File: The Pretender.swf-(2.08 MB, 550x400, Other)
[_] Feedback pls? Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)20:01 No.2755942
Been working on this for a while, need to get feedback so I can improve the rest (fight scenes
and shit)
Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)20:18 No.2755960
how about you learn to draw real anatomy rather than this stick figure shit?
nothing drawn with stick men will every be taken seriously. sure it might be funny sometimes, but
i have a feeling this isn't supposed to be a humour piece.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)20:28 No.2755973
>>2755942
How long have you been working on this? Since 2007? Jesus Christ!
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)20:32 No.2755978
holy shity dude gave me the chillz this is the sickest shit i've ever seen
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)20:35 No.2755982
I'd rather see the mouse bust outta that shit than some stick figure.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)21:17 No.2756014
Stick figure shit aside, what is the plot here? He's in a prison. He is hanging from chains. He
looks to be so weak he is simply slumped over as far as he can get off the slack in the chains.
You're painting the picture that he's been there forever. Then he goes super saiyan. He could
have gotten out whenever he wanted? I'm more upset about your shitty story telling skills than
your animation skills.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)21:38 No.2756036
this flash is THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST
THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)21:45 No.2756038
i'm upset because all the pixels are visible. is this not flash!? did you animate this somewhere
else and import the video?
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)21:52 No.2756042
gay and the loop fucking replays the song over itself. kill yourself op i mean it.
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)21:59 No.2756045
Newgrounds 2008/10
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)22:31 No.2756077
>>2755960
Some stick animations can actually be pretty neat as far as fights go. As far as being 'taken
seriously', I'd definitely say that something of this (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/601
496) quality should be worthy of note.
Also, Shock 3 (by the same guy) is definitely worth considering as far as commendation for
animating skill goes (though, I guess if you didn't want to call it "skill" you could call it
"endurance")
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)22:38 No.2756084
sage
there's your feedback, attention whore
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)22:52 No.2756099
This is something a 13 year old child would make
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)23:04 No.2756104
Don't pay attention to this guys you just need to add a real plot 'cuz the music and the timing
is pretty neat so plz just add some plot
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)23:07 No.2756110
i like this weird pill bug - mouse creature, thats vibratin over the pipes
>> [_] Anonymous 04/20/15(Mon)23:24 No.2756127
Stick figures are the Comic Sans of the animation world. This looks like it was made by an angsty
13 year old who lives in the suburbs.
