File: The Pretender.swf-(2.08 MB, 550x400, Other)
[_] Feedback pls? Anon 2755942 Been working on this for a while, need to get feedback so I can improve the rest (fight scenes and shit) Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 2755960 how about you learn to draw real anatomy rather than this stick figure shit? nothing drawn with stick men will every be taken seriously. sure it might be funny sometimes, but i have a feeling this isn't supposed to be a humour piece.
>> [_] Anon 2755973 >># How long have you been working on this? Since 2007? Jesus Christ!
>> [_] Anon 2755978 holy shity dude gave me the chillz this is the sickest shit i've ever seen
>> [_] Anon 2755982 I'd rather see the mouse bust outta that shit than some stick figure.
>> [_] Anon 2756014 Stick figure shit aside, what is the plot here? He's in a prison. He is hanging from chains. He looks to be so weak he is simply slumped over as far as he can get off the slack in the chains. You're painting the picture that he's been there forever. Then he goes super saiyan. He could have gotten out whenever he wanted? I'm more upset about your shitty story telling skills than your animation skills.
>> [_] Anon 2756036 this flash is THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST
>> [_] Anon 2756038 i'm upset because all the pixels are visible. is this not flash!? did you animate this somewhere else and import the video?
>> [_] Anon 2756042 gay and the loop fucking replays the song over itself. kill yourself op i mean it.
>> [_] Anon 2756045 Newgrounds 2008/10
>> [_] Anon 2756077 >># Some stick animations can actually be pretty neat as far as fights go. As far as being 'taken seriously', I'd definitely say that something of this (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/6 01496) quality should be worthy of note. Also, Shock 3 (by the same guy) is definitely worth considering as far as commendation for animating skill goes (though, I guess if you didn't want to call it "skill" you could call it "endurance")
>> [_] Anon 2756084 sage there's your feedback, attention whore
>> [_] Anon 2756099 This is something a 13 year old child would make
>> [_] Anon 2756104 Don't pay attention to this guys you just need to add a real plot 'cuz the music and the timing is pretty neat so plz just add some plot
>> [_] Anon 2756110 i like this weird pill bug - mouse creature, thats vibratin over the pipes
>> [_] Anon 2756127 Stick figures are the Comic Sans of the animation world. This looks like it was made by an angsty 13 year old who lives in the suburbs.