File: AP.swf-(205 KB, 650x490, Loop)
[_] Critique Please Anon 2248223 Same loop. Hopefully I fixed some issues. I still have small stuff to fix, but I want to make sure I'm doing things right. Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 2248230 Nipples don't come out of your collarbone.
>> [_] John Moses Browning 2248233 She is blinking now You really care for critique. very nice Maybe the man could move just a little bit, too? Can't find any problem, looks great
>> [_] Anon 2248234 yeah get rid of the nips and use some thicker lines in there.
>> [_] Anon 2248244 >># lower the breast, and hide it more/show the other one. This looks unnatural. Man could do some small movements too. Except that it's not half bad
>> [_] Anon 2248246 >># ah, also orrect the shoulder line, here puu.sh/69Jny.png , it looks a bit like her arm is separated from the rost of her body
>> [_] Astronomer 2248418 Tits are still way too high, it looks horribly deformed.
>> [_] Anon 2248458 Make it two dudes.
>> [_] Anon 2248463 The background looks like it was done in ms paint by a child.
>> [_] Anon 2248466 Not gay enough.
>> [_] Anon 2248495 What's the point of this when super deepthroat exists? As a matter of fact, I'm pretty sure this exact skin already exists for that, although much better looking.