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>> Diagod 102747 Faye Valentine Captured v1.0 New Faye Valentine Flash game (version 1.0) [IMG] FV-1.swf (2.51 MiB) 900x500, Compressed (Deflate). 240 frames, 24 fps (00:10). Ver15, AS3. Network access: Text: Yes. Bitmaps: Yes. Audio: Yes. Video: <METADATA> [find in archive]
>> Anon 102751 Good find! Or did you make it? If you did some feedback: Skin or nipple color is off. Either her skin is darkened by the room but then the pink nipple is too bright, or no such light effect was intended in which case her skin is too dark compared to the nipple.
>> Diagod 102757 Thanks for the feedback, I will post an updated version.
>> Anon 102771 Not bad but if you want to improve the animation then I suggest this. Humans have joints, fat and muscle. So moving them would bring it to life. If you anchor her butt and shoulder fat to the floor but move the body then she looks less like a floating paper cut-out, then her hair that's touching the floor should stay on the floor and the hair on her head should move with the head, arch her neck and lower back depending on ho deep the thrust is. She can't move her hands but moving the shoulders a bit would make her reaction stronger. Like if you touch someone who is ticklish, they will recoil away from the touch. And if someone cums sometimes their hips twitch, toes curl, shoulders shrug, eyes squint, lips tighten. Hope this helps.
>> Diagod 102773 Thanks, I was about to post v1.5 before I saw this. I’ll keep this in mind when working on v2.0.
>> Anon 102999 ah, version 1, still half way decent compared to some stuff, at least the art quality is good.