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[_] The Experiment 07/02/15(Thu)17:10:56 No.2831679
>> [_] Anonymous 07/02/15(Thu)17:19:59 No.2831685
Intredesting.jpg
>> [_] Anonymous 07/02/15(Thu)17:30:59 No.2831694
spooky
>> [_] Anonymous 07/02/15(Thu)17:44:30 No.2831708
But who was second phone?!?!
>> [_] Anonymous 07/02/15(Thu)18:21:00 No.2831728
>How did this guy get a physics lab's number?
oh, I don't know, maybe it was your fucking colleague, you know which one, the one that makes fun
of you every time he gets a chance
>even the slightest distraction could ruin a weeks work
let me guess, the phone starts fucking ringing?
of course it does
the build up, for god knows what, is shit
>> [_] Anonymous 07/02/15(Thu)18:42:25 No.2831747
>>2831708
That's what I was thinking
>> [_] Anonymous 07/02/15(Thu)20:13:07 No.2831800
Sloppy writing;
"Listen don't answer the phone" delivered to straight forward and seemingly quickly a manner.
No pause for surprise, fear, lack of understanding. Just nothing but immediate: "Don't answer the
phone" despite the events being pretty unbelievable and the narrator himself already described
the event as unimaginable.
"Even the slightest distraction could be disastrous" old cliche' is old. It's not foreshadowing,
it's not intricate story telling, it's schlock.
Sloppy schlock.
Closed loop temporal paradox feeding into itself over and over again. Standard scifi trope. It's
been done often and it's been done better.
In short: You're a shit writer. Get better at it or get someone else to do it for you.
>> [_] Anonymous 07/02/15(Thu)20:16:38 No.2831802
>>2831800
this, also
check'd
