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>> demo of editor (hentai) 18apr2013(th)19:53 No.6283 OP P1
demo editor unfinished
a demo unfinished before making the real game. i look for halp on the grphic characters:
imajin@hotmail.fr
[IMG] editor.swf (1.38 MiB)
1366x768, Compressed. 2 frames, 30 fps (00:00).
Ver10, AS3. Network access: No. Text: No.
Bitmaps: No. Audio: No. Video: No. <METADATA>
>> Anonymous 19apr2013(fr)00:56 No.6284 A P2R1
doesnt look that bad right now though, did you draw the current graphics yourself?
>> Anonymous 19apr2013(fr)06:10 No.6289 B P3R2
your engrish could use some editing
>> Anonymous 19apr2013(fr)08:23 No.6290 C P4R3
>>6289
Don't be an asshole.
>>6283
Looks alright, needs improvement like better use of wording, smoother edges on character designs,
less text at once; I'm sure you already know all of this. Good luck with the rest of it.
>> mallau x rika update 19apr2013(fr)21:49 No.6294 OP P5R4
answer
thank you guys for advices!!!
for most of them i redrew behind existing characters. I intend to make original characters for real
version.
i'm french so my english may sux, sorry guys!
text is alot in the beginning. will shorten then
i look for collaborators if you want :)
>> Anonymous 20apr2013(sa)07:58 No.6298 C P6R5
>>6294
Just post an updated version every now and again and just ask what people think need to be improved.
