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>> [_] Anon 1654580 I dig it. If you're going for lulz, I'd recommend you watch "DESTROYASS.swf" if you haven't already. Classic.
>> [_] Anon 1654584 OP Here It take while to load, sorry
>> [_] Anon 1654590 What's with her tongue? >cannot unsee
>> [_] Anon 1654591 Dat tongue.
>> [_] Anon 1654606 looking good, has some serious potential
>> [_] Anon 1654611 OP Here >># Thanks >># I was testing how long her tongue can go on with the values I set for the limits. Did not put it back when I rendered it :P
>> [_] Anon 1654614 Hey guys? Whats going on guys?
>> [_] Anon 1654623 good stuff, please continue with your works
>> [_] Anon 1654628 >># Thank you :)
>> [_] Anon 1654640 TOONAMI FTW. Sorry, but this reminds me of Tom.
>> [_] Anon 1654650 >># ... D: This is soundleechperson. I do not know anything about making flash, sorry. Keep asking around though, once in a while a really helpful person strolls along. I'm impressed with the great looks of what you've made. Are you going to school for something that's helped you with this or something?
>> [_] Anon 1654657 >># Self- taught (and it shows :P). I've just started about October 2011. I just started animating in February.
>> [_] Anon 1654661 >># By the way... Robosex OP here. :P
>> [_] Anon 1654668 >># What program did you use to make this? Maya, 3ds max? B-b-b..... Blender?
>> [_] Anon 1654674 Needs more jiggle physics.
>> [_] Anon 1654676 OP Here >># I used Carrara 8 PRO. I made the Models in Hexagon 2.5... for some reason Blender's User Interface Make my eyeball's hurt. Maya is the program I want to use in the future. :)
>> [_] Anon 1654678 walked in thinking Toonami?
>> [_] Anon 1654680 >># Shit son, start learning now. I took maya and 3ds Max, maya is definitely the harder one to learn, but it is true and true, the end all of 3d programs. I can hook you up with tons of material related to it and get you well on your way to learning it if you want. Always willing to help out a 3D-ude.
>> [_] Anon 1654683 OP Here >># The 3d Program I use sadly doesn't have the great Physics capabilties that you nornally see from the good stuff. Either that, or I havem't figured it out yet. I've tried , but I'll have to try harder. :) Apparenty >># has enough Physics for everyone... but I know that's what you are not looking for :P
>> [_] Anon 1654699 >># Here is a walking loop (not H) with some jiggle, but its hand animated (in other words "not good") , some booty jiggle too if you look hard. The best I can do for now :( sorry to disappoint >>#
>> [_] Anon 1654704 It has potential but as hentai that potential is limited, because the sexual element, the girl, isn't the focus of the movie. it's a big robot you are showing off.
>> [_] Anon 1654713 Watching this and DESTROYASS.swf at the same time has levels of irony none of us may fully appreciate. Its also funny how well the music fits. As a 2D animator who started out in 3D I probably appreciate it more than most people. The irony, I mean. Not the flash.
>> [_] Anon 1654723 OP Here >># Thank You, that was very good advice, and I understand exactly what you mean, but honestly I've been trying to think of how to fix the focus issue. That position makes it really hard to focus on her. I do have to work on positioning. Do you think it's the position itself? or design (robot draws more attention)? or something else?
>> [_] Anon 1654729 >># well, i'm no expert but it seems like the robot is just way more eye-catching than the girl. i suppose one one obvious way to rectify this would be to 'tone-down' the appearance of the background and robot so the girl is noticed more. or you could play with camera angles like you mentioned. or maybe there's some creative solution I'm not thinking of.
>> [_] Anon 1654732 >># Alright OP, I'm going to show you something that is extremely similar to this. You can gain some hints through these videos. http://www.youpornose.com/video/154265/3 dgspot-presents-doppelganger http://www.youpornose.com/video/154198/3 dgspot-presents-doppelganger-2 These act a lot like how you are performing the positions, except the roles are reversed in the videos. I'm sure they will help you.
>> [_] Anon 1654734 >># Light effects on the robot draw more attention to it than anything. High volumes of light in low light situations always draw the eye. I like how you used the light on her armor and such. Skin vs robot with fancy lights, the robot wins every time. I would suggest toning down on the luminosity on the lights, making them more opaque and faintly glowy.
>> [_] Anon 1654735 Alright, I'm willing to get past the face if this shit is going to be this good.
>> [_] Anon 1654738 >># Thanks, your input is very helpful. I think I have to overcome Creator's Bias, which is causing me to try to show the big picture., with fly around cameras (I do love fly around cameras :P)
>> [_] Anon 1654740 >># Hi, obnoxious 2d animator here again. You weren't talking to me but I'm going to give you my advice. Get some paper or a 2d program and animate it old school first. I promise you it'll be a huge learning experience. 3D character animation is this weird hybrid monster no mortal man can master. It's not so much what its capable of, its the way in which its done which guarantee's failure. Its great as a tool for games but if you're just trying to communicate something through an image you're probably better off sticking to 2D. There's no soul to it.
>> [_] Anon 1654743 >># Also, I've never heard a 2D animator say they wish they were doing their project in 3D. 2D animators are begrudged towards the volume of work involved in their art, but its more like an old married couple who always complain about each other but its really just because they love each other so much. 3D animation is this quest for reality through art...there's always some new tool that must be developed or some streamlined process which must be understood. The key word being always. No matter how good you get it, it won't be "real".
>> [_] ofuckwy !/IPyUlClgk 1654748 pretty good job OP for someone so new and all. You should enter a name/name and trip code, so you dont have to keep saying OP Here
>> [_] Anon 1654753 This is the worst flash and you should feel the worst. If you spend more than three minutes on this, please reevaluate your life.
>> [_] Anon 1654755 OP Here >># I accept all Input. I would not consider you obnoxious, I just noticed now that you posted earlier. Your points are very valid, and I totally understand your views. My skills in general are limited, and I have a lot to learn. I also have always notice that 2D and 3D Have different feels to them, much like still art and animated art. I appreciated the very thoughtful Advice and for sharing your view with me.
>> [_] Anon 1654768 >># Thanks. I'll consider it for next time I post something here >># yeah,I know :P
>> [_] Anon 1654782 OP Here sorry ofuckwy, not yet. :) I sorry I didn't see some of these post earlier... >># Thank you. My intro is very similar, but the girl is walking in, and mine's looks well, ya know, worse. :P >># Thank You Very Much. My lighting skills are not great. Hopefully,Your advice will show up in my work when I use it (I definitely will!!) , so we can start focusing on what matters :D
>> [_] Anon 1654789 >># I wanna help you out with this. For someone who started 3d and created this after a short while I think you got some talent for it. You mentioned wanting someone for sound effects, and I can help you. I actually help out a 2d Animator named Rock Candy. Aside from doing his sound, you can look up some of his newer flashes with sound in them. Hit me up if you are interested: Tambur4@yahoo.com
>> [_] Anon 1654801 >># Wow!! Thank you for your offer. I was originally looking if there was a site where I can get sound effects. I am not confident in my abilities, to consider involving others, yet. Maybe when I feel like I'm in a groove and in motion, I'll definitely contact you. Please do not take it the wrong way.
>> [_] Looks great! Anon 1654804 You did an awesome work on her body. Her tongue could be a bit shorter but it should definately be out here ;)
>> [_] Anon 1654805 >># Not at all. I understand trying to hone your skills first. Perhaps I should also mention I took 2 years of 3d animation at college a while ago, so the least I can do is offer sound advice toward the composition of structure and the placement of verticies. I can understand how frustrating getting the right lighting can be, or modeling a character, boning her, then finding out that when you try and animate her it stretches weird and the lighting makes it boldly obvious you fucked up. I'm always happy to offer advice. As far as the character is concerned, there are some things you could easily improve, but without knowing certain factors like if you're going for a certain toony look with exaggerated features I can't make a complete prognosis.
>> [_] Anon 1654807 >># The ass looks like two basketballs, when it should curve more like footballs, and the hips are very disproportionate to the waist, the thighs look very fatty, yet again, something that could easily be overlooked if you are going for a more cartoony style. Also, I think you should consider re-skinning the robot dick and making it look less, organic, and more mechanical. A human dick on a robot doesn't make for good looks. I understand this appears to be a test of your current abilities, so of course you have room to spare for modification, there is plenty to improve.
>> [_] Anon 1654811 Mr. Op any sauce like a blog or information on where to see more of this?
>> [_] Anon 1654832 >># Thank You. I will certainIy look forward to any more advice you have. I cannot say how much I greatly appreciate it. yeah, I was going for a cartoony look. The basketball butt and very disproportionate hip to waist ratio is the style that I like. As for the human Dick on the robot, I'm in trouble,'cause there will be two on each one, eventually. :P Thanks again. When I have more, to show, I'll be hoping to get more help.
>> [_] Anon 1654838 >># ok ignore me for requesting sauce i guess...
>> [_] Anon 1654846 >># No I don't. I do not have much to show. I only have useless things which I don't consider actually worthwhile. Plus, it's mostly not sexual, and just the same things tweeked little by little.
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>> 1654838 Sorry, I did not want my reply to your post to get mixed in that one
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