File[Super-Loop.swf] - (1.26 MB)
[_] [L] Made it myself~ Anon 1505404 I made this animation out of boredom and curiousity of flash. First one so lemme get some feedback here. Song: Timeless Ocean - Asher-Durand Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 1505454 weeaboo bullshit
>> [_] Anon 1505512 >Made it myself You should probably stop there.
>> [_] Anon 1505519 Lose the speedlines; Don't rely on special effects to tell the viewer what's happening. Make the animation for the clouds longer, at least five seconds. Put some more, slow-scrolling clouds in the background that aren't just transparent circles. Animate the hair as a solid object, not twenty tiny strands.
>> [_] Anon 1505537 Lose the hair, nobody like spikey-haired anime-faggots.
>> [_] Anon 1505547 >># Gotcha. Thanks for the feedback.
>> [_] Anon 1505549 The hedgehog shouldn't be hopping on his head, should it?
>> [_] Anon 1505554 Needs more background elements
>> [_] Anon 1505579 The song is beautiful. Any way to download this guys work? I see that you linked to his purevolume account when you posted this flash video on youtube.
>> [_] :stopmusic: 1505650 Your flash skills are more than enough to make something better than a music loop. Do something cleaver or funny.
>> [_] Anon 1505651 Cool story, bro.