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[_] [H] WARNIN: Read the comment first Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)10:52 No.956886
WARNING: This flash contains adult content. Open it on your own risk.
Change log:
- Changed the Name (so stop bitching about that)
- Changed the figure (smaller waist, bigger hips)
- Changed the nipples (if you don't like them now: FUCK OFF. I'm not going to change them again)
- Changed her eyes
- Fixed the bug that when you clicked a tool while the camera was equipted it still made a photo.
NOTICE: This is only a TEST flash to get critique. There is still much to do and I don't have
that much time. Eventually I need to drop this project completely. If I choose to, I'll make a
fla with comments so it's easier to understand the code. Anyway, if you are interested in the
current fla just post and I'll upload it.
Please comment about what you like/dislike.
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)10:59 No.956890
oh god I can't do it! not with those eyes looking at me.
>> [_] 04/19/09(Sun)11:03 No.956891
WHERE IS CORRY!!!
I WANT CORRY IN DA HOUSE!! ಥ_ಥ
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)11:04 No.956893
looks fucking retarded. fix that shit nigga!
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)11:07 No.956895
>>956893
the eyes?
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)11:09 No.956896
FIX THE FUCKING NIPPLES
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)11:11 No.956897
and the boobs while you're at it. god damn, look at those
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)11:14 No.956898
~_~
Tell me what you want. Fix the nippels is nothing I can work with. I think they are ok. Do you
want them bigger or what?
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)11:17 No.956900
>>956898
They are fine, anon is just not being a bro.
Just keep adding stuff. Since you got the basics down, put more features down, code more
reactions, etc. I also noticed that the love meter goes beyond 100.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)11:17 No.956902
Are you the anonymous who hacked cuteboyisland?
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)11:19 No.956903
Yes, I forgot to fix that. Basicly I'm planing on making a new scene with a new position after
100 is reached. But that's quite complicated, since I than need to draw everything new.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)11:20 No.956904
1) The eyes need to look brighter, she looks retarded. Just go check out her face in the manga
and see what I mean, she looks like she's got autism or something.
2) Why are we taking photos of her?
3) I'd like to see a bigger forehead but only because the hair gets in her eyes making her look
even more daft.
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)11:23 No.956907
>>956902
no
>>956904
1) Ok, gonna work on that again.
2) No purpose yet (only to get the meter up. (Maybe when I add a story I'll make it somehow
related.)
3)I can try to change that too. The only problem here is that I need to draw those things again,
which takes some time.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)11:32 No.956914
>>956886
IT DOESN'T FUCKING LOOK LIKE YOTSUBA. NOT. ONE. BIT. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
you take her shirt off and IT'S A FUCKING BOY.
Do you purposefully make this shit to look fucking retarded?
Yeah ok the eyes follow the currsor that's ok but how about giving her eyes THAT FUCKING LOOK
LIKE YOTSUBA'S?
Why the fuck are her arms so damn close to her side? i mean why are they fucking superglued to
her ass or something? wtf?
She should be IDENTICAL to fucking yotsuba. She shouldn't like a rendition that you could say,
yeah it's close i could see how that's yotsuba. no. It should be IDENTICAL.
Also, if only her eyes and hair move, then what's the point? give her a little bit of a breast.
the contour of her body... nigger just start all the way over. find something that looks good and
just put yotsubas head on top of it. fuck it. that shit is.. nah dude it's fucking begging for
cory to bust out
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)11:34 No.956916
>>956914
>LOLI RAPESIMULATOR
>REALISTIC GRAPHACS
>GIVE IT TO ME NOA
I loled
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)11:40 No.956921
>>956914
I started to work with what was allread in the flash. If you decompile the original and remove
the shirt you'll see what I mean.
>Do you purposefully make this shit to look fucking retarded?
If you can do it better, do it. No one's in your way. But before you do that just STFU. You don't
need to like it. I'm open for critique but this comment is just stupid flaming. SO FUCK YOU.
>Why the fuck are her arms so damn close to her side? i mean why are they fucking superglued to
her ass or something? wtf?
Again. I'm working with what allready was in the flash. Go to the dude who made this and tell him
to change it. Also you obviously didn't read the comment you referred to. THIS IS A FUCKING TEST
FLASH!!! GET OVER IT.
If you want me to change stuff it's not a smart move to use such a language towards me.
>> [_] Ren 04/19/09(Sun)11:51 No.956926
As a fellow programmer, let me teach you the biggest lesson there is to learn.
"Don't create anything in the hope that people will be grateful."
Even that huge Midna flash from Zone got bitched about 2 seconds after it was posted. So either
make stuff because you want to yourself, or don't do it at all.
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)12:00 No.956936
Yeah, I noticed by now.
Anyway, this is the only place I can get responses to the stuff I change/add. And even if ppl
flame it still helps me to improve things.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)12:00 No.956938
>>956921
BAWWWW MY FEEEEELINGS!!!
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)12:04 No.956940
Thank you for naming the file properly :)
Thank you for naming the file properly :)
Thank you for naming the file properly :)
Thank you for naming the file properly :)
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)12:05 No.956942
Haven't thouched this in ages, figured i'd upload it, feel free to use as you like, some things
fixed, some things redrawn etc, never got to the interactive part though.
Might do some more at some point but i won't up for it anytime soon.
http://rapidshare.com/files/223278994/whatever.rar
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)12:09 No.956946
>>956940
np
>>956942
Can't open the fla "unexpected file format"
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)12:22 No.956954
>>you take her shirt off and IT'S A FUCKING BOY.
She's fucking 4 you idiot what do you expect?
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)12:28 No.956957
>>956946
>>956950
Fixed my flash and tested downloading and opening, worked just fine, i do use cs4 though if that
could be a issue for you.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)12:33 No.956964
>>956957
CS4 is ok to. I don't got a full version, but a trail. I think I'll be able to convert that to 8.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)12:35 No.956966
FUCK ALL OF YOU ( ﾟДﾟ)ァﾊﾊ八八ﾉヽﾉヽﾉヽﾉ ＼ / ＼/ ＼
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)12:44 No.956973
so wtf does the magnifying glass do
i seee that you have to use pictures untill ytou can strip her completely but what
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)12:47 No.956975
>>956973
I was planing to let you magnify certain parts of her body. But I took it out since it created a
infinit zoom which led to a crash of my system every time I tried it. I'll probably going to
replace it with a different tool.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)13:05 No.956990
I think her eyes are fine. Her breasts on the other hand, try redoing the shadows. She can still
be pretty flat but look like less of a man chest if you play around with it a bit. The center
line is the problem. Add curvy shadows around each breast for the simplest effect.
Also, shouldn't her belly button be a little higher up? I think that would be an easy thing to
fix.
About the camera, maybe add in some text (God I sound like such a pervert) like "Wow, you were
cute as a kid, but now you're hot!" If she looked a bit more like the required 18 years old it
could work. Anyhow, use the camera to raise her... "interest" level to like 20, then use the hand
to raise it further by clicking on the goods. Like most [H] games.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)13:13 No.956998
>>956990
I made a pair of eyes true to the manga in >>956942.
Just replace the symbols.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)13:18 No.957004
>>956998
Just noticed one of the eyes needs to be mirrored.
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)13:27 No.957008
>>956990
Ok, I'll try to improve those parts (breasts & belly button). The problem is that the outlines
were drawn with a tablet as color areas and not as normal outlines. The belly button probably
appears to high now, because I changed her hip size a bit.
The part with the text is a good Idea, but I'll probably delay that till I make a story of some
kind.
Anyway, thanks for your opinion.
>>956998
>>957004
I redownloaded the file and it still wont work (maybe it's my version of CS4. I'll see if I can
find a full version. Thanks anyway)
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)13:30 No.957010
>The belly button probably appears to high now, because I changed her hip size a bit.
*too low
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)13:38 No.957018
>>957008
Perhaps it's because it's has a hidden property to to file?
Anyway, i've resaved it as CS3 and removed the hidden property.
http://rapidshare.com/files/223307669/whatever.rar
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)13:38 No.957021
She needs a penis
>> [_] Anonymous !qyMBV48RtA 04/19/09(Sun)13:43 No.957025
>>957018
Hmm... doesn't work either. I guess it really is my CS4 version. Gonna try to reinstall it again
and see if that worked.
Anyway, I'm off now and thanks for the file. I hope I get it to work somehow.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)14:13 No.957049
Whe you remove her shirt, she should have some breast bandage. When you succeed at removing the
bandages some huge boobs with puffy nipples should be popping out of that. When you remove the
shorts, the hips and thighs should just get rounder and larger, with a more erotic sense to it.
It would pretend to be a pedo-flash, and then it become a "growing-up Yotsuba" flash! That would
be great!
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)14:15 No.957052
>>957049
She should get some luscious sexy green pigtails too.
>> [_] The Doctor !DrboobzV9k 04/19/09(Sun)14:35 No.957072
>>957049
I agree that does sound cool, but it wouldn't be too easy to do.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)14:37 No.957077
>>957052
Fuck yeah, pigtails growing too. Also, lips getting fuller, she look at you in a sexy way....
GTFO, OP, HAVE ZONE MAKING THAT SHIT!!!
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)14:42 No.957082
How do I play this anyway?
I click on everything and NOTHING happens
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)14:43 No.957083
>>957072
>>too easy
I'm not talking about making a stupid "hood" or something like that. I want something worth
fapping to.
And I don't dig children. But a hot teen Yotsuba should be fucking HOT! (Closest example of what
I have in mind)
http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/140126/2girls-adult-ayase_ena-bear-duralumin-kasuga39-koi
>> [_] Anonymous 04/19/09(Sun)14:59 No.957094
She's awfully.. thick? Not really a good word, but I think she could be thinner, she just doesn't
look like Yotsuba as she is.
>> [_] Phenix !yRd8SXc/L. 04/19/09(Sun)15:06 No.957102
WHAT THE HELL
SOMEONE FIX THIS
