File: AP.swf-(205 KB, 650x490, Loop)
[_] Critique Please Anonymous 01/04/14(Sat)18:20 No.2248223
Same loop. Hopefully I fixed some issues. I still have small stuff to fix, but I want to make
sure I'm doing things right.
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 01/04/14(Sat)18:25 No.2248230
Nipples don't come out of your collarbone.
>> [_] John Moses Browning 01/04/14(Sat)18:25 No.2248233
She is blinking now
You really care for critique. very nice
Maybe the man could move just a little bit, too? Can't find any problem, looks great
>> [_] Anonymous 01/04/14(Sat)18:25 No.2248234
yeah get rid of the nips and use some thicker lines in there.
>> [_] Anonymous 01/04/14(Sat)18:32 No.2248244
>>2248223
lower the breast, and hide it more/show the other one. This looks unnatural. Man could do some
small movements too. Except that it's not half bad
>> [_] Anonymous 01/04/14(Sat)18:34 No.2248246
>>2248244
ah, also orrect the shoulder line, here puu.sh/69Jny.png , it looks a bit like her arm is
separated from the rost of her body
>> [_] Astronomer 01/04/14(Sat)21:33 No.2248418
Tits are still way too high, it looks horribly deformed.
>> [_] Anonymous 01/04/14(Sat)22:09 No.2248458
Make it two dudes.
>> [_] Anonymous 01/04/14(Sat)22:14 No.2248463
The background looks like it was done in ms paint by a child.
>> [_] Anonymous 01/04/14(Sat)22:15 No.2248466
Not gay enough.
>> [_] Anonymous 01/04/14(Sat)22:45 No.2248495
What's the point of this when super deepthroat exists? As a matter of fact, I'm pretty sure this
exact skin already exists for that, although much better looking.
