File: S01.swf-(849 KB, 650x490, Hentai)
[_] LoZHQ Scene01 4chanfdude 05/31/14(Sat)09:39 No.2401275
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I'm being a lazy fuck again and haven't done much since last post. I know the obvious issue of
Zelda's hat-thing needs animation, but as I said, I was being lazy and decided to post now.
I just want to make sure everything is looking okay.
Any help would be very appreciated.
I'm feeling up for questions also. Feel free to ask anything about the project.
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)09:55 No.2401284
Looks good. What's it for?
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)09:59 No.2401290
>>2401275
the hat thing isnt't even bad looking
>> [_] 4chanfdude 05/31/14(Sat)10:02 No.2401292
>>2401284
It's my flash project, The Legend of Zelda: Hentai Quest
>>2401290
It looks ridiculous. It's not even animated.
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)10:09 No.2401296
I can't wait to see the finished product.
What software are you using to make it?
>> [_] 4chanfdude 05/31/14(Sat)10:11 No.2401297
>>2401296
Currently? Macromedia Flash Professional 8. Don't laugh.
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)10:17 No.2401298
>>2401297
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
faggot
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)10:22 No.2401301
You should probably have another scene after the last one here before ejaculating. Some deep
throating would be awesome.
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)10:24 No.2401302
Bretty good so far. I think zelda's face and head movements are really good for the style I think
you are going for, but link's mouth looks really lazily done. It's just an oval. Zelda's butt is
also pretty bad. Either Make the clothing tighter or looser. And make the ass/vagina part with
either more detail or make it completely ambiguous. The halfass 'Y' shape distracts my attention
away from the overall purpose of the piece.
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)10:24 No.2401304
>>2401297
Nah, don't nitpick your stuff too much.
To be honest, I don't think there's too much to critique in the way that you have things setup.
So, I would just suggest to keep going with what you have for the sake of completion.
If the hat not being animated bothers you that much, then perhaps just animate well enough to
look decent.
Good work so far, keep doing what you are doing.
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)10:26 No.2401306
>>2401302
Now I can't unsee her ass, dammit.
It looks pretty weird that her robe would cling to it and show her vagina like that.
>> [_] 4chanfdude 05/31/14(Sat)10:33 No.2401314
>>2401301
Well, I thought that too, but the thing is that it's Zelda showing 'a preview of what your reward
will be!' so I don't really think it needs to go much further.
>>2401302
>>2401306
I'm starting to see the problem as well. It's not hard to fix this tough so there's some good
news. I think I'm going to make the dress look more loose.
>>2401304
I'm not going to drown myself in the critique. At least I hope I don't. However, I don't think my
skills are good enough to make it on my own. If there's something I start seeing that becomes
obvious to me I'll be sure to fix that. If it's something along the lines of 'it really doesn't
matter if you change it or not' I won't do anything.
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)12:00 No.2401335
What else can I say other than I LIEK THIS
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)12:40 No.2401358
make her ass move a smig while doing the second and third part. Also the mouth looks kinda weird,
don't get lazy you're doing gods work
>> [_] Anonymous 05/31/14(Sat)13:43 No.2401381
/r/ing idle miner game
>> [_] Scarra !!vhUdXljB5vX 05/31/14(Sat)13:58 No.2401388
>>2401358
This, it just doesn't look right for some reason for her ass to be stationary if she's swaying
