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>> demo of editor (hentai) 6283 demo editor unfinished a demo unfinished before making the real game. i look for halp on the grphic characters: imajin@hotmail.fr [IMG] editor.swf (1.38 MiB) 1366x768, Compressed. 2 frames, 30 fps (00:00). Ver10, AS3. Network access: Text: Bitmaps: Audio: Video: <METADATA>
>> Anon 6284 doesnt look that bad right now though, did you draw the current graphics yourself?
>> Anon 6289 your engrish could use some editing
>> Anon 6290 >># Don't be an asshole. >># Looks alright, needs improvement like better use of wording, smoother edges on character designs, less text at once; I'm sure you already know all of this. Good luck with the rest of it.
>> mallau x rika update 6294 answer thank you guys for advices!!! for most of them i redrew behind existing characters. I intend to make original characters for real version. i'm french so my english may sux, sorry guys! text is alot in the beginning. will shorten then i look for collaborators if you want :)
>> Anon 6298 >># Just post an updated version every now and again and just ask what people think need to be improved.