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[_] halp idontevencareanymore 2390047 Oh dear, it's been too long since I last posted anything here. I'm still being a lazy piece of shit and haven't done much since then. A few coding stuff and a little more flavor for the title screen. Anyways, I want to know how's everything looking. [Name]. I just want to know what I did wrong. Probably many things. Marked for deletion (old).
>> [_] Anon 2390049 The most glaring mistake is that not every girl is a Zora.
>> [_] Anon 2390058 >the courage that you poses "poses" should be possess At the B&W drawing of Zelda, her left cheek is a different shape than her right cheek, idk if shading will make that look better or not. Her arms also seem to be different sizes. Saria's left hand is really stubby, and the foreshortening on Ruto's face seems a bit off IMO.
>> [_] Anon 2390076 not going to help you with story/art critic because Im not good at that but it might be cool to add both pre and after time jump but that might be a lot of work. Nabooru ss would be nice
>> [_] Anon 2390083 >># Are you just trying to animate the bad zelda doujin?
>> [_] idontevencareanymore 2390090 Bring OP, I think I should at least respond >># Fuck, I can't believe I didn't catch that misspelling. Yeah, Zelda's arm is something I can fix easily, but I am wondering what I can do to fix Saria's arm. I think the hand just needs to to be near the bottom of the leg and in a new pose. >># Not exactly. It's more a game based around the idea/plot. I hope that makes any sense.
>> [_] Anon 2390097 >># your doing a good job anon
>> [_] Anon 2390120 >># "There echos a legend" Should be Echoes "Done with the battles he onced was across time" You wot, m8? But really, i'm confused. "Intoduce your semen etc" Introduce, just missing an r. Whatever-her-name-is (Second B&W drawing) had an odd hip and leg connection. Just lengthen it a little; i'd screencap and show you what I mean, but that will come later. Other than those spelling mistakes and shiz, it's pretty good so far. Far as flashes go, this one's a generous 6/10 right now. Interested to see how you'll progress, should make a blog to post updates on.
>> [_] Xen0m0rpH !QFjgKKsUc6 2390209 >># Finally. I was wondering when you would post again. Still waiting though.
>> [_] Anon 2390240 >># Not a loli fan, give me the adult versions and we'll talk.
>> [_] Anon 2390254 1st pic: shirt collar on his right side is missing the v-fold, right calf is large, even taking perspective into account.The width of the triangle on the cursor is about the width of reduction needed. 1st B&W drawing: the hand on the left is in a slightly impossible hand position. Foot on the right looks 2 sizes to large.(unless shes wearing a dress, but ts really hard to tell in B&W w/ no shading. 2nd drawing: looks like a thorn in her left nipple, I know that's the fold of her arm but I cant unsee it now. BTW, your faces and hair are sweet. Mostly its hands, but hands are hard as fuck so might I suggest alwyas drawing the hands doing something(ie grasping pulling) they are easier if they have purpose. 3rd: pupils aren't centered in the irises and she looks slightly derpy, their seems to be fins on her toes on her right foot but not on the left.
>> [_] Anon 2390269 >># Seconded.
>> [_] Anon 2390304 I support the loli, make what you want.