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Age: 110.01d Health: 0% Posters: 13 Posts: 16 Replies: 14 Files: 1+2
>> Anonymous 13sep2017(we)07:52 No.53247 OP P1
Friend made this,tell me if you think it's shit.
It looks a bit chunky because i converted from MP4
[IMG] googirl_anim_1.swf (9.78 MiB)
622x926, Uncompressed. 911 frames, 60 fps (00:15).
Ver6, AS1/AS2. Network access: No. Text: No.
Bitmaps: No. Audio: Yes. Video: Yes.
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>> Anonymous 13sep2017(we)08:47 No.53248 A P2R1
>>53247
lines around the head area morph too erratically
>> Anonymous 13sep2017(we)09:20 No.53249 B P3R2
There has to be better sound available. Otherwise, just make a cum scene and you'll be great.
Just...god that noise.
>> Anonymous 13sep2017(we)09:53 No.53250 C P4R3
I think the sound is okay for a goo girl. Lines could be steadier on the head but I like it.
>> Anonymous 13sep2017(we)15:33 No.53255 D P5R4
take one full cycle and make it loop, will cut down on the filesize like 95%
>> Anonymous 13sep2017(we)15:57 No.53256 E P6R5
well for starters it's a movie. could have been cut down to just 1 repeat on loop, saving 90% of
the file size by the looks of it. it even has a god damn fadeout.
the art is alright but as a flash maker it annoys me. if it was proper flash with vectors i would
have praised it. i estimate the file size would have been at around 100 KiB, including audio, and
the visuals would have been flawless even on a 4K monitor.
>> Anonymous 13sep2017(we)19:20 No.53265 F P7R6
It's pretty good if you move away ~20ft and squint
>> Anonymous 13sep2017(we)23:04 No.53271 OP P8R7
>>53256
Well again,i had to convert,next time they're probably gonna naturally export in flash,fixing yer
complaints.
>> Anonymous 14sep2017(th)00:37 No.53273 E P9R8
>>53271
thank you and please do come again if that's true
>> Anonymous 14sep2017(th)08:02 No.53285 G P10R9
Animation is pretty solid, but why not just have it loop the one section instead of having a blank
screen at the last 1 or 2 frames?
>> Anonymous 14sep2017(th)14:27 No.53289 H P11R10
>converted from MP4
it's shit
>> Anonymous 15sep2017(fr)14:57 No.53318 I P12R11
The head's outline is rather inconsistent. And the sound is... strange, but appropriate for a goo
girl I guess.
>> Anonymous 15sep2017(fr)14:57 No.53319 I P13
You got a link to that friend of yours so I can compare this to other stuff he does?
>> Jesus 17sep2017(su)11:29 No.53380 J P14R12
this is decent
if this is your friend's first anim
then he has a future in drawing porn
>> Anonymous 6nov2017(mo)14:07 No.54833 K P15R13
A little chunky.
>> mr. meeseeks 8nov2017(we)04:05 No.54871 L P16R14
Pretty good. Just needs a cum scene and a soundless version and your friend could be the next big
hentai artist.
