File: H 002_v4.swf-(70 KB, Hentai)
[_] Original Content Anon 1902290 Rate my OC plz. Suggestions & advices are welcome. Advance through the animation with Left and Right keys. Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 1902298 Animation is pretty good, but having certain things as different layers (left arm, tits, neck/right arm) makes the animation look really jagged and un natural. Lower body should move in addition to the upper body (just slight up and down movements would be enough) A bit of animation work and this would be 10/10.
>> [_] Anon 1902302 pros : animation is very fluent and smooth colors look great cons : maybe needs options, like change hair color or makeup boobs clip with the chest at some frames, and they need to jiggle more. bretty guud/10 dont stop working on it
>> [_] Anon 1902323 best 72 kb i had
>> [_] Anon 1902333 The tongue animation seems a bit strange. Also, make it more clear that they use the arrow keys to advance.
>> [_] Anon 1902334 Nice constructive criticism! I'm proud of you guys.
>> [_] Anon 1902339 Fix her left arm, make her abdomen actually exist, and make her look more human in general. Other than that, 9.5/10 it's okay.
>> [_] Anon 1902376 Also needs voices and a background
>> [_] Anon 1902430 more facial expression would make it definitely better!
>> [_] Anon 1902442 dem shiny tits. shit is glowing yo
>> [_] Anon 1902473 All I can ask is that you do more. Blease for the lub of gob, go more!
>> [_] Anon 1902523 I'll repeat what I said in the thread on /h/ "Ok, well, her left arm doesn't look great, anatomically speaking. It's too low and doesn't seem to connect to the rest of her body properly. Her breasts look a little too low as well and her hand just looks weird when she's holding his penis at the base and moves to her mouth. Other than that, it's not bad, but it might be worth considering adding more detail in places, especially on the penis and her upper body, considering that's a main focus. Also, I figure it's probably pretty difficult to make good looking cum, but maybe try some more detail with it anyway. I assume you already had this in mind as well, but a reset button would be nice. And maybe an option to cum on her face. Still, it's a hell of a lot better than anything I could do. Keep up the good work, I'd love to see how it turns out."
>> [_] Anon 1902528 >># She is a well-oiled machine. Baby oil.