File[Monkey-Versus-Robot.swf] - (226 KB)
[_] [L] Feedback on our project! The Dragon Guys !tiB3yBGc/A!!7m/O7McPzIn 03/19/11(Sat)10:20
No.

  Please leave feedback:

  Does it make sense?

  What could we do to improve?

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)10:22 No.

  no sound?

>> [_] The Dragon Guys !tiB3yBGc/A!!7m/O7McPzIn 03/19/11(Sat)10:55 No.

  >>1484841
  I'll be making a soundtrack once it's complete. Mainly just ambient noises and effects. (perhaps
  a battle theme.)

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)11:33 No.

  This was shit when you uploaded it last time, and it's still shit now.

  Improve it in the following ways:
  1. realize /f/ is not the place to post shit flash animations you made with your friends full of
  inside jokes that aren't funny to anyone else.
  2. realize /f/ is not the place to post baby's first flash animation.
  3. your monkey appears to be moonwalking, this may or may not be intentional. if it is
  intentional, congratulations your flash animation has one redeeming quality. if it isn't, learn
  to fucking animate.
  4. also learn to draw.

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)11:34 No.

  I saw the title and thought of Enslaved

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)12:07 No.

  >>1484851
  >inside jokes that aren't funny to anyone else
  WELCOME TO THE INTERTNET
  not that this shit is anywhere near a meme, but guess how any meme is born

  also
  >>1484839
  feedback on /f/, best be trolling nigga

>> [_] The Dragon Guys !tiB3yBGc/A!!7m/O7McPzIn 03/19/11(Sat)12:08 No.

  >>1484851
  It's you again! At least you've said 'Learn to Draw' rather than 'Learn to Art' this time! Good
  to know we've improved. It's our first project together. It must certainly make a change to the
  usual reposts and stuff you get here. If you browse /f/ for a month then the next month it's just
  the same stuff again. Some OC for you! The monkey isn't infact moonwalking, but he is skipping.

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)13:16 No.

  was i the only one confused by the NASA UK?
  if he's with the North American Space Association then hes American not a Brit.

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)13:19 No.

  there is a song called monkey vs robot

  monkey hate technology
  robot hate the monkey
  they will fight eternally
  MONKEYYYY VERSUS ROOOOBBBOOOOTTT

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)13:23 No.

  This.
  Is.
  Horrible.

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)14:09 No.

  can't find the server at images.4chan.org

  what do

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)14:47 No.

  >>1484895
  nvm, apperantly it's redirecting me to images.4channel.org

  Strange.

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)17:47 No.

  I'd suggest reading through some books on animation, try working on a traditional medium before
  working in flash. You've got a lot of wasted empty space filled with a very flat background. You
  need to work on the framing as well, the only reason I knew to watch the monkey was because it
  was titular and because it was white on dark colors.

  Also, learn to use the fucking fill button, don't leave holes in the fucking pictures, and if you
  plan to come back with "well that's just our style" you can go eat a billion dicks and I hope
  your mothers delete your copy of Flash off the computer and restrict your internet time. You also
  need to consider that while it's more friendly to file-size to do 24 fps (the default) it's
  easier to animate at either 15 or 30 fps, the former looking choppier if you do it wrong. 24 fps,
  unless you know exactly how to work with it, will just leave a really shitty uncanny valley in
  any animation you do.

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)17:50 No.

  looks like shit.

>> [_] Anonymous 03/19/11(Sat)17:59 No.

  >>1484887
  This is what I was expecting to find.

  I was horribly disappointed.