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>> Anon 53247 Friend made this,tell me if you think it's shit. It looks a bit chunky because i converted from MP4 [IMG] googirl_anim_1.swf (9.78 MiB) 622x926, Uncompressed. 911 frames, 60 fps (00:15). Ver6, AS1/AS2. Network access: Text: Bitmaps: Audio: Yes. Video: Yes. [find in archive]
>> Anon 53248 >># lines around the head area morph too erratically
>> Anon 53249 There has to be better sound available. Otherwise, just make a cum scene and you'll be great. Just...god that noise.
>> Anon 53250 I think the sound is okay for a goo girl. Lines could be steadier on the head but I like it.
>> Anon 53255 take one full cycle and make it loop, will cut down on the filesize like 95%
>> Anon 53256 well for starters it's a movie. could have been cut down to just 1 repeat on loop, saving 90% of the file size by the looks of it. it even has a god damn fadeout. the art is alright but as a flash maker it annoys me. if it was proper flash with vectors i would have praised it. i estimate the file size would have been at around 100 KiB, including audio, and the visuals would have been flawless even on a 4K monitor.
>> Anon 53265 It's pretty good if you move away ~20ft and squint
>> Anon 53271 >># Well again,i had to convert,next time they're probably gonna naturally export in flash,fixing yer complaints.
>> Anon 53273 >># thank you and please do come again if that's true
>> Anon 53285 Animation is pretty solid, but why not just have it loop the one section instead of having a blank screen at the last 1 or 2 frames?
>> Anon 53289 >converted from MP4 it's shit
>> Anon 53318 The head's outline is rather inconsistent. And the sound is... strange, but appropriate for a goo girl I guess.
>> Anon 53319 You got a link to that friend of yours so I can compare this to other stuff he does?
>> Jesus 53380 this is decent if this is your friend's first anim then he has a future in drawing porn
>> Anon 54833 A little chunky.
>> mr. meeseeks 54871 Pretty good. Just needs a cum scene and a soundless version and your friend could be the next big hentai artist.