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[_] LoZHQ Scene01 4chanfdude 2401275 /ic/ time I'm being a lazy fuck again and haven't done much since last post. I know the obvious issue of Zelda's hat-thing needs animation, but as I said, I was being lazy and decided to post now. I just want to make sure everything is looking okay. Any help would be very appreciated. I'm feeling up for questions also. Feel free to ask anything about the project. Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 2401284 Looks good. What's it for?
>> [_] Anon 2401290 >># the hat thing isnt't even bad looking
>> [_] 4chanfdude 2401292 >># It's my flash project, The Legend of Zelda: Hentai Quest >># It looks ridiculous. It's not even animated.
>> [_] Anon 2401296 I can't wait to see the finished product. What software are you using to make it?
>> [_] 4chanfdude 2401297 >># Currently? Macromedia Flash Professional 8. Don't laugh.
>> [_] Anon 2401298 >># HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA faggot
>> [_] Anon 2401301 You should probably have another scene after the last one here before ejaculating. Some deep throating would be awesome.
>> [_] Anon 2401302 Bretty good so far. I think zelda's face and head movements are really good for the style I think you are going for, but link's mouth looks really lazily done. It's just an oval. Zelda's butt is also pretty bad. Either Make the clothing tighter or looser. And make the ass/vagina part with either more detail or make it completely ambiguous. The halfass 'Y' shape distracts my attention away from the overall purpose of the piece.
>> [_] Anon 2401304 >># Nah, don't nitpick your stuff too much. To be honest, I don't think there's too much to critique in the way that you have things setup. So, I would just suggest to keep going with what you have for the sake of completion. If the hat not being animated bothers you that much, then perhaps just animate well enough to look decent. Good work so far, keep doing what you are doing.
>> [_] Anon 2401306 >># Now I can't unsee her ass, dammit. It looks pretty weird that her robe would cling to it and show her vagina like that.
>> [_] 4chanfdude 2401314 >># Well, I thought that too, but the thing is that it's Zelda showing 'a preview of what your reward will be!' so I don't really think it needs to go much further. >># >># I'm starting to see the problem as well. It's not hard to fix this tough so there's some good news. I think I'm going to make the dress look more loose. >># I'm not going to drown myself in the critique. At least I hope I don't. However, I don't think my skills are good enough to make it on my own. If there's something I start seeing that becomes obvious to me I'll be sure to fix that. If it's something along the lines of 'it really doesn't matter if you change it or not' I won't do anything.
>> [_] Anon 2401335 What else can I say other than I LIEK THIS
>> [_] Anon 2401358 make her ass move a smig while doing the second and third part. Also the mouth looks kinda weird, don't get lazy you're doing gods work
>> [_] Anon 2401381 /r/ing idle miner game
>> [_] Scarra !!vhUdXljB5vX 2401388 >># This, it just doesn't look right for some reason for her ass to be stationary if she's swaying