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>> Warrior Soul 28644 Getting head in the heat of battle a lucky resistance fighter enjoys some relaxation with a qt in the heat of a large battle after the combine attempt a shelling of an urban area backfires! [IMG] hlhj.swf (21.23 MiB) 1280x720, Uncompressed. 1622 frames, 25 fps (01:05). Ver6, AS1/AS2. Network access: Text: Bitmaps: Audio: Yes. Video: Yes. [find in archive]
>> Anon 28648 That is not a penis. It doesn't taper off at the end and get half as thick halfway up the shaft. That is not what the head of a penis looks like, it isn't a cone. The Brits call it a bell-end for a reason. Her hand is constantly clipping through the not-penis, and it clips through her face at the end where her lips don't even move. Pubic hairs are not straight spikes jutting out of the crotch. There's a random white line from the center of the page to the top-left for absolutely no reason. 0/10
>> Warrior Soul 28650 >># Sadly until I get a more powerful comp/ better graphics card there is no way to fix the white line.
>> Anon 28651 You tried, at least. That's more then I'll ever do .5/10
>> Warrior Soul 28654 >># you just might be saving yourself a lot of trouble >Be me, a novice animator, only have like 30 hrs total in Sfm and animation in general >try to improve your work a little each day >It's still shit feelsbadman
>> Anon 28657 >># As long as you keep doing it.
>> Anon 28660 Honestly, you should upload these somewhere else rather than here. I will say that your previous animation was much better in terms of head movement and expression. I think you should keep making these and improving your skills until you're able to get a better computer. Plus, I love female citizens.
>> Warrior Soul 28661 >># Thanks for the feedback. I will definitley be redoing this animation at some point. I would upload these somewhere else but I feel like other sites like Paheal might ban me because of the unfinished quality of it. Then again, I guess worse stuff has been uploaded to those sites.
>> Anon 28662 >># Tumblr. If you can get over the bullshit. Get yourself a fanbase and build it up. And never forget female citizens.
>> Warrior Soul 28664 >># Alright, yeah that sounds good, I will be doing that, oh and don't worry about that I've got a LOT of ideas in store for the lovley citizen ladies!
>> Anon 28665 >># It's bad, but no one starts off amazing, a lot of the best animators out there would be embarrassed to show off their earlier works Keep trying
>> Anon 28666 >># Get back to us on the link when it's ready.
>> Warrior Soul 28667 Done. The header image is clipping out at the top for me, let me know if its happening to you guys too. http://warriorsoulsfm.tumblr.com/ >># thanks for the encouragement anon.
>> Anon 28668 It's bad,but you're just starting out,i'm eager to see you improve,post your shit here whenever you make something.
>> Warrior Soul 28670 >># will do.
>> Anon 28671 >># Look into Tea's Nude Female_02 model if possible. But it'd still be cool to see HL2's default female models used. The blue jumpsuit ones. Anyway, good luck with your SFM journey! I'll check back from time-to-time.
>> Warrior Soul 28672 >># Funny,I was JUST thinking about that! I've downloaded it and the next animation I make will be featuring her! Yeah I will eventually cycle through all variants of the female Hl2 models as time goes on. I hope down the line someone recreates them with a higher polycount like this one. and Thanks!
>> Anon 28678 OP, do me a favor and twist your neck to the right, and if you go far enough everything will just become black. Stop.
>> Anon 28686 >># Calm down with the edge buddy,they're missing you at the linkin park concert.
>> Anon 28688 Nice game, OP. I noticed the audio FX sounds like assault rifles, but my default weapon was a single-shot rifle from the Korean War era. They don't match up. Also, my secondary weapon was a Desert Eagle. That's another anachronism. How do I reload? I tried all the keys and clicking everything. I can't beat the boss without being able to shoot more bullets.
>> Warrior Soul 28692 >># silly anon. you just have to type Sv_cheats 0 impulse 101 and there you go!
>> Anon 28724 I'm honstly just proud that (Most) Anons were generally praising of this new animators potential. I'm just glad there not another animator running off and quitting before his time. We could be chatting with the next Zone. Well, maybe not zone, but you get the point.
>> Jesus Crust 28729 10/10 not beef curtains
>> Anon 28734 >># Any up and comer needs to be cherished,good porn artists that actually interact with their userbase is a dying thing.
>> Warrior Soul 28743 >># >># >># thanks for all the kind words guys. I'm new to a lot of the tumblr stuff and having art accounts in general, so I'm probably going to stumble around a bit. I'm also an amateur 3d modeler, and I've made some models and stuff but I've never actually put myself out there until now. I used to be the kind of artist that would just dump his work and not say much but I've slowly begun to change that about myself, and when I don't get asked to snap my own neck, the bants is quite a refreshing thing. Whats so bad about beef curt- o-oh...
>> Anon 28751 This is what we have become.
>> Anon 28761 >># Just keep hammering at it, dude. You might never notice it yourself, but your quality and animation fluidity will increase drastically as time goes on. As long as you don't overwork it and hit burnout, because once you burnout you'll probably get sick of SFM.