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>> Warrior Soul 11feb2016(th)00:09 No.28644 OP P1
Getting head in the heat of battle
a lucky resistance fighter enjoys some relaxation with a qt in the heat of a large battle after the
combine attempt a shelling of an urban area backfires!
[IMG] hlhj.swf (21.23 MiB)
1280x720, Uncompressed. 1622 frames, 25 fps (01:05).
Ver6, AS1/AS2. Network access: No. Text: No.
Bitmaps: No. Audio: Yes. Video: Yes.
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>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)02:10 No.28648 A P2R1
That is not a penis. It doesn't taper off at the end and get half as thick halfway up the shaft.
That is not what the head of a penis looks like, it isn't a cone. The Brits call it a bell-end for
a reason. Her hand is constantly clipping through the not-penis, and it clips through her face at
the end where her lips don't even move. Pubic hairs are not straight spikes jutting out of the
crotch. There's a random white line from the center of the page to the top-left for absolutely no
reason.
0/10
>> Warrior Soul 11feb2016(th)02:41 No.28650 OP P3R2
>>28648
Sadly until I get a more powerful comp/ better graphics card there is no way to fix the white line.
>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)03:20 No.28651 B P4R3
You tried, at least. That's more then I'll ever do
.5/10
>> Warrior Soul 11feb2016(th)04:03 No.28654 OP P5R4
>>28651
you just might be saving yourself a lot of trouble
>Be me, a novice animator, only have like 30 hrs total in Sfm and animation in general
>try to improve your work a little each day
>It's still shit
feelsbadman
>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)06:53 No.28657 C P6R5
>>28654
As long as you keep doing it.
>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)08:35 No.28660 D P7R6
Honestly, you should upload these somewhere else rather than here. I will say that your previous
animation was much better in terms of head movement and expression. I think you should keep making
these and improving your skills until you're able to get a better computer. Plus, I love female
citizens.
>> Warrior Soul 11feb2016(th)09:36 No.28661 OP P8R7
>>28660
Thanks for the feedback. I will definitley be redoing this animation at some point. I would upload
these somewhere else but I feel like other sites like Paheal might ban me because of the unfinished
quality of it. Then again, I guess worse stuff has been uploaded to those sites.
>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)09:38 No.28662 D P9R8
>>28661
Tumblr. If you can get over the bullshit. Get yourself a fanbase and build it up. And never forget
female citizens.
>> Warrior Soul 11feb2016(th)09:51 No.28664 OP P10R9
>>28662
Alright, yeah that sounds good, I will be doing that, oh and don't worry about that I've got a LOT
of ideas in store for the lovley citizen ladies!
>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)10:20 No.28665 E P11R10
>>28654
It's bad, but no one starts off amazing, a lot of the best animators out there would be embarrassed
to show off their earlier works
Keep trying
>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)11:15 No.28666 D P12R11
>>28664
Get back to us on the link when it's ready.
>> Warrior Soul 11feb2016(th)12:45 No.28667 OP P13R12
Done. The header image is clipping out at the top for me, let me know if its happening to you guys
too.
http://warriorsoulsfm.tumblr.com/
>>28665
thanks for the encouragement anon.
>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)15:05 No.28668 F P14R13
It's bad,but you're just starting out,i'm eager to see you improve,post your shit here whenever you
make something.
>> Warrior Soul 11feb2016(th)15:49 No.28670 OP P15R14
>>28668
will do.
>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)17:51 No.28671 G P16R15
>>28670
Look into Tea's Nude Female_02 model if possible. But it'd still be cool to see HL2's default
female models used. The blue jumpsuit ones. Anyway, good luck with your SFM journey! I'll check
back from time-to-time.
>> Warrior Soul 11feb2016(th)18:01 No.28672 OP P17R16
>>28671
Funny,I was JUST thinking about that! I've downloaded it and the next animation I make will be
featuring her!
Yeah I will eventually cycle through all variants of the female Hl2 models as time goes on. I hope
down the line someone recreates them with a higher polycount like this one. and Thanks!
>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)21:05 No.28678 H P18R17
OP, do me a favor and twist your neck to the right, and if you go far enough everything will just
become black. Stop.
>> Anonymous 11feb2016(th)23:21 No.28686 F P19R18
>>28678
Calm down with the edge buddy,they're missing you at the linkin park concert.
>> Anonymous 12feb2016(fr)00:32 No.28688 I P20R19
Nice game, OP.
I noticed the audio FX sounds like assault rifles, but my default weapon was a single-shot rifle
from the Korean War era. They don't match up. Also, my secondary weapon was a Desert Eagle. That's
another anachronism.
How do I reload? I tried all the keys and clicking everything. I can't beat the boss without being
able to shoot more bullets.
>> Warrior Soul 12feb2016(fr)02:25 No.28692 OP P21R20
>>28678
silly anon. you just have to type
Sv_cheats 0
impulse 101
and there you go!
>> Anonymous 13feb2016(sa)17:49 No.28724 J P22R21
I'm honstly just proud that (Most) Anons were generally praising of this new animators potential.
I'm just glad there not another animator running off and quitting before his time.
We could be chatting with the next Zone.
Well, maybe not zone, but you get the point.
>> Jesus Crust 13feb2016(sa)20:53 No.28729 K P23R22
10/10 not beef curtains
>> Anonymous 13feb2016(sa)23:31 No.28734 F P24R23
>>28724
Any up and comer needs to be cherished,good porn artists that actually interact with their userbase
is a dying thing.
>> Warrior Soul 14feb2016(su)07:25 No.28743 OP P25R24
>>28724
>>28734
>>28734
thanks for all the kind words guys. I'm new to a lot of the tumblr stuff and having art accounts in
general, so I'm probably going to stumble around a bit. I'm also an amateur 3d modeler, and I've
made some models and stuff but I've never actually put myself out there until now. I used to be the
kind of artist that would just dump his work and not say much but I've slowly begun to change that
about myself, and when I don't get asked to snap my own neck, the bants is quite a refreshing thing.
Whats so bad about beef curt-
o-oh...
>> Anonymous 14feb2016(su)11:36 No.28751 L P26R25
This is what we have become.
>> Anonymous 14feb2016(su)20:24 No.28761 M P27R26
>>28743
Just keep hammering at it, dude. You might never notice it yourself, but your quality and animation
fluidity will increase drastically as time goes on. As long as you don't overwork it and hit
burnout, because once you burnout you'll probably get sick of SFM.
