I don't mind constructive criticism, but no one has explained exactly why they don't like this.

     If it's the sound, those are the only noises they make in the game, if it's the way the
     characters look, this is also they way they are drawn in the game. If there are any other
     reasons, please let me know so I can improve on them in the future.

     Also, minis do not stop characters from getting full flashes at all.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)17:18 No.

     >>843147
     It's meh to the extreme...

>> [_] ZONE !vroT8j4/dM 11/01/08(Sat)17:28 No.

     >>843148 It's meh to the extreme...

     So the problem is that it's not hardcore/extreme enough? Or is it bad art/bad animation? A
     detailed description would be nice. It's hard to extrapolate the exact problems from 'it's
     meh'.

     People should not expect the same level of extremity in minis as in full flashes. They are not
     intended to compete with them in terms of volume & variety of content.

     And again, they do not stop any character from having their own full flash. Some really good
     characters won't see a full flash for a while, so the minis are there to tide people over
     until they do.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)17:29 No.

     what a shit

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)17:43 No.

     >>843152
     I would say put some level of interaction besides that one click you get. Make it feel more
     like a game than just a loop

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)17:45 No.

     I liked this. It was pretty cool and kinda funny.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)17:51 No.

     >>843152

     I agree with >>843161, in that interactivity is what makes flashes interesting-- but the logo
     at the beginning does identify these as flash loops, so I can't say that that's actually a
     problem with the flash?

>> [_] ZONE !vroT8j4/dM 11/01/08(Sat)17:56 No.

     If the problem people have with this is that it is not a full game, then nothing can be done.
     Minis are a single loop of animation with a cum button. They exist so that there is content in
     between the major games which now take a lot longer than a single month to complete.

     And it must be stressed again, they are not intended to replace full games in any sense. If a
     character is used in a mini, they can still have a full game made of them, and it does not
     detract from their chances at all.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)18:11 No.

     >>843147

     I liked this mini, but I'm gonna try and give some constructive criticism

     Their movements looked too robotic, too piston-like, not at all like the way lesbians do it.
     As far as the voices, I seem to remember them screaming if you fell a long distance in the
     game. That would be cool to hear during the orgasms. Also I'm not digging the spray can sex.
     Good idea, but just regular scissoring would have been sexier.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)18:20 No.

     Yeah the animation and art is just cheesy, and this is coming from someone who thought all the
     other minis were great

>> [_] ZONE !vroT8j4/dM 11/01/08(Sat)18:36 No.

     >>843178
     JSRF now seems to freeze on the 360 every time you go to the garage so it was not possible to
     access the high levels to jump off a building and make them scream, unfortunately. That's also
     where you turn the music down so audio had to be captured holding a mic up to the central
     speaker (the one where the voices feed through) to block out the music.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)18:40 No.

     i for one masturbated and enjoyed this, i just hate the souseiki one

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)18:44 No.

     >>843193

     That's too bad. Which flash are you gonna work on next, if you don't mind me asking?

>> [_] ZONE !vroT8j4/dM 11/01/08(Sat)18:45 No.

     >>843196
     Hatsune Miku mini & Jinx

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)19:03 No.

     >>843198
     Haha, nice :3

     Ok for a real problem with this mini, Gum's Chest looks really odd. Perspective seems to be
     off, her butt goes in one direction, her chest in another, and her head is completely flat.
     The head is "over-lookable" but the chest just bugs me :P

>> [_] ZONE !vroT8j4/dM 11/01/08(Sat)19:12 No.

     >>843202
     The logic was that she has to rotate her torso to reach behind like that. Her butt and chest
     ought to point in slightly different directions.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)19:26 No.

     >>843204
     Hmm, I sorta see that, but the boobs still look really low on the body. I figured it was just
     perspective but if it isn't then I don't know what's goin' on.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)19:39 No.

     >>843152
     it's lesbians zone, we want to see rugs being munched!

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)20:03 No.

     >>843204
     I like the mini loops. It's a good mix to have both.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)20:38 No.

     I appreciate Zone taking the time to respond to criticism.

     Not saying I agree one way or the other, but being approachable to people watching your shit
     free beats threatening legal action any day.

     ALL of the full flashes have been quality, in any case.

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)20:44 No.

     >>843228
     Too bad the collective has no way of verifying the poster's identity as Zone... But for the
     mean time, assumptions could be made. Lets just hope it won't make an "ass" out of "u" and "me"

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)20:58 No.

     ZONE SUCKS

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)21:09 No.

     >>843231
     ORLY?
     zone-archive.com/tripfag.gif

>> [_] Anonymous 11/01/08(Sat)21:10 No.

     >>843231
     It's the real tripcode.

     And it's not like the rapidshare links are constantly being killed, unlike certain other
     fapmongers I can think of.