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[_] [L] Feedback on our project! The Dragon Guys !tiB3yBGc/A!!7m/O7McPzIn 1484839 Please leave feedback: Does it make sense? What could we do to improve?
>> [_] Anon 1484841 no sound?
>> [_] The Dragon Guys !tiB3yBGc/A!!7m/O7McPzIn 1484846 >># I'll be making a soundtrack once it's complete. Mainly just ambient noises and effects. (perhaps a battle theme.)
>> [_] Anon 1484851 This was shit when you uploaded it last time, and it's still shit now. Improve it in the following ways: 1. realize /f/ is not the place to post shit flash animations you made with your friends full of inside jokes that aren't funny to anyone else. 2. realize /f/ is not the place to post baby's first flash animation. 3. your monkey appears to be moonwalking, this may or may not be intentional. if it is intentional, congratulations your flash animation has one redeeming quality. if it isn't, learn to fucking animate. 4. also learn to draw.
>> [_] Anon 1484852 I saw the title and thought of Enslaved
>> [_] Anon 1484860 >># >inside jokes that aren't funny to anyone else WELCOME TO THE INTERTNET not that this shit is anywhere near a meme, but guess how any meme is born also >># feedback on /f/, best be trolling nigga
>> [_] The Dragon Guys !tiB3yBGc/A!!7m/O7McPzIn 1484862 >># It's you again! At least you've said 'Learn to Draw' rather than 'Learn to Art' this time! Good to know we've improved. It's our first project together. It must certainly make a change to the usual reposts and stuff you get here. If you browse /f/ for a month then the next month it's just the same stuff again. Some OC for you! The monkey isn't infact moonwalking, but he is skipping.
>> [_] Anon 1484885 was i the only one confused by the NASA UK? if he's with the North American Space Association then hes American not a Brit.
>> [_] Anon 1484887 there is a song called monkey vs robot monkey hate technology robot hate the monkey they will fight eternally MONKEYYYY VERSUS ROOOOBBBOOOOTTT
>> [_] Anon 1484889 This. Is. Horrible.
>> [_] Anon 1484895 can't find the server at images.4chan.org what do
>> [_] Anon 1484901 >># nvm, apperantly it's redirecting me to images.4channel.org Strange.
>> [_] Anon 1484915 I'd suggest reading through some books on animation, try working on a traditional medium before working in flash. You've got a lot of wasted empty space filled with a very flat background. You need to work on the framing as well, the only reason I knew to watch the monkey was because it was titular and because it was white on dark colors. Also, learn to use the fucking fill button, don't leave holes in the fucking pictures, and if you plan to come back with "well that's just our style" you can go eat a billion dicks and I hope your mothers delete your copy of Flash off the computer and restrict your internet time. You also need to consider that while it's more friendly to file-size to do 24 fps (the default) it's easier to animate at either 15 or 30 fps, the former looking choppier if you do it wrong. 24 fps, unless you know exactly how to work with it, will just leave a really shitty uncanny valley in any animation you do.
>> [_] Anon 1484916 looks like shit.
>> [_] Anon 1484917 >># This is what I was expecting to find. I was horribly disappointed.