File: Amy Test 2.swf-(67 KB, 700x500, Hentai)
[_] Anon 2000829 Ok, so I think I have this licking animation where I want it. What improvements do you suggest before I go on to the blowjob? Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] RagaSonic 2000837 ^^ Nice job.
>> [_] Anon 2000841 Shitty test, no questions to answer, results are lack luster.
>> [_] Anon 2000848 >clitoris is a marble gg I lost
>> [_] Anon 2000851 >># anon pls, real advice >># the original reference im using looks like a marble, so i think that'll stay. any suggestions for the animation?
>> [_] Anon 2000854 Boobs lack gravity. Move her hand left, and boob down
>> [_] Anon 2000856 you better have anal in this
>> [_] Anon 2000860 >># so far thats really great, i would suggest fixing the clit, and maybe making the breast hang with a bit more gravity, they seem really stiff.
>> [_] Anon 2000861 looks real nice, with fair qaulity animation
>> [_] Anon 2000879 >># fixed boobs, moved hand >># Yep. It'll have Lick/Blowjob/Anal/Vag/Threesome. Thankfully Tojyo did a set of similar pictures, so I can have different poses. >># I'll fix the clit, and I the think boobs should be fixed now >># thanks
>> [_] Anon 2000886 Quite a few things here that could be improved. It's a good starting point though. Something no one has mentioned thus far is the penis. You should make the dick more uniform in its size as opposed to looking like a volcano. As for the squishing animation that goes with it, it'd be better since you're going for the cartoony look for it to squeeze forward. Also, if possible, cut off the edge of the guy, because looking at his ass is painful. Reminds me of what Hank Hill's ass would look like. Something else I am seeing is that you are putting a lot of detail into the ass area, and then lacking detail elsewhere. While I do love a detailed ass, skimping on detail elsewhere just detracts from the overall flash.
>> [_] Anon 2000887 When I take a look at her actual base on the ground, it looks like she seems to be floating. Her knees and weight shifts too much just from coil and recoil from a dick suck. The bouncing of her ass and tail is interesting. I'm not saying it's bad, because cartoony bounces tend to be very over exaggerated, However the way it bounces is a little odd. Mainly because the bounce carries far into the back of her butt. Normally it would start mid way up her thigh, traveling up her butt at the height, and end near the middle of the back of her ass. however, the entire thing is uni-formally bouncing. Another thing to consider on the topic of bouncing are her tits. If I removed her arm and traced where the tip connected to her chest, I bet there'd be hardly any skin connected judging by the angle it starts curving down by the time it reaches her arm.
>> [_] Anon 2000889 I would make it more round and bring it back so that nearly half of the tit is showing. Because we must keep in the spirit of her breast size. No body likes a big breasted Amy. That'd be just sacrilege! As for the sounds, I do like the digital plop effect there. it's a nice touch. Good sounds are something you gotta work for, I know that all too well. If you'd like more critiques or help with sound editing / sample bites I can definitely help ya out. I've helped out Rock Candy a lot with his work. Heck I basically built him up since he didn't know nearly anything about anatomy way back then. Couldn't swing him into vagina though, man I tried... allifrend@gmail.com
>> [_] Anon 2000899 >># -Penis shape did seem weird. Fixed. -You mean squeeze forward after immediately after it has left her mouth? I was thinking about that, but it would be quite cartoony. I'd have to experiment with it. -LOL, yeah i'll get rid of dat ass. I actually only meant for half of his torso to be seen. -I'm not sure what you mean by making it more round. Do you mean mean make it so only a small portion of her boob is showing? -As for the sound, yes I would love any other samples you can get. Mostly anything related to amy sounding sexual. Might have to pull stuff from Sonic X, because there's practically no sexual sounding content from any of the games unless you can get a voice that sounds similar. In any case, I wouldn't worry about going all out on the resources yet. Perhaps when I have more key parts done. I also had help from Ragasonic since the .fla was originally his, and of course Tojyo for the original art.
>> [_] Anon 2000902 >># >># >># tldr its porn, just enjoy it
>> [_] Anon 2000905 >># also i like big boobed amy... when I release another version i'll probably just have an option. thankfully i know a bit of action script
>> [_] Anon 2000907 Ahh this flash file I assume is the unfinished flash file. http://e621.net/data/f4/74/f4744f0bd5d23 5afe145d9f5e21a1a63.swf Basically how the boob is right now, you need to bring it closer to her chest to make the anatomy work without looking weird. The bouncing is relatively fine for now. I'm sure I can find sounds easy enough. My email is up so let me know in more detail the kinds of stuff you want.
>> [_] Anon 2000909 >># yes I have him on skype, and I believe he is going to finish his tentacle version as well. i'm not sure exactly what sounds I'll need yet. I usually do those after each scene is done. I'll let you know though
>> [_] Anon 2000974 You need to make this not look like pieces of cardboard being moved by ropes.
>> [_] Anon 2000990 >># Fix the Gloopy *plop* sound effect. Dammit, it's not very right for the animation.